BEST FRIENDS FOREVER.. MaNanBir FF ( UPDATED PART 37 /pg143) 8/5

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Hello people.. m again back with my another ranting to torture u.. Actually it was just came to my mind during my java period in college.. So u can understand how much attentive i m in my classes 😉. So its just a thought. If u like it then i ll proceed . Its basically on MaNanBir, here it goes...

~~ BEST FRIENDS FOREVER ~~
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PART 1

"HELLO !!! Hello.."
"Ummm hello"
"Hey where r u? We r getting late. come fast to pick me up"
no sound from other side.
"He...ll...oo..ooo" shouted.
"hmmm yah..."
"What the hell is this and by d way where is that monster?"
"ummm"
" What ummm??? R u ready ? guys we r in conference call. so i need answers from both of u."
"kya all india radio.. Subha subha tera channel start ho jata hai. mute volume kar na and..."
"and let us sleep"
"Guyzzz whats wrong with u? we r already late. N If u ve forgotten we have chemistry test in 1 hr. So get up and pick me in 1/2 hr."
Again no replied from other sides but little sound of snoring is cumming.
" U idiots,,,again u r sleeping.. disgusting guys.. okkk then sleep i ll go by myself... bye" hanged up the call frustratingly.
"Mom i m leaving"
"but let them come na first.." mom replied
" do u really think tht they wll b here in 1/2 hr?? then u r highly mistaken coz they r still sleeping."
"They must b very tired studying whole night fr test. poor guyss!!" mom said.
"seriously??? like seriously maa??? whatever,, driver kaka.. please get d car fast.. these two idiots na... Aaiyaappa.. kya karun inka main!!!" sighed a deep breadth.

------ P O V-----
ohhh i m sorry.. let me introduce myself..
I m Nandini Moorthy. studied in SPACE Academy of science n arts. I m in science grade ..11th standard. I am staying with my mom as my dad is in navy and he has to live out fr his job.
And now i m vry angry with my two idiot friends.. Cabir and Manik.

Cabir Diwan-.. cool good looking guy with great sense of humor. stayed with his mother as his father is in navy like me. we r close family friends. so we r friends from our kinder garden school.
Manik Malhotra-... The most handsome guy of our class as well as our school.. A guy whose life is a closed diary and the key is in my hand only. He is like coconut.. rough arrogant outside but soft sweet inside. In this world there is only me n Cabir with whom he is being himself.
He is d only heir of Malhotra group of industries,a very big n prestigious name of d city.. His parents r alwys busy in their respective works.. They have everything but time for him. So me n Cabir r his obly family he considered. He is vry close to my mom. She tho even littrly pampered him. Sometime time i was bcm clueless whose mom actually she is !!!
So we r Best Friends Forever.. But this was not the thing that we were friends from d begging. At d very first I hated Manik. we were always on each other's neck. But as time passed we came close to each other. we started understanding each other. and since our 6th grade we three bcm inseparable friends.. Our whtsapp group name is 'MaNanBir'..
MAnik..NAndini..caBIR.. d awesome three some..
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so guyss let me knw should I continue wth ths carp or not.. pardon fr grammatical mistakes n typos.






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Edited by musicialtie - 9 years ago

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Thanks a lot guyz liking my writing and appreciating me to continue..😊 so here is the 2nd part. hope u ll like...

PART 2

IN SCHOOL

"Hey.. you alone. where is Manik? Isnt he coming today?" Ailya asked me as I entered in class.
"Re tumne to aate hi first Manik ka naam ka mala japne start dia ? Hey mata rani kya hoga in logo ka" Navya replied.
"Aree Dumdo.. today she is planning to express her feelings to Manik thats y she is excited. But where is d man of the earth Nandini?" Mukti asked me.

-------POV-----
let me introduce them..

Aliya Roy.. cute barbie doll of our class . she is a fashionista.. And has a big crush on Manik. from past three years she is trying on Manik but Manik kept ignoring.

Mukti Vardhan-- Tomboy but quite girlish in heart. Nice girl. good friend.

Navya Naveli-- A cute simple small town girl from Patna..came here in Mumbai fr studies and stayed in girls hostel. and good friend of mine. and has a little crash on Cabir.. I guess.
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"I dont knw and I dont want to knw bout them.." I replied with very irritated tone and head towards my sit.

"ishe kya hua?? Itne gusse kun hai?" Navya worriedly asked.

"Settle down class" Our class teacher Chemistry sir entered in our class and ordered us to get ready fr the test.

"May we coming sir?"

"ohh u two.. so early!! m surprised." chem teacher turned his head towards the entrance n said.

"Thank you sir" they proudly chukled.

"So early.. for the next class.." sir again said. and wth this whole class started laughing on them.

"Ohh actually sir.. When we were in our way to school we saw a injured boy crying on d road. Soo... we just helped him to get medicated and dropped him to his place. Thats y we were late fr class sir. And U have taught us to be kind and helpful to d need one. " Cabir said making a very innocent face..

"toh... sir we just abide by ur lessons only to b good. " its time fr Manik.

-----my POV ----
"bullshit... Dramebazs ...lairs .. helping or sleeping !!!"
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"okkk okk get in and next time dont b late . I wont allow ok" chem sir permitted them in d class and started writing test questions on d board.

Entering the room Cabir N Manik winked me signalling their victory over our very rude chem teacher..

"IDIOTS" ths was d all i could say that time..

"What d hell man !! " Manik said rudely seeing Navya sited beside me " you Navya leave.. its our place"..

Basically we three were sitting together from the very first day of our friendship , me in between them.

Today as I am angry with them so I simply asked Navya to sit with me.

"You Madhubala ji.. sunai nahi diya.. leave our place." Cabir taunted Navya.

"Guyz dont create a scene and move to next row " I told them with lots of anger in my eyes.

"But we always sit together" They plead me so innocently..
---------my POV----
"awwaaa how could I stay angry wth my these two sweetie pies" But no.. this is not my concern right now.
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"Then u should pick me early and came with me . Now move and start giving test" I replied with a very hard tone.

"TEST!!!!" they literately shouted in chorus.

"We cant pass Nandu. please . If u want to punish us Thn do whatever u wished but not like that. please..." Manik requested,

"Aree meri Mugambi... jitna marna hai mar le but hum logo ko tere sath baithne de nehi to fail ho jayenge aur yeh kharush chemistry sir hum dono ko Hcl me dubake mar denge." Cabir started his emotional drama.
--- POV----
"ufff these guys r na unbelievable.. Aaiyappaaa what do u do with them..."
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I sighed and requested Navya to sit next row and allow them to sit with me they sitted now n then with a big smile, as
usual me in between them
.

Our whole class were well known about our deep friendship.

The test went well and my two idiots were just copy pasting my answers.

Next two periods were our free periods as our math sir was absent. I was really angry with them and avoid them. They ve tired zillion times to cheer me up by pleading for forgiveness. But I was stubborn..
They could bear everything but my silence. They loved me like true friends.

So i was ignoring them and chit chatting with my girls group Navya ,Mukti,Aliya.

Suddenly I heard some guitar tune n turned back toward d sound n it was my monster ( I called Manik by this name coz he was used to bully me in our childhood. then I started calling him
Monster Manik. Firstly he was sad wth ths name but now he just loved when i called him Monster) with his guitar.

------------ POV--------
ohhh... let me give u a piece of information.. Manik is a very good guitarist and damm good singer as well. He is d lead vocalist and guitarist of our school music band. Cabir played drum superbly. He is also in our musical club along with Ailya who played Keyboard, Mukti d guiterist and Dhruv.

Ohhh shit.. Dhruv. !!!!!!!!!
Dhruv Vedant.. a very shy , nice guy of our class. He has proposed me in our 10th class but I politely rejected and stayed friends not because he was bad guy but I ve nt enough time and concerned for anyone without my two very own
fools my BFFs.. my ManBir. and they r too much protective and possessive about me.

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As soon as I turned my face I saw my Joker Cabir was ready with his drum sticks using d desk as drums and my Monster with his guiter started singing for me ...

Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi...
Gham Baat Le Tu Apne
Humse Tu Le Hasee
Ho Gaye Hum Abh Tere...
Tu Ho Gayee Apni
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi...
.
Cabir hold me twirled me as dance gesture. and started dancing with me.

Jawan Dil Ki Rahon Mein
Jaise Khilti Hai Kali
Tere Hoton Pe Basee
Aisi Halki Si Hasee...
Jawan Dil Ki Rahon Mein
Jaise Khilti Hai Kali
Tere Hoton Pe Basee
Aisi Halki Si Hasee,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

but i ve freed myself forcefully from his hold...

Phir Kyoon Chupp Rahi Ho
Dil Ki Baatein To Bataoo
Goom Soom Se Na Raho Tum
Abh Jaana Muskuraoo...

Haan Haan, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi...
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi...

Then Manik stopped holding my waist from back and turned me to him and started singing ...

Maana Humse Ho Gayee...
Ek Choti Si Khataa...
Hans Do Na Tum Zaraa...
Do Na Humko Tum Sazaa...

Then both Cabir n Manik cutely holding their ears asked forgiveness...

Maana Humse Ho Gayee...
Ek Choti Si Khataa...
Has Do Na Tum Zaraa...
Do Na Humko Tum Sazaa...

---POV----
Aaiyaapaaa... they were so cute.. how could I stay angry so long with these two inseparable parts of my life...
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so I finally gave in and smiling started dancing wth them side hugging both my ManBir... my best friends forever...

Tum Jo Has Pade To
Abh Hum Bhi Muskurayein
Aao Mil Ke Saath Gaayein
Dil Se Dil Bhi Milayein...

They became so happy seeing me smiling and dancing like they have got some lottery.

Hey Hey, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Hey, Zara Muskura De, Muskura De
Zara Muskura De, Aye Khushi
Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Hey Hey, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Hey Aye, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu
Hey Hey, Musu Musu Hasi, Deu Malai Lai
Musu Musu Hasi Deu...

And they assured me for not letting me down and lovingly we shared a tight group hug...
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So guyz let me knw hws this and pardon for typos n grammatical mistakes.. critics and suggestions are welcome happily.


Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago

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