BEST FRIENDS FOREVER.. MaNanBir FF ( UPDATED PART 37 /pg143) 8/5

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

So cute... loved the waking up,Manik seems back to his cute self but hopefully he will admit what was bothering him soon... loved Cabir...Aalya...😕 Looking forward tot the next update😊

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ushmaaa

@ushmaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

i m loving it a lot..

cabir the cupid as always..

manan and cabir are so adorable..

plz cont soon

thanx for the pm

it's amazing..last part was awesome..group enjoying..loved it

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#463

loved it totally manan and cabir was too good
hehe
song was awesome
please do continue
bye sumi

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Tanvi

@manan58

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Wow..

Superb.. Manan cute mrning convo..

So sweet😛

Awesome

Cont soon.. Thnks fr pm

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Ananya Nair

@Manan_Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Awesome..My fav till now..Loved how they cuddle to each other..

Cont soon..

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: ajulalani
Hey u r doing great job til now... but idk y but from last 2 parts i feel like i m loosing some sort of touch from ur story, u should try to add some Pure Romance which makes us also feels like butterflies in our stomach and plz take manan into 2 stage along thier cute fights and as our manik is so hot so he should act to b like stubborn :* I wil appriciate if u will consider it.
sorry dear if i hurt u its my little opinion whch i felt about it. and plz upload parts soon :)

HEY DEAR THANKS FOR UR COMMENT. ITS REALLY FEEL GOOD TO RECEIVE TRUE CRITICISM. AND ABOUT UR WISH TOH LET ME TELL U MY SIDE OF THINKING..

"AS THEY R BFFs TOH STAGE 2 BOLD ROMANCE ALL OF SUDDEN IS QUITE IMPOSSIBLE FOR THEM. ACTUALLY I DONT WANT TO SKIP SHOWING THE TRUE ESSENCE BETWEEN THEM. SO AS I VE DECIDED TO CONTINUE THE FF. THATS Y I AM TAKING IT BIT BY BIT. HOPE YOU WILL APPRECIATE ME.

BUT DONT WORRY BOLD MANIK AND ROMANCE ARE ON THE WAY.. U WILL GET IT SOON.. TILL THEN HAVE PATIENCE. "

and keep saying your true words. it means a lot.😊 i wish i will fulfill ur wish soon😳

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jai18

@jai18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

That was so awesome! Definitely love is in the air ;)

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Aasha

@PrettyAaShuu

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

So Beautiful update...!! Awesome...!!

Waiting for next update...!!

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Sana

@MaNanmatic_Sana

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#469

hmm... last one seems a little unrealistic...

how can they both get so cool... so fast

don't mind...

I felt u were safe😆

May be I am wrong...

May be u have something in mind

But if I am right ... don't play it safe...

I was leaving forum for today

But I stopped to read urs...

Good luck...

Write without expecting how ppl will react...

u shud not be modest in writing what u feel😉

Stop "hope u like it"😳

Hope my comment brings the best out of u😃

Edited by MaNanmatic_Sana - 10 years ago

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: MaNanmatic_Sana
hmm... last one seems a little unrealistic...
how can they both get so cool... so fast

don't mind...
I felt u were safe😆
May be I am wrong...
May be u have something in mind
But if I am right ... don't play it safe...

I was leaving forum for today
But I stopped to read urs...

Good luck...

Write without expecting how ppl will react...

u shud not be modest in writing what u feel😉
Stop "hope u like it"😳
Hope my comment brings the best out of u😃

thanks sana... yes i have some plans. hope it will turn out good.

but most of the readers want manan to romance so i ve to take it as little fast but in limit. i dont want to loose the essence of true friendship too. thats y trying to take it bit by bit.

Thanks for your words. even I wish it wil bring out the best of me😉

keep motivating like this. love u