BEST FRIENDS FOREVER.. MaNanBir FF ( UPDATED PART 37 /pg143) 8/5 - Page 34

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Confession and more parts of manan romancing
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Confession and also about other friends too and then u can continue with all of them in COLLEGE .and make it as a second part..please continue soon
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Plz post d new part i cnt w8 😕
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Confession and more parts of manan romancing ...and balancing friendship and love...
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please continue...
i want the reaction on cabir, alya,navyaa..
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Plz post new part m eagrly w8ng''
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RECAP
MaNan romance.
MaNanBir cute fish talk.
Manik said Nandini to get ready to visit "Manik la la land"

PART 17




"Manik la la land" ?

----Manik Pov - - (with smrik)
Nandini murthy. . It s high tym we are playing and being played along with each other.
So from now on you will experience some thing u ve nt experienced before.
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9 am.
My home
I was getting ready for school when I got cabir's msg to get out as they were waiting for me.
Then I walked out of my house I saw cabir standing out resting himself on the car and Manik was on driving seat. I went near and cabir came forward to hug me.
I whispered in cabir's ear " what's wrong with this monster. ? "
But he said even He was not sure as he was also facing his weird behavior.

"Guy's gale wale mil lia toh shall we move. ?" Manik yelled to us.

We sighed and got into the car.
In the whole way Manik did not utter a single word as he was thinking about something deep.

----Nandini pov - - -
Aaiyaapa toh that is his la la land!!!!
its not manik but monster's lala land. he was behaving like monster only.
Urrggg.
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"Maaanik aaj inta Chup chap kyun hai tu.? Aaj toh Nandini ne dantaa v nehi.? Toh fir.?" Cabir suspiciously asked Manik.

Manik didn't answered but just gave a cold look to me through the back view mirror.
I was totally confused seeing his blank face.
---Nandini pov - - -
Aaiyaapa what's Manik upto. ? his eyes are not giving me positive vibes,
"Aiyaapa Manik land!!! Mujhe pahele sehi malum hona chahiye tha that it's not manik's but monster's land. Huhh"
Nandini calm down.breadth in breadth out..
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We reached school. And Manik started walking leaving me n cabir behind.

"Yehh aaj ishe ho kya gaya hai. ? Why he is behaving so strange. ? Did you do anything. ?" Cabir asked me.

"Why should I do anything. ?" I replied.
Then Manik realised that he was walking alone then he turned back and shouted " guys what.? Don't u feel coming. ? Or else I will ask principal to move the class over here for u guys.?"

That's not the way Manik talked but the monster did.

We in unison " Monster Returns"

Manik - " What? " whatever? Cabir tu chal raha hai. ?"

Cabir - " yaa...yaahh let's go Nandu"

Nandini - " u push ahead I am coming with Navya. .

Cabir - " Navya. ? "

Nandini - " Ohh she has msgd me to wait for her in the school gate. She will be here in minutes. "

Manik - " Cabir then let's go. Let her wait for Madhubala. "

I was in hell shock listening him. It was the first time he didn't argued for not coming with them but wait for some one else. Even cabir got confused with his sudden change.

---Cabir pov - - -
Kal to yeh dono 'akhon hi aakhon me ishare hote hai' ga rahe the and today yeh ulti ganga kaise bahene lagi??
Kuch toh fir se garbar hai.
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Manik didn't know why started avoiding me with no reason. As time passes my irritation increasing gradually.

----Nandini pov - -
What's wrong with him. ? Why he is avoiding me. ?
In morning he was toh behaving so sweet tht I would got diabetes and now he is showering bitter melons (karelas).
Aaiyaapa his mood swings na I told you surely can challenge a pregnant women.
Sighed...
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After three boring periods Raghav sir asked us to report him in auditorium. So we left for audi and again surprisingly Manik dragged Cabir and Abhi with him totally forgetting me. I didn't understood that he was doing all this in tension or intension.
I went with my girls group.
Then Navya asked me " Nandini sab thik hai na.?"

"Hmm Yahh sab thik hai. ? Why r u asking. ?"

Navya - " nehi Oo actually I saw manik is behaving strange with you toh hum ne puchlia k kahi tum dono ne jhagra toh nehi kia Firse. ?"

"No ayesa kuch nehi hai.. You r thinking too much. Let's go."
But my own words did not even satisfied me.

Auditorium

Raghav sir - so guys today all of u r going for ur respective shopping. Every one is going in each group or only one I am leaving this to you. So guys tell me what have you decided.

Abhi- " Sir me and Mukti we will go for shopping. "

Raghav sir- "cool. And Dhruv Aliya. ?"

Dhruv - " Sir we are also going together to the decorators."

Raghav sir- "and what's about you guys. ? Again going together right. ?(pointing us)"

Cabir - " yes sir.. koi shaq?"

Manik - " No sir.. We won't. I mean only me and cabir are going and they will take rest and prepare the guest list."
My anger mercury level then reached its peak value.

" Okk then .. guys you go ahead and others plz do your respective works. And all should be report me within 2 hrs ok. " Saying this sir left.

"Okk let's go cabir" Manik told and started walking towards the parking.

I tried my level best to control my anger but in vain and suddenly I shouted "Manik" making all including me shocked.

"Manik" he stopped and I hold his jacket collar and dragged him towards the backyard.

Manik- "Nandini leave what are you doing? Are you gone mad? Nandini every one is staring. Plz leave na. Nandini..."

I replied nothing but dragging him with more force.

Then finally I freed him reaching near the backyard bush.

"Pagal ho gayi ho kya. ? " Manik asked me straighting his jacket.

"Yahh ho gayi hu pagal. ? Toh. ? What? What you will gonna do. ? You gonna punch me? or what.? Haan ? Tell na.. " I yelled .

"What's wrong with you .? Why r u shouting like a fool.?" Manik held my arms and twisted it on my back And continued " Are you out of your mind ? "

"What's wrong with me.? What's wrong with you manik Malhotra. ?" I said forcefully freeing myself from his grip and continued " you only told me to get ready for Manik land. And from morning you are behaving like monster only. Then.? Why did you lie to me bolo. ? Tell na Manik. " I suddenly hit his chest.

He became more furious with my gesture and held my arms again even in more force and said "as I am a monster. You only named me that right. ? Then I don't think you should have any problem with it miss Nandini Murthy. ?" With that Manik tightening his grip to make marks of his fingers on my arms.

"Manik it's hurting.." I winced in pain.

Bt he was in no mood to melt.

"Mm..aanik " I started crying. Then suddenly he left me with a jerk and walked away from there without looking back. I was in hell shocked. I stood there with Pain, hurt ,confusion and might be hidden love in my heart.

All I could feel was "Manik my heart hurts".


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Thanks a lot guys for giving your valuable suggestions and responses... your suggestions are really helping me. so as per the majority count I am not gonna end this ff soon. love u loads guys,,😊
sorry for typos and grammatical mistakes.. sorry for the chotu update. next is coming soon. stay tuned...
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow wat an update
loved it
wat is manik upto
cont soon
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Oye yeh kya ho gaya why manik is behaving like a monster ab ho kya raha hai yeh cabir where R U plz solve this...poor nandu us bechari ko toh pta bhi nahi ki hua kya hai
cont soon
Ab toh plz jaldi hi update karna can't wait
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie345

Plz don't end it too soon. ..u cn mk thm cnfess bt plzz don't end it...I m luking frwrd to many cute romantic funny nd friendship scenes evn aftr confession of manan...this is my 2nd favourite ff in this forum...don't end it dear...I want..no..I guess...we want more mananbir. ...


thank you dear for making my ff in ur fav list.
I m touched. and dont worry i m not gonna end it soon.
Actually my semester is knocking so i ve loads of pressures of studies,
But receiving the responses i ve decided to balance my studies and ff...love u😊

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