BEST FRIENDS FOREVER.. MaNanBir FF ( UPDATED PART 37 /pg143) 8/5 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Wow super nice read the whole story in one go loved it plzzx add me to ur buddy list and pm me the next part
Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i m in luv wth ur story...
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
finally an update..
enjoying ur updates very much..
plz cont. soon
ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Recap-
cultural event over.
Mukti Aliya Nandini Navya were talking about Cabir and Manik.
MaNanBir 's discussion about Aliya in car.
Nandini asked Manik to be friendly with Aliya.
Cabir went for attending his cousin's marriage.


PART 7


Next morning,

I called Manik to wake him up and "the number u ve dialed is busy. kindly try after some time." continuously this machinary voice was coming just to irritate me.

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"What the.!!!!. whom he is talking with? so late!!! Oh!! that means moster woke up already from his beauty sleep.!!! Grrt... but wait .. He woke up and that to witout my call !!! Its nice."
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I smiled and msg him "Good morning monster. get ready and come out of your den to pick me up at 9 am sharp."

IN CAR, WAY TO COLLEGE.

"So..Mr. Mosnter !! you are growing up. Hmmm"

Manik-(smiriking) " Tujhe aaj pata pata chala? so.. slllooow."

Nandini- "Idiot morning se tera ph busy kun aa raha tha? I was calling u so long."

Manik- "ohh!! Morning!! Aliya called to wake me up."

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WHAT!!!! What did just he say?? Aliya called him to wake him up? !!!
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Nadini- "ohh Sounds good."

But my own sound did not sound good to my ears. I did not why.

After that I spoke nothing. Manik was saying about Cabir , His music , Exam preparations, etc etc.. But it could not reach to my mind through ears. I was became deaf only I could sense was "Aliya woke him up "

SCHOOL PARKING

Manik- "Oyee whats wrong with you? Why so silent yaar?"

Nandini- "Ummm,, Nothing .. lets go we are gating late" saying this I headed towards class leaving a confused Manik behind.

IN CLASS ROOM

As soon as we entered Aliya came forward to hug Manik. Manik in a reply lightly hugged her. I did not know but just could not stand that scene and silently sat on my place.
Manik sat beside me and Aliya beside him. I MEANT , Manik was now in between us.

--------POV----
BETWEEN US!!!! ufff not again..
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During the whole class Aliya was blabbering her rom-com-lovey-dubby idiotic talks to make me more irritated and my monster surprisingly was listing her silly words OR NOT.
whatever.. after the class was our free period and every one started or continued with their group chats even that Fevicol Aliya too..

I did not know why but I was restless. I felt so uneasy. I could not figure it out but getting more n more irritated. I felt some one just hitting me inside.

Not any more.. So to over come with this uneasiness I went out the class room and joined Mukti who was standing in the corridor. We were talking about this and that. Then Mukti got a call and she excused herself to attend the call.

I was then standing alone resting my hands on the corridor railings and boarded on a train of deep thoughts. 'ALONE'.
Yes I was alone. For the first time I was standing alone without my besties. It would not happen ever in my 7 years. Cabir went to attend her cousin's wedding. and Manik was busy attending his newly so called girlfriend.
And 'ME'.. all alone. A lone unreasonable tear came out of my eyes. I did not know why I was crying. Might be My BFFs were not with me to rescue my loneliness.. I sighed a deep breadth.

"Hey whatsapp" I felt a pat on my back. Without looking back I could feel who was the owner of that.

Manik- "What are you doing here?"

"NOTHING" I replied.

Manik-"Areee.. do u even realized k from morning you have only used this NOTHING word."

"When I am doing nothing toh what I am supposed to reply without NOTHING." My words seemed little rude to him and me as well.

Manik-"Par Nandu... kya hua? R u ok?? "

Then I realized and quickly replied " Ohhh Actually I am missing Cabir. 'and YOU'( in inaudible tone)"

Manik-"yaap.. Even I am also missing Cabir."

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Really ?? like really you are missing him?? I dont think so. You toh happily stick with your Favicol.
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Manik-"Nandu!!! again you lost. hua kya hai tujhe? tell na baba.. plzz"

Without replying anything I just looked in to his eyes. His deep dark brown eyes. His eyes were so beautiful. so thoughtful. His eyes were full of intense and alluring. His eyes were so innocent. His heart's mirror was his eyes. Sometime his eyes were so easy to read like first grade subjects and sometime so hard so complicated like maths. His eyes depicted his unsaid words of his heart. I did not knw why but I felt I was sinking gradually in to his deep eyes. His attractive drak brown eyes.

"Nandu!!" and I felt him shaking me holding my shoulder to bring me back from my enamor of thoughts "Whats wrong with you?"

"Nothing, actually I have some work in library. Then C.S. class. I will catch you later." saying this I walked away from him avoid any eye contact.

------POV-----
shit!!!! was I thinking about his eyes some time back?? whats wrong with me!! I ve never thought like this before. Shit.. Shit.

Aaiyaapa seriously whats wrong with me. They said true. "IDLE MIND IS DEVIL'S WORKSHOP". No I should stop thinking these craps and better concentrate on anything else.
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I spend a relaxed time executing Html programs in my C.S. period. and I felt really fresh and free from those silly useless thoughts.
I came to our class room for searching Manik to return home. But he was not there. Then I asked Mukti and she asked me to go Canteen to find him. so I headed towards Canteen.

As soon as I entered I saw Manik resting his head on Aliya's shoulder and her fingers were combing his hairs. And the very next thing I found myself shouted "MAAANIK" making all there present raising their eyebrows on me.
Then I ve realized what had I done just now and to change the questioning glares of others I asked with little bit lower but hard tone" Manik you are here. I was searching for you all over the school and Whats going on here??"

Before Manik could answer me Aliya spoke "Ohhh!!! actually Manik has a headache so I am trying to give him some massage."

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You fevicol.. you dumbo.. you are his headache . cant you get it?
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Then I pulled one chair sat in front of him ,took his hand and tangled our fingers and concernedly asked "Several headache?? " He nod yes looking into my eyes and cutely shaking his head .

" Ok.. lets go home. A cup of black coffee and Rose mom's head massage. ohhkkk??".
Then he cutely asked "And...??".

I knew what he wanted to hear with this 'and'.
"And" I smiled and said "And my lap."

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whenever he was sick he used to sleep resting his head on my or My mom's lap. And I used to caresses his hairs and he fall asleep like a cute baby. Some time I really felt bad for him as his parents were not giving little attention to him.
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Then His that dark brown eyes which were looking pale some mintues back started glittering a little with happiness.

"But Manik baby.. you have promised me to take me for movie today." Aliya dramatically told.

------POV-----
Aaiyaappaa... what the hell she is saying?? Manik has headache and she is asking to take her to movie !!! Is she mad or what??
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"Per Aliya.. I dont think I..." Manik was about to say her something but " No He wont. Cant you see he is not well. He has headache and you are asking him to take you for silly movie to give him more headache ?" I said stopping him in middle.

Aliya-" But Nandini Manik will take me. Won't you baby?"

Nandini- "NO HE WON'T. Do u get that?" I retorted in a very strong tone and hold Manik's hand and literally dragged him from the canteen to the car and took the driving seat and drove back to my home..

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So guys thats it for now, and i wish U will like it. pardon for typos and grammatical mistakes. critics and suggestions are whole heartily welcome.. stay tune for next. 😊


Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
part 7 was awesome...👏
ohoo...nandu is so jealous...i am loving this nandu...yaar...😉
pls continue soon...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Ah Han.. Jealous nandu.. A treat.. Haha
It ws soo awesome.. So u r finally makin manan.. Thts great..
Bt why is manik spending so much time wth alya..?
Bt it's k.. Cont soon.. It ws great
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
aww i like how the story is proceeding ...especially now that Nandu is starting to understand the change in her feelings...from friendship to something more... and the best is...Jealous NANDU ..👍🏼

but yaaar yeh MANIK ...Nadu ko comapny dene ke badle ALIYA ke saath kyu hai 😒...

Nandu kya muje b gussa aa raha hai 😡

but niceee concept ...and story ...Musicaltie 👏 ..pl continue sooon ...

-Mini
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Nice update...love this jealous nandini...so manan are going to be more than frds..but why is manik spending time with alya? Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
hahah jealous nandu treat 2 watch
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
nandu is getting jealous from Alia so U R making manan a couple good
Awsm update
Cont soon

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