Abhigya SS:You Are My Safe Heaven [COMPLETED]

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Hey Abhigyaians i am here with a new Abhigya story on the current track.I really like this current track as we all know after this our love couple will come more close and i hope Abhi will realize his feeling towards his fuggy soon.So i wrote this story how i wanted to see Abhigya after this track.please like and review if you like this story.
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ABHIGHYA SS:YOU ARE MY SAFE HEAVEN


CHAPTER:1

Hopeless,Regret,Slef lothing and Guilt are the feeling the great Rockstart Abhishekh Prem Mehra was feeling as he sat outside of the O.T clutching his wife's manglasutra in his hands covered with blood while his wife was struggling between life and death inside the O.T.Never in his life Abhi felt this pain now he is feeling.Even when their parents died he didn't go throught this much pain from which he felt like dying every seconds from the moment his fuggy when limb in his arms with a painful yet a content smile on her lips.As he looked at his bloody hands he felt like throwing up at the fact that it was none other than his fuggy's blood his hands are covered with.Abhi still can't believe that the girl whom he married for revenge,used to insult and humilate at every chance he got took a bullet for him.He can't help but remebered the worst nightmare of his life which happened before a couple of hours whenever he looked at his bloody hands and pragya's manglasutra.
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BEFORE 2 HOURS:
Once Abhi entered his house after giving a reality check to Tanu he immediately went to his room and messaged Purab to meet him there.After fe minutes purab entered his room closing the door.
''Abhi where were you?''asked Purab as Abhi sat on his bed.
''Purab that not imporatant now.First let think how to rescue pragya from the goon''said Abhi and Purab nodded hearing the seriousness in his voice.
''Ok Abhi.But whatever plan you have in your mind we must excicute carefully without putting Pragya Di's life in danger''said purab with concern for his Di.
''I know Purab.Just now i talked to comissionor and he agreed to send us a back up.First we must make the police surround the palce and others will entry the palce with us .Then we will rescue pragya and make sure the head of the kidnappers gets arrest as i want to know why he kidnapped pragya thinking she is Bulbul ''said Abhi and purab nodded.
''But Abhi are you 100 % sure about this plan .''asked purab.
''I am purab.we don't have any other choice now.''said Abhi rubbing his face with his hands.Just then his phone rang and Abhi took it from his pant pocket and attend it.
''Hello sir .Is everything ready?''asked Abhi to the comissionor who was at the other end of the line.
''Yes Mr.Abhi we have everything well prepared and plan we can put the plan in action once you reach her ''said the comissionor .
''Ok sir i will be there with purab in 20 minutes''said Abhi and disconnected the call .Abhi then stood up from the bed and looked at purab.
''Purab we have to go.Where is bulbul?''asked Abhi pocketing his phone.
''Abhi she is with dadi ''said Purab .
''Ok then i am sure dadi will take care of her lets go now''said Abhi and both of them left the house.
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Pragya was sitting on the chairs tied with rope as tears continued to roll down her cheeks remembering the moments she spend with Abhi .She felt like a fool for even thinking to propose Abhi as she know he will never return her feelings as he was so eager to get rid of her from his life so that he can live happily with his Tanu.she felt like stupid for dreaming about a future with Abhi which will never become reality.She must have realized she is not made for a prince charming or happily everyafter.
''Good evening pragya gi''came a voice breaking pragya from her thoughts.She turned and looked at Neel who was smiling at her with a evil smile on his face .Pragya gave him a glare and thought of punching his face.
''Arrey pragya gi why are crying.You know i am very happy as my Bulbul agreed to come here .Once she comes here we will get married and we will live happily.''said Neel with a smile but pragya kept quiet knowing there is no use in talking with him.
''But you know what my Bulbul will be very disappointed once she comes to know i am not going to leave you as i got a chance of plans last minute.I mean who will not chance their plans when someone offers to give me 50 lakhs just to make sure who will not enter you patidev's life again''said Neel and pragya looked at him with confusion.
''what are you talking about?''asked pragya.
''Oh pragya ji you are so curious .Ok i will tell you as you are going to die in 1 hours after Bulbul gets here.Well Miss.Tanu i mean your husband's pari girlfriend called me before few minutes and offers 50 lakhs to make sure you will not get back to your patidev or his house at anycost.so i am just returing a favour as she is the one who helped me in the first place to kidnap you with Aaliya''said Neel and pragya was shocked to know that Aaliya was too involved in this when she was acting like a good person now.
''But why Tanu wants to kill me when Abhishek didn't even like me?''asked pragya to herself more than to Neel.
''Hmm i don't about it pragya ji.But i am sure Tanu will be glad to explain to you''said Neel and after few seconds pragya saw Tanu coming towards them.
''Hey behanji.so how are you ?.''asked tanu with a taunt while Neel left them both alone.
''Why are you doing this Tanu ?you know well that Abhi didn't even like me so why are hell bent on troubling me?''asked pragya .
''Because you are only one getting inbetween me and Abhi and from getting us married.Thought you agreed for our marriage and i am sure dadi will not accpet it.So if you are out of Abhi's life completely we will have no problem in getting married''said Tanu and pragya got more confused.
''What the hell are you taking about ?when i arraged to your marriage?''asked pragya.
''Oh please behamjia don't start another drama.I am sure you agreed to our marriage to my parents on the lori day only to get in Abhi's good side,but i know your true colors.So i will make sure you are out of Abhi's life .Enjoy you last minutes of your life ''said Tanu and left with a evil smile while pragya sat there in shock and disbelief what she heard from Tanu .She can belive that Abhishekh will do something like this and make her a fool .Now she understood that she didn't have even a little bit of place in his life and made a desicion to bury her feeling within herself and left his life if she get out of here alive.But this moment after hearing how he fooled and broken her trust make her to think death will be more peaceful than living with this pain.
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After 45 minutes Abhi reached the palce with purab and the police which Neel wanted Bulbul to meet his and the police surrounded the place.
''Ok here is the plan half of your men will surround this place and i will enter the palce with purab with another half of your men and i want everyone from the kidnapper gang alive ok''asked Abhi and everyone nodded.
''Ok them lets go''said Abhi and they entered the place.
After 20 minutes they got 3 kidnappers and Abhi took a guy buy his collar and punched his face.
''Tell me where is my pragya otherwise i will kill you with my bare hands''said Abhi and continued to punch him.purab immediately rushed to him and try to separate him from .
''Abhi leave him .Come on Abhi do you want to kill him''asked purab but Abhi didn't even react a little to his words and continued to beat the guy.
''I will tell you ''said the guy and Abhi left him once the guy told where pragya is.
''Purab i will go and get pragya you with other make sure to get others''said Abhi.
''No Abhi i will come with you what if you are outnumbered when you reach there ?''asked purab.
''Then i will fight them or atleast die trying purab.I never didn't anything to fuggy as a pati but today none will stop me from doing my duty as a husband''said Abhi and left the place before purab could repaly.
After few minutes Abhi reached the palce where the guy told and looked for his fuggy after few seconds he spotted her and felt like his life returned to him.But seeing the condition she was in he felt like killing each and everyone who was responsible for her condition.
''Fuggy''called Abhi and pragya who sat closing her eyes ,opened it immediately hearing his voice.Pragya didn't know if he was standing there for real or its was another one of her imagination.After few seconds she saw Abhi coming towards her with slow steps.Seeing this a smile came ot her lips but the next moment its turned into a horror look aseeing Neel coming behind Abhi with a metal rod in his hand.
''Abhishekh''shouted pragya.
Abhi on the other hand started to take slow step towards pragya and when he saw her smile she gave him on the road before the kidnappers got her again and became determined to save her this time.But Abhi was confused when her smiling face turned to a horror one as she looked behind him and shouted his name.He immediately turned and caught the metal rod which Neel was ready to attack her with.Then both of them engaged in a heated fight while pragya watched it helplessly.
''Hey god please don't let Abhishekh get hurt .please think its my last wish and make sure he fine ''prayed pragya silently to god closing her eyes.After few 10 minutes Abhi gave a final punch to Neel and he rushed to pragya untieing the ropes seeing purab arrived with the police .Once he removed the rope he stood before pragya and made her stand up from the chair and wiped her tears cupping her face .
''Are you alright Fuggy?''asked Abhi as his voice became thick with emotions .But pragya who was still in disbelief of Abhi's arrival to safe her just nodded her head and Abhi pulled her into a hug shocking pragya once more.Pragya stood in his embrace without responding ,after few seconds she moved her hands from her side to respond to his hug but pushed him with all the strength in her when made Abhi to lose balanced and landed on the ground as he heard a gun shot .But the moment his blood froze Abhi saw pragya's face frown with pain as she placed her right hand on her left side and saw thick red liquid sticking to her fingering .Abhi immediately stood and caught pragya before she could hit the floor as he saw her missing her balance.Pragya who was about to hug Abhi saw Neel taking the gun from the police officer pistol holder and aimed at Abhi .But before he could pull the triger she pushed Abhi and the next momant she heard the gun shot and felt a white pain on her left side.
''Why fuggy?''asked Abhi placing her head on his lap in disbelif realizing that she took a bullet for him and touched her left chest as the blood continued wet her dress.Pragya on the other just a gave a painful yet a content smile to be with him if it was her last breath she is going to take and closed her eyes as the darkness finally engulfed her.
Abhi started to panic as she closed her eyes and caressed her face.
''Fuggy open your eyes.Come on Fuggy open your eyes ''said Abhi with despair.But the next moment he felt someone touching his shoulder and looked at purab who was standing there with tears in his eyes.
''Purab tell fuggy to open her eyes .I am sure she will listen to you as you are her pyari bhai right.''said Abhi with pain and helplessness .
''Abhi we called the ambulance and we have to take di outside so we can take her to the hospital.''said Purab and Abhi nodded taking pragya in his arms and rushed out of the place followed by purab while the police arrested Neel and others.
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Once Abhi reached outside with pragya in his arms two nurses and a wardboy reached him and helped to place her on the bed in the ambulance but Abhi still held one of her hand in his and refused to leave it.
''Sir please lets us do our work and move aside ''said a nurse who was a lady in her early 40 but Abhi just shook his head.The nurse looked at purab and he nodded in understanding.
''Abhi please let them do their work.come on''said Purab and removed his tight grip on prgya's hand and made him sit on the other side and sat beside him as the nusrses started to do the first aid.The nurse first removed Pragya's chasma and purab took it from her.Next the nurse romoved her manglasutra bofore purab could that Abhi took it and held it in a tight grip.
Once they reached the hospital pragya was immediately rushed to the O.T while purab went to take care of the procedure seeing Abhi who was sitting on the chair with a blank look on his face and he know he was not in a state to do anything.
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PRESENT:
Abhi came out the memory when he felt a hand on his shoulder and saw purab standing there with a clipboard and pen in his hand.
''Abhi sign here''said Purab giving him the hospital form Abhi keep the manglasutra in his pocket and signed the papers which purab handed.Purab on the other hand was really worried seeing his best freind state and took a seat beside him keeping a comforting hand on his shoulder.
''Abhi are you alright?''asked purab even thought he know the answer already .
''Why purab?why she saved me risking her life when i destroyed and made her life a living hell?''asked Abhi with pain in his voice.Purab wanted tell the reason to Abhi and his di's feeling to him but he stopped at the last moment as he know its not his place to reveal pragya's feeling.Just then purab's mobile rang and he looked at Abhi.
''Abhi dadi's call''said Purab .
''You explain everything purab please ''said Abhi as he didn't have the guts to speak with his dadi.Purab nodded and went to attend the call.Abhi stood up from the chair and called a nurse who was passing him.
''Excuse where is the mandhir in this hospital?''asked Abhi .
''Go straight and take left sir''said the nurse with sympathy seeing his condition.
''Thank you''said Abhi and left to Mandhir.
Once Abhi came near the mandhir he removed his shoes and kneeled down infront the ganapathi bappa and joined his hands.
''I never belived in you after my parents died and never asked you anything.But my fuggy always belived and worshipped you .So please give my fuggy back to me and i will never ask you anything in my life again.I know i did many wrongs and sins but please don't punish me by taking her from her.I will accept any punishment you give me except this.Please god i can't live with this guilt and pain if something happens to her .please save her''said Abhi as tears stared to fall from his eyes.
''Abhi''came Purab's voice and Abhi turned wiping his tears.
''Operation is over .Doctor wants to see you''said Purab and Abhi felt his heart constrict in pain fearing for the doctor's answer.

-To Be Continued.

With Love,
Scarlett.
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX


Chapter 1:Scroll up

Chapter 2:page 3

Chapter 3:page 6

Chapter 4:page 9

Chapter 5:Page 12

Chapter 6:Page 15

Chapter 7:Page 19

Chapter 8:Page 21



Edited by Scarlettkevin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful start
abhi's emotions were explained well
looking forward to more
please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: HARNIM

wonderful start

abhi's emotions were explained well
looking forward to more
please update soon

Thanks dear...Will update the next part tonight...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was amazing scarlett.. I liked the way you have explained everything.. I liked it how Abhi is starting to feel for pragya.. Hope we get to see something like this and for Pragya.. Pragya would actually smile when she would get shot being happy that abhi didn't get hurt...
Hope Pragya is fine.. Waiting for your update..😊 Great work!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG this update was awesome and really intense ...
this story is very interesting and I can't wait to read more ...Pls update soon ...
Pls PM me for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing Start. Abhis emotional state described very well. Update next part soon
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Hello there,

Um I'm not quite sure how you'll take this, but I actually really thought you have some real talent, and could potentially be really amazing if you maybe took a few matters into consideration, so I'm going to say it anyway.

The plot line seems very plausible, and your particular way of introducing a scene, is also something I thought was great - however, the multitude of errors , (spelling mistakes, grammatical mistakes, improper capitalization of words etc) make the story very difficult to read, I read two paragraphs and just couldn't go on - I think part of this is because, as you said you are updating from your mobile, and didn't really get to check your update (?) but either way it detracts from the story.

However, I really do think, that if you maybe proof-read your update a few times before you updated you'd be putting up much better quality work. Again, I apologize in advance if I have offended you, but I really thought that your work is capable of being much better if you maybe took the time to work on those kinks.

-A
Edited by advena - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apple123flower

This was amazing scarlett.. I liked the way you have explained everything.. I liked it how Abhi is starting to feel for pragya.. Hope we get to see something like this and for Pragya.. Pragya would actually smile when she would get shot being happy that abhi didn't get hurt...

Hope Pragya is fine.. Waiting for your update..😊Great work!!👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear.. glad you loved it.will update tonigh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

OMG this update was awesome and really intense ...
this story is very interesting and I can't wait to read more ...Pls update soon ...
Pls PM me for the next update

Thanks a lot honey...will update soon...

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