Abhigya SS:You Are My Safe Heaven [COMPLETED] - Page 2

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing Start. Abhis emotional state described very well. Update next part soon

Thanks dear will update soon...

Originally posted by: advena

Hello there,

Um I'm not quite sure how you'll take this, but I actually really thought you have some real talent, and could potentially be really amazing if you maybe took a few matters into consideration, so I'm going to say it anyway.

The plot line seems very plausible, and your particular way of introducing a scene, is also something I thought was great - however, the multitude of errors , (spelling mistakes, grammatical mistakes, improper capitalization of words etc) make the story very difficult to read, I read two paragraphs and just couldn't go on - I think part of this is because, as you said you are updating from your mobile, and didn't really get to check your update (?) but either way it detracts from the story.

However, I really do think, that if you maybe proof-read you update a few times before you updated you'd be putting up much better quality work. Again, I apologize in advance if I have offended you, but I really thought that your work is capable of being much better if you maybe took the time to work on those kinks.

-A

Hey dear thanks a lot for such a lovely comment and thanks for pinpointing my mistakes .But as my first language is not English i can't avoid the grammar mistakes ...But i will try...thanks again for reading my story...

Originally posted by: Scarlettkevin

Hey dear thanks a lot for such a lovely comment and thanks for pinpointing my mistakes .But as my first language is not English i can't avoid the grammar mistakes ...But i will try...thanks again for reading my story...

Originally posted by: advena

Hello again,

I'm sure you'll do fine - as I said, you seem to have a gift, and I simply thought you would like to perfect it to the best of your abilities, as a matter of fact a lot of the errors actually can be fixed by simply using spell-check (which is why I pointed them out). But, as I said I'm sure that you'll be fine!

Best Wishes,

- A

Thanks a lot for you understanding dear... I will try my best to correct my mistakes...

Originally posted by: nilmi

Amazing start...loved it...continue soon...

Thanks a lot dear...will continue soon...

Hey friends thanks for your lovely review.Here comes the next chapter.Enjoy reading...

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CHAPTER:2

Abhi entered the doctor's cabin and took a seat with purab as the nurse infromed them that the doctor will arrived there in few minutes.

''Purab how is fuggy?''asked Abhi .

''I don't know Abhi doctor didn't say anything to me .He want to talk with you.But i am sure di will be fine''said Purab with a small smile to give some hope to Abhi even though he was too feeling hopeless.Just then the doctor arrived and Abhi immdiately stand up.

''Doctor how is my Fu...Pragya?Nothing is serious right?''asked Abhi and the doctor smiled seeing his concern.

''Mr.Abhi prgya is fine and the operation is sucessful.So please take a seat''said the doctor and Abhi sat on the chair with relief while purab thanked all the god for keeping his di safe .

''Well as i said before the operation is sucessful as the bullets didn't damage any essential nevers .But pragya will be feeling week for next coupleof weeks from the blood loss and i am sure she will be having PTSD due to what she faced in the couple of days .So keep her away from stress and don't let her do any heavy works.She must have complete bed dress for 1 weeks for the wound to hell.If you want you ca take her home tomorrow evening as she must be in a comfortable place.I will send a nurse everyday to chance her dressing if needed.''said Dr.siddarth and both Abhi and purab nodded.

''Can i see her?''asked Abhi .

''yes you can she is in the ICU now.But please don't disturb her and she will not get consicious till tomorrow morning''said siddarath and Abhi nodded and stood up with purab.

''I will see pragya now''said Abhi and siddarath nodded.

''Ok.But please wash the blood from you hands before entering the ICU to prevent any infections''said siddarath and Abhi nodded.

''Thanks a lot for saving my wife doctor.I can't explain how greatful i ma''said Abhi with a smile and siddarath smiled back.

''Its ok Mr.Abhi.Its my duty''said Siddarath and they left the cabin.

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Abhi entered the ICU leaving purab outside and closed the door.He turned and looked at his fuggy who was laying on the hosptial bed with oxgyen mask on covering her nose and mouth and many wires attached to her small body.Abhi took slow steps towards her bed and his heart broke to see her in this state.Her face was pale white from the blood loss and there are dark circles under her eyes.Abhi sat down on the chair near her bed and took her hand in his as his eyes got moist.

''I am sorry Fuggy i couldn't save you on time.I again failed you as a husband.But please don't leave me fuggy coz i can't live without your lectures ,your chasma glares , your morning prayers or your sweet bed coffee for me.I know i hurted you a lot in the past and i realized how much your place in my life valued only after i came to know you may leave me forever fuggy.so please get well soon so we can continue our fights.please fuggy get well soon and i promise i will never hurt you''said Abhi and he closed his eyes letting his tears fall.He didn't know how much time he say there crying silently when he heard the door of the ICU open and saw purab entering .He wiped his tears and kissed her hand keeping it softly on the bed again.

''Abhi everyone arrived to see di ''said Purab and Abhi nodded and left the ICU.purab went near pragya and kissed her forehead.

''Please di open your eyes soon.If not for our family atleast you have to do it for Abhi''said Purab and left the room.

Once purab came out he saw Abhi taking to sarla ma while daadis,Akash,purvi,Rachana standing and consoling each other .Then he looked at Bulbul who was giving him glares.

''Aunty ji i am so sorry .I am failed pragya and you all again.I tried my best to get her back unharmed but i am useless as i said before to do anything''said Abhi with regret.

''Beta ji please don't talk like this. You saved our pragya without thinking the risk in it.Our pragya is safe now and that what matters.''said sarla with a teary smile.

''Can we see her Abhi?''asked Daadi and Abhi nodded.

''Haan daadi but go and see her one by one and don't disturb her''said Abhi and Daadi entered the ICU after 20 minutes everyone except Bulbul came back seeing pragya.Bulbul entered the ICU and came out after 5 minutes with rage and went to purab and slapped him hard.Purab was not at all shocked by the slap as he expect before.

''How could you do this to her purab?I told you before i can't see di in pain coz of me again.But you didn't listen to me.What if she didn't make the operation purab what is lost her .I would have killed myself purab .I told you not to do anything stupid like this but you didn't listen to me.''said Bulbul as tears flowed from her eyes.Then she turned towards Abhi and looked at him with a glare.

''And you too involved in this jiju.I thought atleast you would understand my feelings and let me do what that kidnaper asked .But you too didn't understand me.Why jiju?''asked Bulbul with a broken voice and Abhi came and held her shoulder.

''Bulbul i know you wanted to safe your sister.But do you think she would have lived with herself if you gave yourself to the kidnapper.You know you di will die before something happens to you.so we did what we can do in that situation.Now your di and you are ok that what matters''said Abhi and Bulbul agreed to what Abhi said but still she felt guilty her being the reason for her current state.

''But jiju coz of me...''said Bulbul but Abhi cut her off.

''No Bulbul nothing happened coz of you. so stop blaming yourself now''said Abhi with a small smile.

''Ok jiju''said Bulbul and Abhi gave her a brotherly hug while others watched them with a smile.

''Ok i think you must go and take rest .I will take care of di''said Akash but Abhi was not ready to leave pragya.

''No Akash i am will not leave the hospital till pragya wakes up''said Abhi with dertermination.

''No Abhi Akash is right .you and purab are tired and we know bahu is not going to wake up before tomorrow morning.so i think we must leave like Akash said and come back tomorrow morning''said daadi.Thought Abhi wanted to protest he know he can't do anything here and the tired from the lack of sleep and fighting started to catch him.

''Ok daadi''said Abhi and daadi smiled.

''I will to stay will Akash and take care of di and please don't stop me as i know i can't leave di now''said Bulbul.

''Ok beta you stay with pragya but call us if you need anything ''said daadi with a smile and kissed her forehead.

''Sure daadi''said Bulbul and everyone left leaving Akash and Akash to take care of pragya.

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Once Abhi reached the house he entered his room and sat on the bed keeping his face in his hands.After few seconds he got up from the bed and took a towel to fresh up and walked towards the bathroom.As he took few steps he stepped on something and looked down to see a paper and took it.He opened the folds of the paper and was confused to see a letter written in his fuggy's handwriting and started to read the letter.After he finished reading the letter he was stunned would been an understatement.He can't believe what he was reading and he read the letter again and again to make sure his eyes were not playing any tricks.After few minutes he sat on the floor with as guilt and self lothing filled his body.He can't how a girl who he married just to take revenge,insulted on daily basic,aked to marry another man doubting her character can fall in love with him.Abhi can see how much his fuggy loves him from just reading the letter and ashmed for lying to her about his and Tanu's marriage.He didn't even realise that he didn't even feel bad after breaking up with his girl friend and didn't think of her till now.He even started to think if Tanu was in pragya's place would have the sacrifice that pragya did today.Even though he wanted to say ''yes Tanu would have done the same'' but his heart know she will never do anything that pragya did for him and his family.He remembered how Tanu left his all the when he wanted someon's support and how pragya support him all the time tought she said it was for daadi when he know it was just not for dadi but also him.Just then purab entered the room and rushed towards Abhi seeing his state.

''Abhi are you alright?''asked purab with concern sitting beside him.Abhi looked at purab with moist eyes cluting the letter.

''She is in love with me Purab.And here i was planning my wedding with Tanu till yesterday''said Abhi and purab was shocked to know Abhi know about his di'd feelings but moreover the news about his and Tanu's wedding.But he didn't want to talk about the wedding now.

''I know Abhi.She told me and Bulbul and bulbul forced di to express her feeling to you before our wedding''said purab keeping a hand on Abhi's shoulder.

''That why she took the bullet for me''said Abhi .

''No Abhi even if she is not in love with you di would have done the same.But you know how much she loves you.you are very lucky to have her Abhi.''said Purab .

''I know purab but you know what i don't deserve her love.How can she love me after how i treated her purab.When she was doing all the duties of a wife ,bahu,bhabhi i was treating her like a dirt.I made her sleep in the balcony in the chill and mosquito while i slept inside the room without even a bit of regret.I actually behave like a heartless monster purab and in return this girl is in love with me.How could she be so selfless and forgiving purab when i can't forgive myself.''asked Abhi with broken voice.Purab heart to seeing his brother and best friend like this.

''Abhi please stop talking like this.You are not a monster as i know how you treat your loved ones.Whatever happened between you and di are some misunderstandings .But i am glad that this misunderstanding coz if it didn't you could never got a gem of a person like di as your life partner.I don't know whether you love di or not Abhi but i am sure you feel something for her .She may be not a supermodel like Tanu Abhi but i have never seen a girl with such an inner beauty like di.So please think about before taking any desicion coz if you make a wrong desicion now you will regret it later and it will be too late to make it correct.I know you want to marry Tanu Abhi,but do you really think Tanu will do whatever di did for this family especially for daadi and you.I am sure she would never do it.If Tanu really loved you like she claims she would never convinced you to marry another girl.Think about it Abhi then decide what you will tell di after she wakes up coz she has a rights to know after whatever she did to you. Think about it Abhi''said Purab and left Abhi alone with his thougths.As purab left his room Abhi sat there lost in thoughts ,he remembere the moments his moments with pragya from the first meeting to the moment she went limbs in his arms.He stood up from the floor and walked to the balcony and sat on the couch which pragya used to sleep and caressed it .

''I don't know what is this feeling i am realising for you now .But i promise you fuggy i will make up to you for whatever i did to you.I know i was never a good husband to you fuggy but from now i will try my best to a good life partner.But first i have to break all my relation with Tanu properly .I will make you happy pragya and believe you deserve all the happiness in the world.''said Abhi as he laid on the couch and closed his eyes thinking about pragya.

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Aaliya and Tanu was fuming in anger after knowing Abhi saved pragya.But Tanu was the most tensed as she was afarid what will happen if pragya tell everyone that she and Aaliya was also involved.

''God i don't know what is wrong with bhai.why he saved that behanji and broke up with you?And i don't know what will happen if bhai comes to know our involvement.''said Aaliya with anger.

''Aaliya what if pragya informs everyone about us .''asked Tanu .

''I don't know Tanu.But you know what you are a fool to go there and tell everything to that behanji.''said Aaliya and Tanu stood up from her bed.

''How will i know Abhi will go to this extend to save her Aaliya.''said Tanu .

''Whatever Tanu but pray to god that behanji will not reveal anything coz if it happens i am sure bhai will break every relation with you.''said Aaliya and Tanu just closed her eyes in anger.

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Akash was sitting outside the ICU beside Bulbul lost in his thoughts.Today after seeing Rachana something stirred in his heart when he saw her kept her hands on her belly sometimes.He know whatever he did with Rachana is wrong and unforgivable.He know he should never listened to his mother and agreed to leave Rachana and marry another girl.But after today he became determined to win her back by gaining her forgiveness even if his mother stop him.Just then he saw Bulbul coming out of the ICU and sat on a chair .He stood up and went near bulbul and sat on a chair beside her.

''Bulbul''called Akash and Bulbul looked him with tired eyes.

''Haan bolo''said Bulbul.

''Do you think i can win Rachana back and gain her forgivness?''asked Akash and Bulbul looked Akash with suprise.

''Well i don't know Akash as i am not good in giving relationship adivice.You must ask this to pragya di coz she was expect in this .But if i was in Rachana's place i will not forgive you easily.But at the same time if you prove you are really sorry for what you did to her and worth for a second chance i am sure she will forgive you.Me and di know how difficult life will be without a father and none should go through that.So if you really regret what you did prove it to Rachana''said Bulbul and Akash nodded.

''Thanks Bulbul''said Akash and Bulbul smiled a little.

''Its okay''said Bulbul.

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The next morning sun rays hit on Abhi's face who was sleeping on the couch on the balcony stirred as the ray disturbed him.

''Fuggy please close the curtains''said Abhi and searched for the blanket to cover his face.After few seconds he couldn't find the blanket he opened his eyes and was confused to find himself in the balcony .Then he remembered yesterday's event and sat up on the couch only to feel pain on his back and neck by sleeping in uncomforable postion.

''I can't believe fuggy slept with this pain everyday.''thought Abhi and entered the room to get ready.Once he enter his wardobe he keep his fuggy love letter in the locker and took a black geans and a white T-shirt and entered the room to get ready.

Once Abhi entered the hall he saw Daadi,Purab sitting on the sofa and drinking tea.Daadi saw Abhi and smiled at him.

''Abhi come and have you tea then we can go to hospital''said Daadi and Abhi took a seat beside daadi and started to drink the tea.

''Purab did Neel said anything to the inspector about the kidnapping?''asked Abhi .

''Abhi i called the inspector but Neel didn't tell them anything i think we must visit them personally''said purab and Abhi nodded .

''I will go and meet him once pragya gains consiciousness''said Abhi and they left to the hospital.

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Once they reached the hospita they saw Bulbul coming towards the ICU with two tea cups and smiled once she saw them.

''Good morning''said Bulbul with a smile thougth it didn't reach her eyes.

''Good morning Bulbul.How is pragya beta?''asked Daadi.

''She is fine daadi.They removed the oxygen mask this morning as she started to breath on her own .But still she didn't gain consicious.''said Bulbul.Just then Akash came out of the ICU with a smile.

''Bhai di is waking up''said Akash and everyone smiled in relief.Abhi immediately entered the ICU and rushed to pragya's bed followed by others.

Pragya on the other hand felt like she was hit by a truck as her whole body pained and more over the annoying peeping noise was disturbing her sleep.She tried to open her eyes but she felt her eyelids heavy.Just then she a warm touch on her left hand and heard the melodic voice of her husband calling her.

''Fuggy can you hear me.come on fuggy open your eyes''said Abhi's voice and Pragya finally opened her eyes and looked a blur figure of her husband.

''Abhishekh?''asked pragya in a rough voice .

Abhi took her chasma from the table and helped her to wear it.He then saw pragya gave him a weak smile.

''Fuggy do you want anything ?''asked Abhi with concern.

''Pani''said pragya in a rough voice and Abhi took the water from the table and help her drink it.

''How are you feeling fuggy?''asked Abhi and pragya was confused why he was asking such a question.Then she remembered yesterday's incidents.Tears formed in her tears remembering Tanu's words but at the same time she was revealed that Abhi was fine.Just then she felt a hand wiping her tears and looked at Abhi who was wiping her tears .She was confused why he was acting like he was showing so much caring towards her.Though he came to save her yesterday she know it was for daadi.As she tried to sit pain formed on her left side and she closed her eyes and bit her lips from screaming.The next moment she felt a Abhi's arms around her should and helped to sit while pragya couldn't help but look into his eyes .After she sat comforably Abhi cupped his face .

''Are you ok now Fuggy?''asked Abhi and Pragya nodded.

''Di i am so sorry''came Bulbul's voice and she turned to look other standing and her heart broke again as she came to know the reason behind Abhi's caring .

''Only for daadi''thought pragya bitterly.

''Its okay Bulbul.Its not your fault that Neel kidnapped me.so stop blaming yourslef''said pragya with a smile.

''I was so scared and worried di''said Bulbul and hugged pragya carefully not hurting her by giving pressure to her wounds.

''I am alright Bulbul and you can't get rid of your di soon.''said pragya with a smile.

''I love you di''said Bulbul with a teary smile.

''I love you too Bulbul''said Pragya and Bulbuk moved aside as daadi can talk to pragya.

''How are you feeling beta ?''asked Dadi caressing her face .

'I am fine Daadi.Please don't worry ''said Pragya with a smile.

''How can i not worry when lakshmi of my house is missing.''said dadi.

''Well your lakshmi is back so stop worrying''said pragya and daadi hugged her .After few minutes everyone left the ICU leaving Abhigya alone.

''Do you want anything fuggy?''asked Abhi .

''Abhishekh you can stop this fake caring now as Daadi is not here anymore''said pragya with a sad smile and Abhi felt like someone slapped him to know that his fuggy thought his caring is fake.But he know she is not the one to be blamed as it was the reaction by his action in the past.

''And you don't worry i will convince daadi and make her agree for yours and Tan's marriage and will give you divorce after Bulbul and Purab's wedding''said Pragya and Abhi was shocked to hear this.

''Fuggy..what..marriage..?''asked Abhi .

''Please don't lie to me anymore.I know what you did on lori day and it was Tanu's parents and i agreed for your marriage with them.But you know what Abhishekh it hurts to know that you lied to me about such a big matter and didn't trust me.But at the same time whom am i to have your trust.So please you can stop all this and plan for you marriage with Tanu ''said pragya with a smile but Abhi can see the pain in her eyes.But before he could replay sarla ma with purvi,Rachana and RSD entered the room and rushed towards her.Abhi moved away from them and came out of the ICU.once he came out he thought how to make pragya realize his caring was true .But before that he remembered about Neel and left to the police station informing Akash .

-To Be Continued

With Love,

Scarlett.

Very nice way of telling a story 😊...
Hope this type of scene happens in the show 😛...
I think you missed suresh there at the hospital...

Waiting for the next update...

Note:Don't take me wrong,but as advena said the spellings & some other small mistakes are a little bit distracting...So,when you have time,try to edit the mistakes which will be useful for the future readers😎... And once again, you have a gift of good narration👍🏼...

great work... mistakes does'nt matters to me... :p

Originally posted by: MarGan

Very nice way of telling a story 😊...
Hope this type of scene happens in the show 😛...
I think you missed suresh there at the hospital...

Waiting for the next update...

Note:Don't take me wrong,but as advena said the spellings & some other small mistakes are a little bit distracting...So,when you have time,try to edit the mistakes which will be useful for the future readers😎... And once again, you have a gift of good narration👍🏼...

Thanks a lot dear...I am glad you liked my narration... Will try to edit once i get time ...will update soon...

Originally posted by: ray_rajpoot

great work... mistakes does'nt matters to me... :p

Thanks a lot honey...Glad you love my story inspite of the flaws ...