'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 54

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Guys u want a Valentine gift today with one more update...If yes then like n Comment back

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MaNan's Fear---Part 20

Recap

Cabini talks abt Raghav.

ManBir talk abt Chachi.

Fab5 in jam room...

Mukti:Hey Manik...how is Nandini...

Manik in low voice:Yeaah she is fine...

Mukti:Doc ne kuch kaha kya...anything serious

Manik:No nothing like that...

Aliya:Then y r u looking so worried

Manik:Sorry guys...for whatever happened...i dint mean to hide from u guys but the situation was something...like I cudn't tell

Dhruv:Buddy ...its k...agar main teri jagah hota toh shayad main bhi aisa hi karta...but seriously I m happy for u.

Cabir:Yaar kitna emotinal drama karte ho...Humlog Fab5 hai now we r famous...humne album crack kiya hai...

Manik:Will they continue the Cabir after what we did with Chudail...

Mukti:They ll have to after what they did to Nandini...hum kya use aise hi chod denge.

Cabir:Manik don't worry...ye album mereliye important tha but album aaye na aaye maine job keliye apply kiya hai toh I ll definitely get that...aaj nahi toh kal call letter aajyega...

Mukti:What...ye kab kiya tune aur batay bhi nahi...

Cabir:Arre yaar itna sabkuch chal raha tha bataneka time nahi mila...aur haa Manik I gave ur address so they myt send there.

Manik:Ohh shit I forgot...tere liye koi letter aaya toh hai...yahi hai kya dekh

Manik hands over the letter...

Cabir opens it...shouts

Cabir:Yes...guys I got the job...

Dhruv:But how u ll manage...practice n job

Cabir:Guys it's a drummer job only that too night shift ...so don't u think I ll improve...

Manik:Best things no need to improve...

Everyone smiles...

Mukti:So lets party tonight... Cabir tere naye ghar pe...

Manik n Cabir shouts at same time:No...

Mukti n Aliya gets scared...

Dhruv:Kyu...

Manik:Don't mind guys ...but I ll have to b with Nandini...tonight also.

Mukti:K...but Cabir tu kyu na bolraha tha

Cabir wassaying no bcz Navya was at his place

Cabir:Who Manik keliye...tumlogo ko lagta hai who aayega

Mukti:Tu firse kuch chuparaha hai...

Cabir:Kya yaar Mukti...main kuch chupaunga kya tujhse.

Dhruv:Guys ...lets practice for sometime...

Everyone agrees n starts practicing...

At hospital Nandini spends a lot of happy time with Rishab but was missing Manik badly ...n was looking at door continuously...

After some time Abhi comes in to meet Nandu...Chachi n Rishab moves out

Abhi:So baby doll how r u...

Nandini:Much better...

Abhi cums near Nandini:Looking much better lagta hai Manik acchi tarah se khayal rakhta hai...

Nandini blushes...

Abhi:Accha ye batao...hai kaha ye log

Nandini:They r in college...Waise u were about to leave na...

Abhi:No I ll b here only...

Nandini:So what r u thinking about Mukti...did u find any positiveness from her

Abhi:Actually I stopped trying...

Nandini:But Y

Abhi:I think she lovessomeone else...

Nandini:She was but now she moved on...i think

Abhi:Let it b...tum batao...r u planning to propose or not...Valentines Day is round the corner

Nandini:R u crazy...What ru talking abt...

Abhi:Kyu...nahi karnewali...

Nandini:Maine aisa thodi na kaha...

Abhi:Then...

Nandini:U guys na don't know how to win a girl's heart ...that's y u left hope on Mukti right.

Abhi:KK ...leave it

Abhi leaves from there n Nandini takes some rest...

Navya cudn't go to college because of her shifting n she was thinking how she ll stay there...n what abt later where she ll go...everything was running in her mind at ones...n she decides to stop thinking n go to meet Nandini...

She reaches hospital n finds Nandini is sleeping...

Navya asks Chachi to go home as she ll stay with Nandini n even will spend night with her...as she cant spend night with Cabir at his flat bcz if he don't getany place she ll ask him to stay there.

Chachi n Rishab leaves from there n Navya sits along with Nandini in the room...

At college...

Fab5 finishes practice ...n Manik dials Nandini's num n forgets that it was with Chachi...

Chachi lifts the call...so instead cutting Manik decides to talk bcz he thinks Chachi is with Nandini only

Chachi:Haa Manik...woh phone mere paas hai...aur main ghar aayi hun

Manik panics:Aur Nandini...usse discharge kardiya kya...Chachi mujhe bulana tha na main aajata aaplogo ko drop karne

All gets worried seeing Manik's resstlessness...

Chachi:Arre Manik ...maine kaha main ghar aayi hun ...Nandini nahi

Manik was about to leave:Toh fir uske saath kaun hai...hum use akela nahi chod sakte Chachi doc ne kaha hai

Chachi:Ohho Manik...tum meri baat toh sunlo...Navya hai uske saath...aur uske haath me chot lagi hai na isliye main phone apne saath leaayi varna toh pura din phone pakadkar hi baithti

Manik stops:Ohh...Sorry Chachi

Chachi:Koi baat nahi...Woh Navya ne kaha woh rukh jayegi aur Rishab ki dawayiya bhi khilani thi toh main ghar aagayi...chalo ab phone rakho mujhe bohat kaam hai

Chachi disconnects the call...

Manik dials Navya's num...

Everyone freaks out looking at Manik's worry...

Cabir:Manik Batayega kya hua...

Manik:Nothing its just...Meanwhile Navya picks the call...

Navya:Haa Manik

Manik:Nandini theek hai na...

Navya:Haa baba theek hai...par abhi sorahi hai warna hum baat kara dete tumse...

Manik:Don't worry I ll b there...kuch der me

Navya:Arre humne kaha na hum hai yaha...aur woh theek hai

Manik:K ...jabtak hum nahi aate ...u take care of her

Navya:Haa Manik...tum chinta mat karo...woh utte hi hum tumhari baat kara denge...

Manik:K...

Both cuts the call...

Cabir:Ab batayega kya hua...

Manik:Ya I thought Nandini got discharged bcz Chachi took the call n she was at home but Navya is with Nandini at hospital itseems

Mukti:Manik tune toh hume dara diya...

Cabir:Offcourse Mukti after what happened with her he will panic

Dhruv:Agree...we never know ...someone has to b with Nandini

Aliya:Guys lets change the topic...that moment was so scary for me...dont know how Nandini took that pain.

Mukti:Yaa I know...

Cabir looks at everyones face...n tries to change the topic

Cabir:So Manik...tu bata tera kya plan hai

Manik:Plan!... kaisa plan

Cabir:Arre Valentines is round the corner n u forgot...

Manik:R u crazy Cabir...

Mukti:Whats wrong in that...Manik tujhe kabhi na kabhi toh use bolna hoga na

Aliya:I second that...

Manik:So u guys r not angry on me or Nandini...

Mukti:Ab kya tujhe bond paper par likhkar de...

Manik:Nahi ...matlab

Aliya:Ohh cut the crap Manik...

Everyone looks at Aliya shockingly

Aliya:What...Y r u looking at me like that

Manik:U...I thought u ll create a scene out of this...

Aliya:Frankly speaking I was angry...but after hearing to ur story I think we never been in that kind of a relationship ...Our was just a infatuation or I shud say we were habituated to eachother...we were connected emotionally like u r with Nandini...

Mukti touches her forehead...

Aliya:What

Cabir:She is checking whether u r fine or not

Dhruv n Manik understands what Aliya said...

Cabir:Tumhare muh se aisi baaten suni nahi na...

Dhruv smiles...Aliya spots that...n shouts

Aliya:Y r u smiling...

Mukti n Cabir smiles looking at eachother

Dhruv:Simply

Manik:Aliya...Aliya...calm down...his smile means he understood u that's it

Muti brings back the main topic

Mukti:Tu bata Manik...toh Kab kar raha hai propose...

Manik:Don't know guys...I don't know how she ll react ...what she feels about me

Dhruv:I think she also loves u

Everyone gets a shock listening to that...

Precap

Mukti spots Abhi on Hospital bed.

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Will update next part based on the majority who wants it comment back...


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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update👏...Luved mananbir ...waiting 4 d next part...update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pannikutty

Plz update soon
Cant wait 😭

Updated dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you Kreesham...i absolutely love this FF...!!!👏
in the sad time on ky2...this is a welcome relief...totally Manan style :) 😳

Eagerly waiting for the next part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks Kritika !
What a lovely Valentine gift 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome update...loved it...waiting for valentines proposal...continue soon...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story..i'd been reading this from the start..and this is so cute and lovely..
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow luving this more and more..manik Proposing nandu will be fun.The best thing about ur FF is mukti and aliya are so positive opposite to d show...gr8 work kritika...Please update the next part soon...eagerly waiting...😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow... Nice update... Pls give us a valentine gift and update soon
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loved it.. do post the next part soon :)

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