'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_07

oye cheating... aaj ka update kahan hai .. you said you update daily na... mujhe abhi k abhi aaj ka update chahiye...

Ya will update now...get ready to faint😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
U r not responding properly...that u r liking or not...wud love to see ur reactions atleast on this update

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MaNan's Fear---Part 22

Recap

Fab4 asks Manik to propose Nandini.

Navya feels giddy n Aliya takes her to Doc.

Mukti comes to know about Abhi's cancer

Doc leaves saying that she is absolutely fine now n she has to come after two days to change the bandages.

Manik nods head n looks at Nandini...Nandini was upset

Manik gets up n hugs her tightly ...

Nandini:Manik...What happened

Manik:Finally u can go home...

Nandini was feeling pain in her arms bcz of his tight hug:Manik...my hands...

Manik breaks the hug n holds both her hands...n kisses her wrists on her wounds which r bandaged one after other

Nandini in low voice...Manik...butjust now u were excited n wanted me stay here na...

Manik:U don't know what I m going through seeing u on this hospital bed Nandini...I don't want to see u like this ever again

Nandini in tears:Manik...I m fine ...

Manik cups her face n wipes her tears n gently kisses her forehead...

Manik:I don't even want to see ur tears Nandini...never...ever...I cant afford them n I cant afford going away or staying away from u

Nandini:Manik I m here only ...dont worry I m not going anyhwhere...

Manik hugs her again but this time he puts his hands around her neck so that her arms r not hurt...Nandini also gives in even after the pain

On other side...Mukti realises that she cant afford losing Abhi from her life...n feels that don't know Y but she never had that feeling before not even for Harshad...she was confused about the feeling...

Dhrulya reaches their respective homes...

Cavya reaches at Cabir's flat ...

Cabr:Mujhe woh saamaan lena tha toh main tumhare saath aagaya ...aur tumhare saath aliya aati toh use pata chal jaata ki tum hostel me nahi rehti

Navya:Haa... woh hum samaj gaye the...Thanq...

Cabir:Theeke main chalta hun...aur tumhe koiproblem ho toh mujhe call karna...

Navya:Woh toh theek hai par tum jaa kaha rahe ho

Cabir:Don't know Manik ya Dhruv ke ghar...

Navya:Tum chaho toh yaha rehsakte ho...hume koi problem nahi...

Cabir:No its ok...i ll manage

Navya:Woh hum apne liye hi bolrahe the...tumne hi kaha na hume kuch problem hogayi toh hum tumhe call kare ...par agar call karne ki halat me na rahe aur hum behosh hogaye toh...

Cabir smiles:Tum sach me Madhubala ho...

Navya:Matlab tum samajgaye

Cabir:But r u sure tumhe koi problem nahi...

Navya:Hume kya problem hogi aur waise bhi jo hona tha woh hogaya...

Cabir:Look mera who matlab nahi tha...

Navy smiles:Chinta mat karo hum theek hai...itna bada ghar hai...toh do logo ko adjust karne me koi problem nahi hogi

Cabir smiles n nods head...

Manik calls Chachi n informs that Nandini will get discharged tomorrow so no need to come in the mrng as he ll cum n drop Nandini as soon as she gets discharged...

He msgs Fab4 about the same...

Everyone feels happy...but Mukti was in pain...n she was not understanding what to do...

Driver brings the food from home...n Manik arrages everything to eat on bed ...

Nandini:Manik...i don't like this plz...I want something else...

Manik:No u have to eat this today bcz from tmrw u ll have to eat Chachi's food only...n he smirks

Nandini:Don't u dare tease my Chachi haa...

Manik:Haa ...woh toh world ki best cook hai...

They finishes their food n Manik gives Medicines n asks her to sleep

Nandini:Manik...y u wanted me to stay here...u wanted to say something...

Manik faces another sides n starts makes making excuses...:Nahi...kuch bhi nahi...

Manik moves a bit away...n talks to himself:Shit I LOVE HER...n I m nervous...how will I tell her...How will she react...Manik was lost in his thoughts

Nandini gets up,slowly cums near Manik n pats on his shoulder...Manik turns back to see

Nandini:Kya hua...What r u thinking

Manik:Y did u get down ...u wud have called me na...

Nandini:Manik I fine...

Manik lifts Nandini in his arms n was placing her on the bed

Nandini starts gazing at Manik n Manik looks at her thinking that shud I tell her or not...

Manik was so close to Nandini that they can hear eachothers heart beat

Nandini looks at his eyes n breaks the silence:Manik u want to tell something...

Manik gets distracted n turns back

Manik:Is this right time to tell her that I love her or shall I ask her in some other way...

Nandini:Tumne kuch kaha Manik...

Manik:No...u sleep...

Nandini:Ummm...n closes her eyes n thinks what Abhi said in the morningabout the proposal...

Suddenly she opens her eyes n looks at Manik...n thinks in her heart"Is it Love Manik"

Manik turns back n asks:Did u say anything...

Nandini widens her eyes:No...I was not getting sleep...that's it

Manik:Hmmm...Manik comes n sits near the bed finally brushing all the thoughts

Nandini:Manik...u sleep...I ll sit for sometime...n then sleep

Manik:No its K...i ll sit here...

Nandini:Manik...u look tired so sleep ...plz Manik...

Manik :K...but if u need anyting plz wake me up...

Nandini :K... I will

Manik leans his head on the bed ntries to sleep but it was not confortable for him to sleep...

Nandini sees him struggling...N moves to oneside of the bed n calls Manik

Nandini:Manik...u can come n sleep here

Manik gazes at Nandini that how can she say that...but comes into senses

Manik:No I m fine here...

Nandini looks pleadingly:Manik...u need sleep so plz...

Manik mischievously:Nandini do friends sleep like this...sharing same bed

Nandini:Hmm...may be a caring friend...

Manik goes all happy:K...a friend herself is asking them it wont b a problem I guess...

Manik slowly adjusts himself beside Nandini...

Now Nandini sleeping straight bcz of her pain in arms n Manik sleeping in sideways putting his right hand around Nandini's waist...where his face exactly near her face so close that an inch away from kissing...

Nandini holds his hand kept around her waist...

Manik feels so relaxed being with her ...forgetting whole world...n don't want to see anything except Nandini...

Nandini:Now tell me what u wanted to ask...y u were happy when doc said I ll have to stay today...

Manik opens his eyes suddenly n thinks shud I tell her or wait for Valentine's day...

Nandini distracts his thinking:Manik have u slept

Manik:No...

Nandu:Then kuch bolo...

Manik:Nandini...if I ask u something then will u b angry on me...

Nandu:Hmm...depends on what u ask...

Manik:Then leave it...n let me enjoy this moment...let me sleep...

Nandu:No...ab tumhe bolna padega...or else getup

Manik:K fine...

Nandu:then tell

Manik:hum aise friends kabtak rahenge...its so boring...

Nandu:being in this position also u r asking me this question ...like seriously...

Manik lifts his head:Matlab...

Nandu:U really think that friends share this kind of moments...I mean sharing a bed...

Manik gets confused:Toh kya hum friends bhi nahi hai

Nandu was surprised at his foolishness:No...we r not friends

Manik:Then what...

Nandu:More than friends...

Manik feels relieved n sleeps :Ohh accha...then suddenly gets up with a shocking look

Manik:More than friends matlab...

Nandu:Kuch nahi...u sleep I ll tell u later...n thinks "u know what... u r dumb"

Nandu gives a peck on his nose n asks him to sleep...Manik kisses her on cheek as soon as she turns her face n thinks "I know Nandini ,we r more than friends...but I want to hear it from u"

Manik hugs her tightly n sleeps...

Nandini thinks..."I know he loves me but I want to hear it from him..."

Precap

Fab4 along with Navya surprises Nandini at home

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Will update next part tmrw

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kresham

Ya will update now...get ready to faint😉


i m ready bring it on... i wouldn't faint... 😉 ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was good ... 👏 and you are going to update next part in morning ... and i didn't faint see.. i m again the first to comment... 😊
Edited by sana_07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_07

it was good ...👏and you are going to update next part in morning ... and i didn't faint see.. i m again the first to comment...😊

u dint like kya...i can't b so romantic
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...part 22 was awsome...loved manik a lot...so cute...pls continue soon...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kresham

u dint like kya...i can't b so romantic


where did this came from that i didn't like it ... i said na its good .. and waiting for next part thats why i said u r going to update the next part in tommorrow morning itself... i truely like it dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_07



where did this came from that i didn't like it ... i said na its good .. and waiting for next part thats why i said u r going to update the next part in tommorrow morning itself... i truely like it dear...😊

hahaha was just kidding... will update in afternoon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing
So who will say? 😕

Anyway love ur story
U are an amazing writer babe.
Love u

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