Karnandavas os-kahani mei twist-LAST part updtd pg 11 - Page 12

Originally posted by: nuckts

thank you so much dear

sorry i didn't know that you are also a MB fan like me😭

but i am happy that you loved it😊

plz wrt more stf lyk ths 😃

Hello Nikita! I noe i m quite very late to comment but dear i m sorry... i joined IF only a month ago.
Ur imagination n twists in MB were awesome i must say. Just loved the six bros together Each n Every element u included from romance to action and comedy to lovely bonding of brothers...felt like a complete movie pack ! Although i just have a small complaint that u kept yudi out of many scenes.. but gr8 work dear. Wud love to read if u go ahead to show some more bonding of KARNANDAVAS! ( lovely name must say! )

Originally posted by: Mohiniapearl

Hello Nikita! I noe i m quite very late to comment but dear i m sorry... i joined IF only a month ago.
Ur imagination n twists in MB were awesome i must say. Just loved the six bros together Each n Every element u included from romance to action and comedy to lovely bonding of brothers...felt like a complete movie pack ! Although i just have a small complaint that u kept yudi out of many scenes.. but gr8 work dear. Wud love to read if u go ahead to show some more bonding of KARNANDAVAS! ( lovely name must say! )

Originally posted by: nuckts

hello dear

i am glad you liked the story

i always wanted karnandavas to bond

i wanted their brotherhood to bloom

and sometimes love stories do make other people also involved in it like some event where everyone becomes a part of it in a way

ya i agree about yudi😆the thing is dharma is very complicated to understand and also use it for creating a story

about lord krishna atleast he is the naughtiest😉so creating on him with a sense of humour with only fun aspect was justified

i didn't want people to consider yudi boring because of his dharma

and making him naughty means snatching away his original nature as well wanted to justiify his character's nature as well

but i am happy people still like this sotry and remeber to read it!😊

I completely agree with u dear... to understand our Dharamraj isnt an easy job. Its just that he is one of my fav characters of MB thus i missed him a little but i must say u balanced his words very nicely. I have some idea how to use yudi in the bromance of Karnandavs... as he was not very naughty thus pranks did nt keep moving in his mind but he was very lovimg n protective-caring especially for his younger bros (this can b an element) also with karna u can show that how releived he started feeling when someone elder to him was there to take some responsibility, moreover he was like a father figure for all his anuj but he somewhere missed his father, so he can find him in karn!
🥱 😳 These r only some ideas if u like u can include otherwise just ignore...
Luking forward for ur more imaginative stories n more bromance !!! 😊