CVs ...where exactly do you store ur brains while writing these epis ? - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Vandy,
That rant almost felt like my own..

Well, that's a trademark 4 Lions touch apart from the hate-love story and soothing bg music! 😆
Why do you think all their shows have short shelf-lives! This, here is the very reason.. Different directors, yes one can adapt to that.. But different writers - is a living nightmare..
One creates a character, the other butchers it and the third tries to fix things.. And that leaves us scratching our heads.. Coz we being us, never stop looking beyond the obvious.. Optimistic much!

In short show ki, characters ki, aur humare dimaag ki band baj jaati hai.. 🥱

On a side note, shukar maanate hain that HS has only two teams of writers, unlike their previous offering which had a new writer every episode.. 😕 Sigh, I used to cry like a baby! 😡

Anyway.. Soo coming to the SaaZ magic last night..
Yes, that's what we wanted.. 20 mins of Saaz.. But bhai, romance ka matlab yeh toh nahi na ki logic aur characters ki charas bo do..
A mellowed down version of Sahir, Arzoo exercising her biwi rights and them opening up to each other - Picture perfect - What more could we ask for..
If only it wasn't rushed and kinda misplaced, I felt..

Especially when there's a killer out there, he's been shot, she's been attacked, someone obviously changed the meds..
As so rightly pointed out by you, why was the detailing missed?
Kaunsi Lucknow superfast mail pakadni thi inko! 🥱
Baaki nonsense ke waqt toh inka speed Mumbai ki slow trains se bhi zyada slow ho jaata hai.. Then why now! 😡

Like someone has rightly said, In fiction, you need to show their feelings rather than saying that they feel..
That's what was missing, especially in Sahir's case..
And Arzoo's too..
Sahir feels relieved that his wife is around to share his pain, inflicted by his tragic past.. But never once have they shown him pondering over the fate of their relationship ever since their marriage..
Whatever their circumstances be, Zeenat is still his lawfully wedded wife, atleast on paper..
How then does he intend to do justice to Arzoo?
One may argue that he wasn't thinking about it when he got married to her hastily.. But now, after return of Zeenat - Aahat?

Sharing shaayris and letting her tend to him is sweet, lekin Miya, are you seriously that naive to overlook the fact that someone shot her (you) and poisoned you?
From where I see, your lives are far from being normal..

And medical bloopers - Allah kasam, Im ashamed to even list those, and call myself a healthcare professional.. 👏
Kya recovery hai Sahir ki! Or perhaps blame it on the 'national award winning - editors'
And one more.. - PCal seriously? Calcium and Vitamin D supplements.. Haddi tooti hai kya? Perhaps, a painkiller would've made more sense.. But naa, why even try n look for logic.. 😕
Sahir Azim Chaudhary ko dard nahi hota..

so no.. Im not a pessimist.. I am a laalchi aurat, who hopes that they treat us to SaaZ moments every night..
But romance, comedy, action dikhane ke chakkar mein why is the essence of humsafars being toyed with!

Having said that, I'm really looking fwd to seeing how the writers redeem themselves..
Esp. With the track of NH and/or Saiyaara not belonging to Sahir.. Coz if that happens, SAC's characterisation, or the way I've perceived him over the months is going to get shaken up badly.. There will be little reason left to justify his 'Shark' wala attitude..

Thank you for that thought-provoking post.. Koi please CV's ko 1st post tweet kar do yaar.. *facepalm*

And please.. *wails* bring Lalit Mohan back.. 🥺

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vandy wors for word... agree. Not just this epi... pretty much every epi could hv been written better with those nuances you mentioned n edited better.
seriously if the leads had been anyone else I think the sgow wld hv shut down in December itself.
i now hv stopped looking for logic or continuity. I get my happiness watching SaaZ And then tune out all the inadequacies.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Perfectly put vandy.!! agree with everything you've put up...who doesnt want to see the leads romance?
but logic and some reasons wont hurt anyone na...

the same scenes could have been done in so much better way...if the right emphasis was given on the right things...one whole episode of saaz yet the impact wasnt half as much as it could be...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What to say Vandy... Though HC was awesome but I too was not able to relate with this Sahir. After reading Nads post I got my thought relaxed consoling with that assumption. Such beautiful moments was ruined. I don't under why cv always rush. They could have been more elaborate with proper detailing on emotions sentiments. Is it me only that I felt HC too was not liking this change shown with Sahir.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Everything SaAz is always rushed and abrupt ... i just don't know why ... they just show things for the sake of showing them without caring about context, screen play and logic
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pcal was seriously hilarious 🤣 it is like dr.khurana has established his own medicine here in the show...
calcium for gun shot... 🤣 people recover poisoning within the same night -.- barbequed feet take more time to heal than shot arms which dont need bandages...like seriously budget problem hai to humei bolo we will provide...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great post and nice discussion!
CVs took viewers for granted as we glued with the show for HC,
so we need to digest whatever thrown at us!
The show is degrading everyday!
I have no clue where this show is heading!
The show is becoming dogs head, cats tail and the middle is monkey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My new mantra for watching HS 😎

1. Drool on sahir 😃
2. Drool on Hotty Khurana 😳

3. Logic is gone with the wind ..to "tyaag " Diya 😆..anyway HS was always short on everything and LOGIC 😉

4. romance cum thriller cum Comedy circus main see only sahir

In short , Hataa SAWAN KI GHATA ..bas sahir KO AANE do 😳
Edited by ecrivain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
I seriously feel with all the confusion we have with time and all...let them caption the beginning of a scene like 4ghante baad or 2 din baad...atleast malum hoga kab kyah ho raha hain...the attempts to trivialize Sahir make me go all grrr

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