CVs ...where exactly do you store ur brains while writing these epis ?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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no...seriously u need to tell us🤔
it seems gorky has a toss every month...heads aaya toh nimisha and gang write full week's epi(which just love to ignore the leads and concenterate on every available nonsense in the show)😳

tails aaya toh shivani and gang just get the green signal...along with aakaash...omg...we got a chance this full week!! romance dikha dikha kar audience ko paagal kar denge!!! leave no stone unturned...kiss dikhao...pool dikhao...shayri bhi dikhao!!!!

the biggest drawback being...both the teams have no idea as to wat the other team is writing!!!
nimisha decides to shoot sahir...shivani decides to show him romancing...
continuity ki "maa-behen" as we call it in chaalooo language😳

and we audience...we r left amidst "ek taraf khaayi...doosri taraf kooan" wali situation...(english translation ...u r left in the middle..one side cliff...other side well)🤣

and between all this...the editing team...who r kurti's bff's btw...just sit back and have the last laugh...thinking.."beta jo bhi likh lo...dikhayenge toh hum wahi jo hum chahenge"😳

neways...lets come to yesterday's epi...
had the cvs thought a bit more...the epi could've had these high points!

SaAz still in bed...together...sahir wakes up...and thinks abt both the attacks...
he tries to get up to get water or something...wen aarzoo wakes up shouting...he runs to her...calms her down and comforts her...aarzoo is still hysterical as she runs to close the door...and then that whole i know ur pain n all scene could've continued...

in that scene itself...wen aarzoo hugged sahir...u could've added sahir saying "ouch" giving a hint that his wound still hurts...aarzoo could've touched it...and then...hugged him on the other shoulder...

this way...u would've been able to maintain continuity...and it was not that tough to just show a 10-20 second shot to maintain that yes sahir was still wounded...

the shot where aarzoo leaves to get noodles for sahir...y didn't u show a thought process of sahir where he thinks that fine...i was able to relax aarzoo...but the truth is...someone out there is still trying to harm her...y wasn't sahir shown thinking how aarzoo came to know he was an orphan...
these r important things...u just can't ignore them!

coming to the shayri scene...that almost kiss would've made more impact had it been after sahir recites his shayri...it would've been them sharing a moment together...and then as they both leaned in...u could've shown sahir's wound hurting him again...thus breaking their trance... both realising the awkwardness...and then...both going off to sleep!

then again...the morning breakfast could've been done much much better...had u guys shown something that made sense... there was simply no need for the fruit scene...they could've shown him being served a proper breakfast...aarzoo telling him no more burnt toasts..his eyes welling up...that would've made the scene much more impactful...


cvs...plzz get one thing right...sahir's depth and intensity is wat makes him our Sahir Azim Choudhary!

and if u guys think u can throw us bits n pieces of this kind of sahir here n there...u r mistaken...character consistency is one thing u just have to maintain!

i seriously don't know who to place...the poor poor direction or the brainless cvs!!😳
editing team toh khair deserves a national award😳
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Ilin thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 Vandy my girl you said it all word to word
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't think there was even a bandage in the last night's scene Vandy...😕 It's a chest wound. Bullet wound for God's sake!! A person can't lift his hand high enough to wear that kurta if you want it to be totally logical.

And the next morning he had been wearing a sleeveless T... There was no bandage then too. Forget about wincing while hugging. No one watching last night's epi would even get a hint that he was wounded by a bullet just the previous night. Was it the previous night??🤔 I have lost track of time in this show. Pata nahi chalta. As I said in one of my comments before in Priya's post... Its like frog jumping / hopping.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sighs ... am tou still in shock SaAz daitey bhi hien tou aisey that u can't relate to most of it ... what was the kid sahir in the fruit scene? who was he? They don't even realize that even if he was like this 7 years ago (though i doubt) he is now 32 ... age ki bhi maturity hoti hai ke nahi? They don't even realize the importance of Sahir for their show ... I mean what helped arzoo redeem? His pain ... her feeling his pain made her mahan ... something they were trying to do since beginning but failed was done through his pain! Yet they keep playing with his character in ways that are beyond me ... The way they revealed he is an orphan was enough for me to guess they are not interested in focussing on him or his pain, something we have been waiting for so long ... the orphan thing should have been revealed through his thoughts ... his pain should be revealed through him for audience to connect to it ... for it to have more impact ... but na its revealed in cluster of so much going on
And what u have said agar dekhne ko mil jata tou iss show ka naam Hum-suufer thodi hota I mean they were poisoned ... to top it he was shot too ... poison was injected in him through blood stream which makes it more critical ... but not just that he is up before her his bandage is magically gone too 🤣 And its not even that they showed a leap of even one day it was the same night that is why door was open and arzoo ran to close it

The whole kiss scene was so misplaced too ... there was not enough build up to it

I don't know why asking for some character consistency and some story and screen play consistency is such a big thing ... this is a daily soap for heavens sake ... jitni detail sey KA ke different angles dikhatey ho slow motion mey ... utni detail mey SaAz kiun nahi dikh saktey why everything them has to be rushed

I mean theek hai we are helpless viewers at your mercy ... some stuck for Sahir some for SaAz but it does not mean you consider us dumb an akal less to take any non sense and senseless things you send our way ... its' actually not fair
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You nailed it Vandy!
I just made a post highlighting some gems of yesterday's episode as well...so much material we have 😆.

The most ridiculous and out of place scene has to be the breakfast scene...and Sahir made to act like a little kid..he has still not opened up to her..he is still hiding his truth and masking his pain...even the previous night he did that..he diverted her..then how can he be so childish suddenly.

Him reciprocating to her care should have had him emotional and not bratty like he was...why should he eat so many fruits to show he appreciates her care???

Cvs really play with Sahir the most...everyone is redeemed and made to look good at the expense of this one character and still his essence is not given any value!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ilin

👏 Vandy my girl you said it all word to word


u also add a few words😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.

I don't think there was even a bandage in the last night's scene Vandy...😕 It's a chest wound. Bullet wound for God's sake!! A person can't lift his hand high enough to wear that kurta if you want it to be totally logical.

And the next morning he had been wearing a sleeveless T... There was no bandage then too. Forget about wincing while hugging. No one watching last night's epi would even get a hint that he was wounded by a bullet just the previous night. Was it the previous night??🤔 I have lost track of time in this show. Pata nahi chalta. As I said in one of my comments before in Priya's post... Its like frog jumping / hopping.


bang on suvi!!

u know suvi...that vest did not make sense either...
they should've shown sahir without any clothes on the top part of his body...but a wide crepe gauge bandaged all around his chest...
would've looked natural...and in some shots they could've shown sahir wearing a loose shirt...only one arm in...other arm just draped over with just one button hooked to keep the shirt in place...

a kurta is something a wounded person will never be able to wear!

and it was the same night coz sahir said..."aaj tumne meri jaan bachai"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soaps1

Sighs ... am tou still in shock SaAz daitey bhi hien tou aisey that u can't relate to most of it ... what was the kid sahir in the fruit scene? who was he? They don't even realize that even if he was like this 7 years ago (though i doubt) he is now 32 ... age ki bhi maturity hoti hai ke nahi? They don't even realize the importance of Sahir for their show ... I mean what helped arzoo redeem? His pain ... her feeling his pain made her mahan ... something they were trying to do since beginning but failed was done through his pain! Yet they keep playing with his character in ways that are beyond me ... The way they revealed he is an orphan was enough for me to guess they are not interested in focussing on him or his pain, something we have been waiting for so long ... the orphan thing should have been revealed through his thoughts ... his pain should be revealed through him for audience to connect to it ... for it to have more impact ... but na its revealed in cluster of so much going on

And what u have said agar dekhne ko mil jata tou iss show ka naam Hum-suufer thodi hota I mean they were poisoned ... to top it he was shot too ... poison was injected in him through blood stream which makes it more critical ... but not just that he is up before her his bandage is magically gone too 🤣 And its not even that they showed a leap of even one day it was the same night that is why door was open and arzoo ran to close it

The whole kiss scene was so misplaced too ... there was not enough build up to it

I don't know why asking for some character consistency and some story and screen play consistency is such a big thing ... this is a daily soap for heavens sake ... jitni detail sey KA ke different angles dikhatey ho slow motion mey ... utni detail mey SaAz kiun nahi dikh saktey why everything them has to be rushed

I mean theek hai we are helpless viewers at your mercy ... some stuck for Sahir some for SaAz but it does not mean you consider us dumb an akal less to take any non sense and senseless things you send our way ... its' actually not fair


i donno nads...i simply don't know!!
i was shocked wen sahir was in that kurta...and more shocked wen the bandage was missing!!!!

u know...seeing the pics...and spoliers...i felt...ki...they show the poisoning thing...and aarzoo saving him...both then recovering together...

midnight maybe sahir asks for food...aarzoo get the noodles...
then maybe a leap of a few days...with them showing hos sahir recovers...

uske baad comes the aarzoo waking up...sahir comforting and the almost kiss!...

then...the shayri scene...and how after the shayri scene...aarzoo tells him she knows his past...

it would've made more sense...and the development of the relationship would've been more impactful and beautiful...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettypri

You nailed it Vandy!

I just made a post highlighting some gems of yesterday's episode as well...so much material we have 😆.

The most ridiculous and out of place scene has to be the breakfast scene...and Sahir made to act like a little kid..he has still not opened up to her..he is still hiding his truth and masking his pain...even the previous night he did that..he diverted her..then how can he be so childish suddenly.

Him reciprocating to her care should have had him emotional and not bratty like he was...why should he eat so many fruits to show he appreciates her care???

Cvs really play with Sahir the most...everyone is redeemed and made to look good at the expense of this one character and still his essence is not given any value!


exactly...
i was waiting for an emotional sahir

i guess this is where a good director's vision comes to the forte...

a good director would've known wat exactly makes more sense and more impact

sorry to say but sachin deo verma and seema choudhary suck]:|]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why do I feel the directors have no clue what's going on 😕 a date not bothered about the little details that should be bought to each scene.. They are just doing thier job for the heck of it and the producers don't give a damn too
I really feel for the actors who are putting thier heart and soul to these characters HC and SP for sticking by with these crap 👏

Vandyji there u go few words more from me 😆

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