a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

Loved tis update

Tis was so sweet god
I was really aww struck becoz
Swayam the teenager was thr
Just lyk old tyms woh sharon ko
Ice cream ka lalach de rahha tha
Still the whole proposal was damm cute
Very emotional n romantically cute
I hav to say tis was the best sorry eva
Ani i really missed ur updates
Do update soon


thanks yaaa
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 17

"plss cookie...I am sorry... Wo mai khud baat karna chahta tha...but you know I was so damn confused... An musky ne pucha mujhse if anything was wrong...so...arrgghhh...i know I am good for nothing... But pls...talk to me nah... At least lets talk and sort it out..." swayam was desperately trying to make Sharon understand...

Sharon turned to look at him and rubbed her palms against each other in cold...

"don't you think... Its really cold ... mujhe hot chocolate peene hai..." she said casually...

"huh??? What?? Hot cho..." He didn't even completed his sentence in shock... He just turned to go to the extension phone and ordered two mugs of hot chocolate...

Sharon sat on the bed folding her legs and scanned the ceiling leisurely...

Swayam opened his mouth to say something but then decided against it... "pagal hai ye pura...confirmed..."

He stood there leaning on the window pane n kept looking at Sharon who royally ignored his presence...

Within a some minutes , the hot chocolate arrived... swayam opened the door...

He took the tray in hand and thanked the waiter...

"have a good night , sir..." the waiter wished him and turned to leave ... swayam balanced the tray in one hand and locked the door with another... "I hope I survive the night..." He muttered under his breath...

Swayam kept his hot chocolate on the table and gave one mug to Sharon...

"ye le..." he handed and her face beamed in joy... she immediately took a sip as the hot chocolate soothed her already cold body...

"cookie..." Swayam sat beside her on the bed facing her folding his legs...

Sharon looked at him and raised her brows...

"I really am sorry...uss raat mujhe tujh par chillana nahi chahiye tha..." He lowered his eyes... he picked the mug from the table and kept it on the bed...

Sharon kept sipping her hot chocolate... Swayam's face fell more...

"its okay if you need some more time...mai yahi hoon... Mai galat tha...n uske liye saaza to milni hi cahhiye... but remember mai humesha yahi hoon... Tere liye...tere saath..." he looked at er again but Sharon didn't look at him and concentrated on her drink...

Swayam gave a sad smile and was about to move away from the bed when he felt a tug at his sweat shirt... he immediately turned back to see Sharon glaring at him...

"how dare you...tu kitna mean hai... mai kabse bole ja rahi hoon that I am feeling cold and tu jar aha hai????" she frowned...

"haa...what?? Mera matlab..." he sat beside once again... N sharon entwined her elboes with swayam's and cuddled close to him keeping her legs stretched on his lap... She shifted a bit adjusting for a comfortable position and finally smiled satisfied with the comfort she was getting...

She finished her mug while swayam had just taken one sip from his mug...Sharon kept the empty mug on the side table and then snatched swayam's mug from his hands and sipped it...

"array..." swayam protested... Sharon looked at him cutely and said... " tune to apna pee liya nah???? Ye to mera hai..." And then she grinned and sipped his mug...

Swayam chuckled and hugged her closer to himself making her keep her head on the crook of his neck...

"cookie... I am sorry..." He started again...

"uff...tujhe samjh mein nahi ata?? If I am not replying...iska matlab hai I am genuinely not interested in this conversation!!!!" she snapped at him...

"so everything okay between us nah???" swayam aksed for the last time...

Sharon looked at him and glared and he bit his tongue...

"ek aur baar bola to baki chocolate mere pet pe nahi tere hair mein hoga,..." she sipped again...

"par you know maibe tujhe danta jabki galati mera tha..." He moved his lips on her ears feeling her scent...

"wo to hai...and uske liye tujhe meri baat manni paregi..." Sharon sat staright away from his arms looking at him...

"haa bol..." Said an unsure swayam...

"but you can't say no..." she warned...

"I never say no to you pagal..." Sharon smirked at his reply... she came close to him and sat on his lap encircling her hands round his neck and moved her face towards her ears...

Next thing swayam knew was Sharon whispering her demand in his ears...

"have you finally lost your mind?????aise kuch nahi hoga..." said a shocked swayam listening to her...

"you promised swayam..." Sharon smiled at her victory mischivously as she knew swayam has no other option but to agree to her crazy naughty idea...

SO HERE WAS THE UPDATE...LEAVE YOUR LIKES N COMMENTS...

LOVE ANI...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice

Loved it
So sharon maan gai

Bt what is it that she asked??

Thanks 4 d pm
Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
I'm really waiting for the next update to know Wat actually sharon told swayam
Ty for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
aswom update...

loved it...

shayad jo me soch rha hu wo hi uska naugghty plan...

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update soon!! Want to know the idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear
now what's her wish?? I'm so interested to know this...
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
speechless!
kya likha hai #respect as said earlier i don't have words to praise this piece of art
the sorry note of part16 was mind-boggling, i was like arre baap re how can somene be so creative in each and every update, aur uske pehle ke updates fighting, not talking to each other but still in each other's arms...
swayam's childish behaviour...sharon's royal ignorance to him...
everything yaar, like every damn thing was more than perfect...
aisa lag raha hai ki KHOOBSURAT ye word bhi bohot chota pad raha to describe the beauty of this FF...i just dont have enough words to praise it and your creativity...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update

swayam ne finally mana liya

der moment was damm cuet

bt wat did she told him

hope kuch jyada hi romantic ho

update soon

n thanx fr d PM

Mansi
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Posted: 10 years ago
eee 😃 update
ok you let us wait fr too long 😭
I love this SwaRon, tensed Swayam manaoing Sharon and Naughty Sharon enjoying adoring her cute husband 😆
as usual update was amazing but had fun element too this time ^_^
what is Sharon thinking 😲 she toh sat on his lap 😆 wifey getting naughty anf husband scared
its too much fun

update soon dying to know what she whispered in his ears 😲

thanks for PM

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