a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 56

Originally posted by: i_yatharthk

speechless!

kya likha hai #respect as said earlier i don't have words to praise this piece of art

the sorry note of part16 was mind-boggling, i was like arre baap re how can somene be so creative in each and every update, aur uske pehle ke updates fighting, not talking to each other but still in each other's arms...

swayam's childish behaviour...sharon's royal ignorance to him...

everything yaar, like every damn thing was more than perfect...

aisa lag raha hai ki KHOOBSURAT ye word bhi bohot chota pad raha to describe the beauty of this FF...i just dont have enough words to praise it and your creativity...

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

eee 😃 update

ok you let us wait fr too long 😭

I love this SwaRon, tensed Swayam manaoing Sharon and Naughty Sharon enjoying adoring her cute husband 😆

as usual update was amazing but had fun element too this time ^_^

what is Sharon thinking 😲 she toh sat on his lap 😆 wifey getting naughty anf husband scared

its too much fun

update soon dying to know what she whispered in his ears 😲

thanks for PM

Originally posted by: ujwalv

loved it.

awsome update..

wating fr d next update..

what is it that she asked?😉 😛

update soon..

Originally posted by: cherry_vrushan

firstly sorry foe being late😭😭...awesome update👏👏... finally sharon man hi gai.. waiting for her wish to unfold... loved that hot chocolate wala part😊😊 eagerly waitng for the next part... update asap nd do PM me...

Originally posted by: main_tu_hamesha

Jaldi update karo...aise latka dia beech mei...👏👏👏

PART 18

"COOKIE... Chup chap movie dekhte hai..." he glared at sharon listening to the pathetic demand she had made...

"dekh liya maine tera promise... tod diya na..." sharon's face fell and she was about to get down from his lap...

"array ye kya pagal pan hai????" swayam held her hands...

"I don't know anything!!!!!! I WANT TO GET DRUNK!!!!!!" she shouted...

"cookie..." He opened his mouth and then closed it again... he knew there's no point arguing with her...

"OKAY FINE... but I still don't think it's a nice idea..." swayam made a face...

"as if I care????" sharon smirked...

Swayam whinned like a baby and went to the extention phone and picked it to call in the reception...

"aur mujhe ullu maat samajhna... koi fattu cheeze mat mangwana... Mai experienced nahi hoon iska matlab ye nahi mujhe informations nahi hai... It should be strong..." Sharon called out...

Swayam ignored and called at the reception...

"good evening sir... how can I help you..." he heard a guy say...

"yeah right??? 11:30 at night n evening... Yeah of course good..." He thought ...

"wo one bottle of whisky...to room no 903..." he confirmed...

After some minutes , they heard the bell... Swayam opened the door ... It was the same waiter...

He took the packet and heard the waiter repeat what he had said some hours back...

"have a great night sir..." he closed the door...

"great my left foot!!!!" he mumbled and came inside...

"yaaayyy!!!!" he heard sharon shout in front of him jumping up and down...

Swayam glared at her and kept the bottle on the table...

Sharon came and hugged his forearm ...

"mera ek aur demand hai..." she sheepishly spoke...

Swayam looked at her with a horrified expression fearing another mini heart attack...

"wo you won't get to have a sip from this..." She pointed at the bottle...

"excuse me????? You are gonna have this alone????" he frowned... Sharon smiled cheekily and nodded in a yes...

"movie dekhte hai????" sharon offered...

Swayam and sharon sat on the bed comfortably wrapping a blanket on themselves watching ye jawani hai deewani...

Sharon finished her first glass within ten minutes... Swayam kept looking at her from time to time checking her... soon she refilled her glass...

They had been watching the movie for an hour now...swayam had wrapped his arms round her shoulder and she had crossed her legs on his lap keeping her head on his shoulder...

"tum jaisi larki flirting k liye nahi...ishk ke liye bani ho...

Aur ishk mere sehad k liye acha nahi hai..." Bunny told naina in the movie and Sharon chuckled...

"tere tarah nahi hai... Seekh liya nah??? Kaise flirt karte hai???? Mumbai jaane k time pe air hostess se thik tarah se flirt karna..." Sharon laughed...

Swayam's ears turned red with embarassment...

"I was not flirting okay????i was talking..." he tried to reason...

"haa haa pata hai... kya bola tha??? Hot hai yaar???? Mere samne kyun bola??? Use bolta to baat age barti..." Sharon winked at him...

Swayam looked at her and gave a sheepish smile...

"and you wouldn't mind if baat age barti????" he smirked... Sharon looked at him and kept the glass on the bed...

"dekh... Agar aisa hua... To I'll pity that girl jise tujhe jhelna padega... By the way... use best of luck kehe dungi but you know... Tujhe shayad maar dalungi..." she smirked...

"jealous???" he smiled...

"jealous hoti to wohi tujhe flight ke door khol ke niche gira deti..." Both laughed out loud at this...

"uss pahar ke hawao mein ek nasha sa tha...

Aur wo nasha ishk tha!!!!

Maine apni life mein itni khushi kabhi mehsoos nahi kit hi...

Mujhe nahi pata woha bhairav ke mandir tha ya nahi...

Par mai ek duya mangna chahti thi...

Bohut hi simple...in fact sirf ek word..." as the voice of deepika padukone as naina filled the air of the room...

Sharon whispered swayam...' As naina in the movie said bunny'...

Swayam immediately smiled looking at her... she was blinking her eyes as the drink started to mix her senses...he entwined his hands tightly with hers...

"bol de na Sharon..." swayam looked at her... she knew what swayam wanted to hear from her mouth...

"kya????" Sharon went closer to him and breathed in his ears...

"please..." he held her waist pulling her more close on his lap as Sharon dug her face into his neck...

"tu kitna bara stupid hai malum hai tujhe???? Pata hai tujhe ... Uss din jab radhika wapis ayi... Hum dono ne usse mila parking lot mein... I felt my life going away from me... iss liye nahi kit u shayad mere age use choose karta... But is liye ki I couldn't imagine myself as a second option in your life... so selfish of me right?????" she pulled back and looked at him... swayam moved the hair away from her face...

"aisa din kabhi nahi ayega... Jis din tu mujhe bulaygi aur mai kisi aur larki k liye nahi ayungi tere paas to soch lena k I am giving a bath to our daughter..." He pinched her nose... Sharon smiled widely...

Swayam was now not thinking that fulfilling her wish was not a bad idea...at least she is speaking her heart...

" uss raat...pata nahi kya ho gaya tha???? Hum kitne kareeb aye..." he understood that she was talking about the time they kissed...

"haa...I know...pata hai kyun??? Kyunki kahin na kahin we knew that hum dono ek dusre ko involuntarily accept kiya..." He reasoned...

"humne nahi...sirf tune... Kyunki mujhe to ye malum tha... hamesha se..." she gave a dreamy look to him...

"and I promise... is stupidity ki varpayi mai puri zindegi karunga..." swayam kissed her forehead...

Sharon moved forward to take a sip from her glass when swayam held her hands...

"chor aur nahi..." he warned...

"please..." She pouted and swayam could't say no to her...

They had almost forgotten that they were watching the movie...

"mai agar yaha do minute aur ruki to mujhe tumse pyaar ho jayega... Firse

Aur tumhe nahi hoga firse..." They heard naina say from the LED screen...

Sharon kept her head on his shoulder hugging his arms... " use bhi hoga... Firse nahi...kyunki wo pyaar to kabhi gayab hua hi nahi tha... bas chupa hua tha..." swayam heard Sharon say and didn't take a second to understand what she meant but still don't say what he wanted to hear...

THIS IS THE LAMEST CHAPTER I HAVE WRITTEN...😭😭😭...I READ IT AND FELT THAT ITS THE WORST OF THE LOT... WHATEVER... PLEASE BARE WITH IT N DO LEAVE LIKES N COMMENTS...

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