new fanfic...'I Am Sorry' page 4

hi guys.. i was just bored so decided to write a fanfic.. even though i got one to continue which is about premukti buh i will continue that one later...soon.lol.

so here goes nothing:

this fanfic is gonna be basically about harry potter people.... BUT..... yea a big but...there will be no magic!!

i knoe knoe but lets see how it all works out//

its gonna be like a regular people world..muggle world as i shud say..and here are the charcters..::

harry potter: funny and loves to fool around with his best friends in school but sumtimes..when things are serious ..then he is tooo..
alot ov girls wanna go out with him and he's such a flirt..

ron wesley: funny and very close to harry... knoes whats bothers him or what is up with him...loves to tease hermione....he's a flirt

hermione granger: very very VERY studious.. buh always there for her best friends..cares alot for them..hates it when ron bothers her

ginny wesely: a shy and a simple girl.. ron's sister.. she dosn't care for what people think of her.. she's gud the way she is..has a
crush on harry buh no one knoes that buh sumone finds out soon enough...who??

luna lovegood: oh what can i say abt her.. same jk rowling luna and yea she's always lost in her own world but she's the
funniest from the girls..since ginny is shy and hermione doesn't get tyme off her studies.. she fools around with her best mates..

draco malfoy: a total flirt..changes girls every other days...but has no interst in finding a true love..loves his friens and can do anything for them
( he is not like the jk rowling draco..he is very cute here and nice)..loves to make fun ov luna even though he knows she minds sumtimes buh he
cant help it..

so this is like a whole group..all six ov them are best ov friens since middle school and now all are together in the same highschool..they are
sophemore though ( in 10th grade)..every person in the school knows them and is very scared ov them since they are very popular..

boys becuz
ov thier luks and attitudes... and grls becuz ov thier beauties and plus they all are rich...phew....

hey guys can any ov you decide a gang name for these.. plz.. me and my sister tried many buh can't cum up with a good one

so guys this was a intro ..other charters will be introduced soon later on in the story..so telll me if you guys like it and then i will continue..

k..

promo::

u see a huge mansion type school..then you see many cheerleading girls sneaking in the main gym..

all the girls are giggling..

you see these three boys playing basketball but can't see their faces..all three ov them are very in to their game when one ov them..who's hair color is a kinda red is finally about to score when sumone scream from the back:

a girl: ronald wesley!!! how dare you!!

all three ov the boys stop and the girls stop giggling..all scared.. the guy with the basket ball turns around..

the girl: what the heck have you done with my homework

the other two guys: uh oh...this is bad..

thats it guys.. leave your comments and tell me if i shud i continue.. thanks

loads of love::

bisma

omg!
this is so exiting!
you know i was picturing the three boys playing like sager when he was fine!
plz continue soon!!! so exited!
im gonna love this! plz continue soon..like tommorrw or somethin 😳 😃


Arfa 👍🏼 gud luc!

i'm still waiting plz continue
i'm so exited to read it!
you're doing g8 jog 👏

i'm still waiting for you to cont
cnt soon plz! 😃 👏

this seems very exciting plz do write it im eagerly waiting to read it 😊

YES YES YES!..I've been waiting for something like this!..hopefully Draco-Luna will be together! 😃

this is cute...u shud continue

This is off topic, but Boy_inthe_club- have you made an introduction in the new members section yet? I have not seen your name in there and noticed your a new member. If not, I'll be looking forward to seeing your introduction.

As for Bisma, your idea sounds interesting I'm looking forward to catching the first chapter!!!!!!! Would there be any chance of seeing my beloved Sirius?



~Lady Black~

Originally posted by: *Daddy's*Angel*

omg!
this is so exiting!
you know i was picturing the three boys playing like sager when he was fine!
plz continue soon!!! so exited!
im gonna love this! plz continue soon..like tommorrw or somethin


Arfa gud luc!

thanks alot arfa for your encouragement..will surely continue today

Originally posted by: **Shona**

this seems very exciting plz do write it im eagerly waiting to read it

THANKS alot shona...will continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: xo-Krupa-ox

YES YES YES!..I've been waiting for something like this!..hopefully Draco-Luna will be together!

thanks krupa for you cute comment...awww i knoe right..even i like thier pairing...just love them
so much....will continue todaii..

Originally posted by: shamlal

this is cute...u shud continue

thanks shamlal will continue todai

Originally posted by: boy_inthe _club

hey HATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it.. great intro..plz continue soon..

thanks will continue soon...

Originally posted by: Lady Black

As for Bisma, your idea sounds interesting I'm looking forward to catching the first chapter!!!!!!!
Would there be any chance of seeing my beloved Sirius?



~Lady Black~

THANKS lady black...i knoe i was lyke thier no fanfics about harry potter and the gang so i though
why not give it a try??..and yea.. there will be serius here..but not as harry's god father!!! read my
fanfic to find out..


thanks you all for your wondeful comments..i was hoping for more but i guess not many people at active
these days at hogwarts i meant hp forum..,..your comments have encouraged me alot guys and i won't let
down..the next part will up in a few minutes as i'm about to finish typing it..

loads of love

bisma

hehe..you won't belive it..but I was gonna start a FF myself..but i'll start it later..