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Posted: 18 years ago
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"FRIENDS FOREVER!"


Bayside Highschool

its a beautiful monday morning and everyone was present at the school..sum playing in the school yard where you can play any type ov sport....sum students just studing or working on thier
project at a place where only geeky kids are seen ..and sum just waiting for yet another day at bayside highschool..
....so you see a girl with a paper in her hand which is half ripped..you don't see her face but her bushy blonde hair can give you sum hint..
she passes a fellow clasmate....her classmate, jonelle, who was buzy putting on lipgloss looked up as the girl made her way to her

the girl: hey jonelle..have you seen ronald i mean ron anywhere?? she says with an angry expression..
jonelle: oh..urmm yea he's actually with his mates in the main gym..why anything special..
the girl didn't even bother to hear the rest of the story as she made her way to the big main gym leaving with a "thanks.."..as she walked.. her fist clutched on to the paper she was holding

at the main gym..the cheerleading girls were yet peeking from a far distance where u can't see them...they all just wanted to get a peek at the three boys who were buzy playing basket ball.

first guy: hey dude you now you will lose to me so why even bother??

second guy: trust me.. this tyme he'll make it..

third guy: i don't know but i just have a bad feeling about sumthing..

first guy: yeaa okey...gus..he knows he'll lose..agian....now shoot man..

third: yea.. here goes..

" Ronald Wesley!!"

the other two guys: uh oh...this is bad..

ron slowly closed his eyes at this: i told you i had a bad feeling...

ron or "ronald" slowly turned around....under his breath he slowly said.."hermione??!!??.."

hermione: how dare you?? what have you done to my homework...she said holding the half ripped paper in front of the guys..

second guy: look hermione..he just--

but hermione didn't let him speak..she continued: no harry.. you are not going to make it up for him this tyme.. this was my history homework..which was due
today and i know you have no idea of what i'm talking about so be quiet..so..what happen here?? she said as she threw the paper at ron..

ron: urmm i ..huh...

the first guy: dude did your cat ate it??

ron: urmm actually draco..ate it..

both harry and hermione : what the??

draco who was just shock at ron for cuming up at the lamest excuse ever said: get a life man..seriouly..i may be hungry but not that hungry to eat a geek's
paper..( at this hermione gave him a look)..i mean you knoe.. why me??

h: luk ron..i don't like fighting with you like this but you always do that??why always take my homework and don't take responsiblity ov it...now what am i gonna do about it..

ron was about to say: do it over but though that he shud better be quiet...

now ron had his head down ans slowly said: i'm sorry

but it was too late..hermione just left..

draco: i told you you'll lose..

harry: hey draco..chill man.. hermione's upset and ron.. make it up man..

ron: i hope ginny dosn't know abt this..

at a bench a girl is reading a love story...as she sees hermione cumin..she put her book down and mutters.."that idiot ron"

ginny needed no explanation and tried to make hermione happy..

g: luk..people make mistakes

h: but why always with me...that jerk has no idea of what he's done.. i'm never gonna talk to him..

just then ron came with draco and harry:

ron: luk i'm sorry..(hermy didn't luk at him)..what i did was wrong, and and if you wish then you can have my homework....he handed her
his homework which he had copied off from hers..

hermy: listen.. just shut up k?? and dont show any sympathy with me..i'm fine..
and with that she ginny left from there...

harry: man you messed up big tyme here..

draco: real big

ron: man..i hate this!!

'''***'''***'''***'''***
hours passed and they were all in lunch. hermione was still not talking to ron and she was still angry at him. she some how, after alot of perssuation by
ginny, manage to lie to her history teacher, mrs. cohen, who she had second period. "urmm i ..ah..left my homework at home..sorry" hermione had said.
ofcourse mrs.cohen believed her and told her that her homework will be accepted tomorow as she had a valid reason. and plus since hermione never
missed any other homeworks, she got off easily.

the lunch was usually gross. ron and hermione were sitting feets apart and there was no talking. harry couldn't bare his two best briend to be not talking. this
just can't be happening. he finally broke the silence.

harry: what is this guys?? just because of some stupid fight you guys are not gonna talk to each other?

at this hermione didn't look up and continue munching on her sun chips.ron, however, got up from his place and took his tray to garbage can.
as he was almost there, he bumped in to someone familiar.

the person: hey watch out!
ron: sorry...hey..luna!!
luna: ron! (they both hugged)
r: wats up with you??why weren't you in any of the classes?
l: oh...see i had a docter appointment so ofcourse they excused my.. anywayz... forget about me..wats up with the group lately..they all look so dull
she said as she examine her group.
r: you see.. me and hermione had a row..
l: again?!
r: wat you mean by again? and now she's not not even talking to me...
luna muttered to herself: i don't blame her..
r: AND i, ron weseley even said SORRY to her.. i mean can you beleive it??
l: wow.. so much happened..hermy actually made ron say sorry.. how did i even miss that..
r: ha-ha.. very funny
l: well then come here.

both of them made their way to the group

harry: hey luna!
" hey...don't ask.... i had a doc. appointment" said luna as she guessed ginny's up coming question.

draco: oh.. for a sec i thought that loony lovegood was actually cutting her classes!
luna: hmmm nice idea lover boy..why didn't i think of that before..
draco: loser
luna: idiot
draco: ugly
luna: nasty
draco: stupid
luna: dumbo
hermione: ENOUGH!
hermy: okey i get the fact that me and ron fight and that is a bit normal but since when you too??
ginny and harry just couldn't stop laughing but they had to controll it as hermione stared at them

hermy: and you! she turned to ron
hermy: you just--
ron: i'm sorry...

see that how ron was. he would never leave a chance when it comes to melting away hermione's heart and he was a bit successful at this
hermione just turned away from ron and forced a smile

harry noticed it and said " u see no matter how much we fight.." he said as he looked at ron and then hermione
ginny continued: "no matter how much we get upset with each other...." she said as she looked at luna who was glaring at draco.. who then looked at ginny
luna: "we always stay together and"
draco: "are always there for each other..."
ron: "and always fight more"
every one looked at hermione who looked up and slowly said
hermione: "and that is what you call.."
with this all six of them got up and said: "friends forever!..."


well thats it guys.. i knoe that was a stupid start..well let me knoe if you guys liked and if not then don't feel that i'll feel bad or anthing..just post what you feel about the first part..sorry if i made any mistakes...


loads of love

bisma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: xo-Krupa-ox

hehe..you won't belive it..but I was gonna start a FF myself..but i'll start it later..

really..wud love to read it..and hey i love your prem mutki siggie!😳

bisma

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
IT WAS NOT STUPID..it was amazingly cutee!

but doesn't hermy have brown hair?

I loved it!..i can't wait til all the couples get together *squirms* *squirms more*

I don't wanna start the FF til after school starts, so then i'll have time to write!..soo yeahh
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
the fanfic was gr8 to read
plz continue 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
nice1...
i luved the first part can't w8 to read the second part

i luved the part when draco and luna fight!!! 😆 😆
plz cont soon 😛 😳

Arfa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
wow that was really gud!cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
continune like this story is 2 good
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
when are you continueing?..its been forever since i've read the last part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
hey~

u have done a nice job

to describe almost each one here

its easy to understand 4 new comers

Bizzykizzy thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks you all!! lub you guys!!

that afternoon:

all six of them were walking to their home.

ron: i hate school.. can you belive it..i already got 4 tests and it's only the second week of school..urgh curse who ever invented school!!

hermy: ron! stop whining like a child!.. your not a kid anymore..just grow up..

draco: what?!! he's telling the truth...i can't belive i got a english project to do and wow i'll actually do it.. just can't resist that pretty teacher..what's her name...

harry: ms. gill? she's pretty hot but i heard she's getting engaged..

draco: what! but why?

luna: well um maybe because she wants someone to play with her?

draco: huh?

luna: you're such a loser you knoe

draco: yea whatever!!

ginny: stop it you two...i'm getting really late so i gota go..ron you cuming?

ron: huh?! oh me ..urm no i'll cum later...

ginny: k.. bye guys.. see u later

all: bye
ginny leaves and goes in a car

hermione: you noe.. you are so not a good brother..

ron: what? what did i do?

luna: you shouldn't have let her go all by herself

haryy-draco: yea..

ron: now you guys too..she's not a kid anymore.. she can go so just chill..anyways.. i'm getting thirsty..(he suddenly sees Baskin Robins..lol)..hmm i wanna blast..guys wanna cum

draco: urm i gota go see susan.. she's waiting for me behind the ahem-ahem..tree

harry: yea like we care just leave

draco: bye dudes and he leaves

luna: sure we'll cum ron..i'm thirssty too..now that lover boy is gone we can relax

all four enter Baskin Robins and found their perfect table...it also had thier innitails on it..the owner didn't mind that since they were really nice to him..

owner: hey folks.. how's school?

harry: good..what's with you lately? had a good summer

owner: yea it was okay.... so what can i get you guys?

ron: urm two capaccino blast..large ones and thats; it

they all sat down and talked about random stuff while luna and ron drink thier blasts..and hermione read shakespeare's biograpgy

harry: did you guys hear about the sophmore trip?

ron: yea i did

hermione who had no idea of what they were talking about looked up and said: what trip?

harry: the trip to some camp.. we'll have to stay over for like a week

luna: wow that's cool

hermy: hmmm when is it?

ron: i don't knoe like maybe in march..

luna: okay so that's a bit too far...

hermy: i can't come

harry-luna: what? but whhy?

hermione: see i'm in so many clubs and they wouldn't want me to leave thier club and go camping around,,

luna: but hermione!! it's gonna be so much fun..plz try to come'

hermione: guys i can't..sorry

harry: no this is not fair..

ron: hey guys just stop it k? if she doesn't wanna come then who cares? anywayz..it doesn't make any difference even if you come or not..it's okay.. nobody is gonna miss you..but i'll feel sorry for that poor niville.. who would look after him?

luna: ron!

rom just shrugged and left Baskin Robins

hermione had tears in her eyes and just looked down ..she too got up and left

harry: luna .. you noe something?

luna: yea..i do

harry: they both are weird

luna: yup..cutely wierd!

and with that they both left Baskin Robins with some wierd thoughts

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i'm sorry guys for giving you guys such a boring update and sooo chowy for updating after so long... i will only be able to update only when i'm free from school work and thanks alot for you lovely commments!!!''

luv you all,

bisma
Edited by bisma_4eva! - 18 years ago

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