new fanfic...'I Am Sorry' page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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IT WAS NOT BORING!..it was awesomeeeeee..i was waiting for when you'd update

do Heron always fight!😆..


btw, i thought they were at Baskin robins?..how come they're in Dunkin Donuts now?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Krupa-

IT WAS NOT BORING!..it was awesomeeeeee..i was waiting for when you'd update

do Heron always fight!😆..


btw, i thought they were at Baskin robins?..how come they're in Dunkin Donuts now?

thanks alot for liking it!! i knoe they always fight so much... but you know the thing right? the more you fight, the more yu love that person...yea i knoe i made a mistake.. i changed it now.. that time i was so sleepy so wrote dunkin donuts cause i was eating munchkins...lolzzzz...anywhooo.. thanks alot for the lovely comment.. keep them coming guys!!

bisma

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsome Chapter, you hsould start writing more often so we can have some activity in the Forum. This forum has been very quite since the Deathly Hallows Buzz has died down.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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as soon as hermione entered her house, she ran to her room and slamed her bedroom door..

her mother sensed something was wrong so she made her way to hermy's room...

in hermione's room, it was full of books, there was a computer by her bed side and it was just like an ordinary room.. nothing exciting...

why does he do that with me? hermione thought while her tears were sliding down her cheeks..
"i hate him! i hate that retard!", she said to herself..
but just then her mother entered.
"oh my god my poor baby! are you alright?" hermione's mom said hugging her daughter tightly...
"mom, i hate him you know i hate that stupid!" hermy replied..."who hunny?" her mom asked..
"ron and who else could it be that can make me cry like this mom?" said hermione now wiping her tears..
"oh.." her om said and then smiled a little.
"why are you smiling? it is not funny...he hurts my feelings and doesn't even care and-" "hermione, listen to me", her mom interrupted. "yes?" "look, you and ron have known each other since childhood...if he makes says somthing to you which may hurt your feelings, then don't take it very seriously, it's just that he is use to it" "but it's getting annoying now and he-" said hermy but then was interrupted by her mom again." he is a boy hermione and boys are like that they will make you cry but then later on learn their mistakes..watch, when he realizes his mistake he will make it up to you" said her mother. "he will?", asked hermy. "yes, trust me he will or maybe just now this stupid phone will ring and you never know, it might be ronald!" her mom finsihed.."it's actually ron mom " hermy said now smiling.."aw okay now you go fresh your self and then we'll go to the mall" "noo i have alot of work to do so forget about shopping" "hermy hermy...when will you understand?" her mother shook her head. "no mom when will you understand? okay now leave i have alot of work to do and you know what i don't care about that loser anymore" and with that she shooed her mom out of her room and began working at once.

outside her room her mother said "she does care" and smiled and left.

mean while at ron's house:

"WHAT!!" ginny said as luna told everything to her about what ahd ahppened. "i'll get him and how did that stupid harry let all this happen? i'll get both of them todai!" both luna and ginny rushed to ron's room who was playing his PS3 and had alot of girl's posters in his room.

"ron you are such a jerk!" said ginny shuting his game of. "are you crazy? i was gonna beat that game and i didin't even save it!!" he said now getting up. "you ahve no right tohurt my friend's feeling like that" "well what ever i don't care just leave me alone" said ron. "no ron", said luna, "we are not leaving until you call her up and say sorry or else me and ginny will get draco and harry to jump you and yes i mean it!" "what the?!" he said " plz just leave from here okay?" "no leaving until you say sorry" said both ginny and luna. "alright you fools, wait here and watch i'll say sorry to her right now but you better leave or else i'll get all my girl friends to jump you" said ron
and dialing hermy's number from his cell...after a while he disconnected it saying it was buzy and luna and ginny left his room in frustation

meanwhile....hermy was talking to harry on the phone.

hermy: yes harry i'm perfectly fine..and plz stop worring about me so much i'm okay

harry: you sure?

hemy: yezzzz

harry: so did ron call?

hermy: why would he...

herry: to say sorry

hermy: i'll call you back someone is calling me

hermione disconects and takes the other line

hermy: hello?

ron: i'm sorry

hermione: ron!!??

okay guys i'll update later i know it was boring and forgive me if i made any mistakes and i'm sorry i ubdated it after a log time because i was buzy

take care and lots of lub,

bisma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its so lolzzz... 🤣 i lubed it!well plz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks arfa!

hey guys you didn't like the part? i'm sorry if i'm anot ablt to fill your expectations 😭 but hey plz read and comment and lemme know if i should contiune it or not

take care

lots of lub
bisma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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srry 4 late reply darling...its suppperb really!!!!brillaint 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
o this os really good
please cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
bisma vere r u dear???? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
superb,continue asap 👏 👏 👏

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