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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Fr d frst am waiting fr d clock to tick monday... yeh monday kab hoga yaar...
Congrats fr d second thread just with two chapters n two teasers
Edited by BroknAngel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
congrats!
New thread after jst 2 updates. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for the new thread!! 🥳
this is just the begining, i m sure that this story going to bind more more threads.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratz on the new thread...
Can't wait for the update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
RES for lala
unres...love u :)

awesome update...its getting very very interesting :)...

loving lavuu here :)...she is true sense a sensible and concern friend...loving khushi and lav amazing understanding ...deeps its beautiful when she felt the kick of baby and felt the life inside...loved the way it lit up the light of hope in her ..that this time its going to be fine

i need to salute u for writing karan's character so amazingly...just three chaps up and hatred for him is at heights ...uff wt apathetic guy he is ...and one can feel the pain more as knowing the reality of such men ...its not at all easy for any girl to live life with such heartless soul...wt a real world picture right here in front of eyes...u superb deeps

loved the bubbly khushi saying sorry to dr ...arnav khushi bumping into each other beautifully written...

khushi being sick and fainted...poor girl...wt she is going through..

khushi sharing his touch feelings with lavuu...its breath taking wt she felt and shared...simply fabulous writing deeps...u r superb in bringing out right emotions at right time...the whole scene for me is the wow one...loved it to the core...loved the way both friends were drooling on dr..this reminds me of u and me...hahaha :)

good to see arnav damn professional...thinking things fishy the way he took dr deshmukh class ...it was awesome :)..

poor girl under blood tests and all...she fainted and didn't remembered anything..

loved the way u have shown khushi and karan 's bedroom talks...i have found very very sensible khushi right there...things we like instead of things we don't like...simply superb writing deeps...karan is hell crook...no doubt..

oh cliff hanger in the end ...DR R and khushi again face to face...its beautifully written..

waiting eagerly for the next...


Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Hello I am back with my chatter. I hope you missed me 😆🤣 . Coming to the update.
Every would be Mother want to enjoy each every moment of her pregnancy with her husband. She wants her husband to experience the babies first kick. Khushi expected the same but she is not getting it but when Arnav touched her with care she felt happy.

Loved the way Khushi spoke about Dr.R to Lavanya hehehe. So Arnav started digging into the corruption that is going on in the hospitals interesting need to see what is hidden under the rug. What happened to Khushi .

Beautiful update
Edited by Srilathalolla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all, thousand apologies for not commenting earlier. I can't imagine how life can be so hectic, even though I'm studying from home😕

Coming to the update, it was truly a magical update. For me, this would be the most important chapter of the whole story. And I'm sure you know why. This is where both their hearts bonded. It may have not happened in words, but this was it! Arnav's simple gesture made Khushi realize what she was lacking in her life, and at the same time she started to look at the life in a different manner. I'm sure with time she will realize the real image of her name-for-sake husband.

The bond Khushi and Lavanya share is amazing. Lavanya is a true friend, who would always be there for Khushi no matter what. What I adore most about her is the fact that she is not afraid of letting out what she feels about everything happening around her. This in a way would help Khushi to shape up her life in the future.

Okay, I'm not liking this Dr. Deshmukh period! Lets see what kind of person she is in the future updates😡

Thanks for sharing this heart touching update with us🤗

I really loved the chapter a lot❤️

Will comment on the rest of the chapters soon😊
Edited by V3Od - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too good. I just can't get enough of the update. Waiting 4 next update will not be easy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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God..what's happening with khushi? So all her abortions are because of her husband. Why do people like him live in this world? And doctors like deshmukh should be thrown out of medical field. I am sure arnav is going to do it soon. So worried about girls pushed to situations like this through marriage.
Happy to see khushi voice out her feelings to lavanya. She is a great friend and I think going to play a major role in uniting them. Heart breaking to listen khushi explaining her feelings to lavanya. Sex-nnocense.. ha.. that was 😉. Arnav is super flirt and sooo cute. Arnav entering the doors to meet his future.. awesome deepthi.👏
Edited by kaprasin - 10 years ago

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