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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 10 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#682

awesome update...its amazing to see how beautifully in just 2 chaps u have shaped up the characters of arnav and khushi...and rest people around...its awesome to see how u champion in building ur characters so fab

khushi being so naive and innocent...ready to please hubby ...bringing out positivity even from worst...trusting the man whom is nothing but selfish mean guy...he is rude true sense jerk...selfish enough just to satisfy his needs he using a naive girl .,the way he asked for sex..uff,heartless...hearing sorry from her seems like healthy food to his ego...its pathetic

and arnav being such a caring,fun and damn professional...its amazing ...his character worth appreciating just like khushi

its painful to see how easily khushi being used up by crook husband ...how this innocent soul consoling herself in best positive way...its amazing to read how u have shown not a dumb khushi here...if i see it properly khushi did felt bad on different points when it is required but again being positive she having ability to come out of it happy and cheerful once again...thats amazing deeps...wt i have learnt from her ...dard kiya hay ous ko pata hay but she such sweet soul her preference in life seems to ,not sulk but infact keeping people around her happy...makes herself happy

arnav ,mom dad scene beautifully written...and wt an amazing relation they all shared...well educated family... giving space ...respecting each other words...its fab to read...so arnav single and ready to mingle...lol...thats cool ...and he wanted homely wify thats another beauty of ur writing ...u giving respect to simple girl here showing even highly qualified doctor can dream a life with simple girl :)...thats beautiful...u have given dreams to eyes here :)

loved anjali arnav and arjun trio...beautiful friendship they r sharing...these childhood friends seems like had shared real fun times...pad for analysis and aunties drool worthy ...lol...

karan pathetic...uff i am cursing him again...how he is treating a preg wife...uff...but loved the way her pallu stucks in arnav's stethoscope...wt a moment :)...fab update deeps...loved it to the core

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#683

First thing Anrav and Khushi are not a couple. Khushi has all the qualities that Arnav wanted in a wife.

Yes there are so many husbands who are very manipulative and who likes to dominate their spouse. This is the worst thing in a marriage. As long as the wife is submissive and will not raise her voice she is been titled as the best babhu and once she starts raising her voice she is titled as Characterless.

What can I say about Karan , there are many men out in the real world like Karan , Hey Deepthi did you watch the movie Nuvvu Naaku Nachavu in that movie , there is a scene between Aarthi Agrawal and Suhasini where she says " Mee Mavayya cheddavadu Kadu mamulu mogudu" I remembered that dialogue when I read the scene between Karan and Khushi.

Love the scene between Arnav and his parents they look more like friends than parents and son and Love the families like that 😃 .

Amazing update

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#684

hell lot of confusion yaar but liked the characterization of each one... would have to wait for chapters to unfold to get a clear picture

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jeetega

@jeetega

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#685

sweetheart, you know how to make my Monday mornings, better than getting bed coffee, thanks Deepu :-)

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#686

Unres..

Again such a bold concept deepthi. Congrats for that. So many women in our society are suffering like this and husband's taking advantage of their innocense. And so many confusions cleared in this one update. I already hate that karan.

In the end her pallu gets caught in stethoscope.. ayeee... reminded me of ipkknd where her dupatta gets caught in his watch.. "thinking and dreaming" sigh..miss them.

Now this one week update is not working deepthi. You are so sweet to give us a good start of week, but your updates makes us selfish. Is this much sweet enough to make 2 days update a week? Or dharna-dhamki?? Or 😭.. anything u prefer.. but change your mind..please..

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Jayanthi

@jayanthinag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#687

Karan metha is such a dominating and manipulating, selfish man.. Lets see how he reacts to the meeting between flirt raizada and khushi... I am sure he will be an arrogant jerk..