This is one of the few MaNan OS I have read... Girl the way u have written it...u hv nailed it!! The pain of Nandini was so clearly written... I could feel it happening...when I went ahead and read... The words...the expressions used...were so perfect and put at the right place...it had the desired effect...! Gosh girl u have a magically way of expressing angst...one of the best...i hv read on IF... N lemme let u noe...dat I have read a lot being a angst lover... I believe it's the toughest genre to write about...and u hv done a flawless job...the broken jar...and Manik...thinking its beyond repairable...u nailed it...the intensity was also another thing u wrote wid beauty!!
its such a beautifully written piece...the emotions, raw and fierce and helpless, so perfectly penned...your words truly did paint the scene of a broken nandini, her pain and her anger at herself, and also of a manik who realised among the shattered glass pieces what he has broken forever.
love usually creates the strongest illusions and gifts the harshest disillusionment
Cricket
O Humnava Tum Dena Saath Mera
Anupamaa
