MaNan OS~ Echoes - Page 3

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Nice os and I'l waiting for the nxt one which u hv promised will nt be a sad one. Ahh! now a days everything is so gloomy just bcoz of one stupid person one stupid decision.
Waiting for haapy days.

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Great story! I think we are all in the same boat emotions wise.. love you Manik but I hope she makes you work for the love & trust you so easily threw away!😭

Anyway, loved the angst... great job!👏

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Lovely work @gujjupari, love the way you write. You described the pain and the angst so well kudos to you for that. Keep writing and wish you luck for your cramming and examination.. 😊

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Unres meri maa!😆

Originally posted by: gujjupari

So what does this teach baccha party? Don't sacrifice! Do you share your food? Do you share your jalebis? Nahin nah? Bas! No sacrifice! Otherwise Imma be slapping your head!

Love,

Pari

Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane

Suha, bae is MINE! Shoo!

I was angry, bas. 😳 *off to read*

Edit: Shit shit shit shit! That was beautiful. I'm glad I read it now, coz my mind is so at calm.

The pain was described wonderfully. I feel so terrible for her coz she has to put up a brave front, for her family. She wanted to scream but she couldn't. Such pain, much heartbreak.

And his words, those words are going to sting her every day, she'll question every moment they spent, this is going to be so hard. Ugh.

P.S. I'm gonna share a secret through PM or something. I have an image to protect, so can't blurt it here. 😆

Originally posted by: nyxx

Beautiful. Nandani's pain and all those bubbling questions were described so wonderfully, Pari (?). But it was the end that really touched me. Her letting go of the fireflies jar, and Manik gathering it and carrying it with him. What was hers is his now. If he was the reason she had to let them go, He will be the reason to bring them back to her. Full circle.

Thank you for the OS!

- Dee

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Beautifully penned down❤️

lovedd itt!!!!

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez

It is a very beautiful and truly shows how much pain nandu is in well written

Originally posted by: topsy003

awww... Thank u so much for listening to us and writing.. *wipes the tears* *gets ready to give u a BIG hug*🤗

honestly it was so nice that i don't even mind if its angst and not something romantic..

u described Nandini's emotions and inner turmoil so well 👏

P.S: sorry for the late reply 😕 i had missed ur post by mistake. and ya please do keep writing!!!

love

amby