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Awesome scary story 😃

Rk is also dead that's shocking 😲

u know at night i was thinking abt this only !!!!

Originally posted by: Ni33

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Well you thought about the Grudge. I'm thinking to watch the Ring all over again.😆 Tell me is it a good idea now when I have an exam next week,🤣

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

ofcourse I am going to discourage you to watch a movie before exam...😳
get over wd ur exams and set ur mood all over again😆

Originally posted by: Ni33

If only life was that simple. 🤣 I have two courses that begins the very next week and 2 weeks lectures only to have two new exams right after the holidays.🤣 So mission failed.🤣 Cause after those exams I have to start another new course and then exam in that.🤣 The evil circle continues till may or june.🤣 Believe it or not. Thinking about the future (what's to come in school) is way scarier than this story.🤣

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

Oh My God...
you are stuck babe...😲 its really scary..
lot of exams... i wonder how you pull it all off and still are so jolly..

in that case finish the movie off in one night..😆😃

i am joking... ofcourse do what feels best for you..

Haha...Finally I got one ROMANTIC story from u, Killer. Yahoo!! its party time for me!! LOL

Never in my wildest dream I thought u would show a Bath Tub Romance LOL. U reminded me of Rishbala's bath tub romance before their proper marriage in serial LOL!!

Aww...how Rohan one by one washed madhu's hand, then calves, then toe,...so blushy blushy yaar!! if I was in Rk's place I would have taken the body wash from the slab & given to Rohan to clean her well as she smells like foul!! haha...Rohan has OCD problem I think. He want everything to be cleaned so he even took her eye ball out but instead of soaking it for foam wash he smashed it...why?? oh may be Rk smashed one with his shoe & here he is showing his right on madhu's eye ball!! actually u took me by surprise by giving this sensual scene LOL. Even I had a plan to write a bath tub romance scene in my SS:LSAM but I scarped the thought as soon as it popped up in my mind as I already killed two of my insane buddies & now they have become Zombies LOL & I don't want to kill my remaining readers lol!! Haha...i have become like Ni LOL!! she finds something or other funny & hilarious & she will laugh & I find something or other Hot & Romantic & I blush LOL!!

okay, now keeping my Romantic hunger aside i'm gonna review this scariest story as many said but I don't find it scary bcos I have seen a lot more than this but nothing made me scare...

haha...i love u obsession for Rohan whether it is Ahuja or khurana...u can go to any extend to show him as a terrific Villain but in this story u went ahead & showed him as a Hero...yes, HERO. U could have named this story as "Curses of chucky...oops Rohan" LOL & u completely sided my love my Rk & made him shiver & wet his pants in shit fear LOL!!

haha...What Rk would have thought all the while when Rohan was bathing Madhu? He would have been calculating the size, width & length of the tub so that he could find a little place in the tub & join in bathing business LOL but don't worry Rk, nah..nah,,,rona mat...see our generous Rohan who threw one hand & one leg for u so that u could play with them LOL!! & mind it, he only invited u to the bathroom to join in their fun by rolling the eye ball down ur feet & creating nauseating feel to u or else would u rushed to the bathroom abandoning what u were watching interestingly in laptop forgetting abt ur love?? LOL!!

Well, killer, u not only side lined our hero but also our heroine LOL. I could nowhere see her in this part!! Oh she was so blissfully lying on the tub without any care for the world...oh my! technically she was out of the world at that moment right?? then fine!! but still she has two boy friends to take care of her so araam se sojaho baby LOL!!

hmm...in my previous comment I wished for few things like...Rk squelching the eye ball - done, then Rk seeing what message got delivered - done & one more major wish was Rk to be get killed by the ghost - that too done...so u have fulfilled all my wishes...thank u so much dear!!

okay, jokes apart, now let me seriously comment on this story...

I really hate Rohan like anything...i really wanted to bring back that Rohan alive & wished to kill him with my own hands...when I said kill it would be really cruel & brutal...yes, I would find all possible ways like plucking his finger & toe nails, then cutting his fingers one by one, then half burning him in grill, then apply mirchi on top of that , firing his ball (not eye balls LOL), drown him in a tub full of creepy creature & so on... to give a brutal & nasty death for that f**ker...what he thinks of himself?? if he didn't get a girl he liked or loved he would kill her?? she ever loved u?? or did she played with ur emotions or fooled u or ditched u?? no right?? ur one side love has no value...so if she rejects u & love someone of her own choice u will kill her for no reason... & also kill the one she loved?? but one think I could agree is... men are like this (not all but but few men are like this)...so obsessed & not able to with stand their anger & do such things like throwing acid or raping or killing the one they loved just bcos they didn't get what they needed...& poor innocent girls are falling prey in their hands & dying miserably for no wrong...uff...control!! control!! sorry dear, I took it little serious bcos no girl deserves such a cruel death...but Don't worry Mr.Psycho Ghost Killer, u have committed yet another mistake by killing RK, yes, even after death ur soul cant unite with Madhu's soul as Rk's soul is there & he will protect her like a war shield...once u had an upper hand as u were a ghost & he a human but now he is also a possessive (square) obsessive (cube) loving (infinite) pure spirit who will toss u to the seventh circle of purgatory & take his love to heaven...MIND IT!!

okay, coming to the writing side of this story...

Killer, I have told u this plenty of times but i'm saying it again that YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!! u have excelled in all genres!! & this story is one milestone in ur writing...u just nailed it, killer. The way u have written all the scary stuffs which really scared many (excluding me) was just stupendous...i loved both the parts though I liked 1^st part a little more for its thrilling ending... but this update is really special for the way u have written Rohan's psychic talk, he dismantling her body but I wonder where madhu's skull went?? u could have shown him grabbing her hair & talking her skull out without eye balls with water dripping from the bath tub..that would be hell scary...LOL & u have nicely shown Rk terror in his face...Ghosh, he was so helpless that he can't even think of what all happened with madhu & what soon gonna happen to him but u shouldn't have made him beg for his life but just made him face the death bravely promising madhu to save her LOL (that would be filmy LOL)

overall, this story is no less than a HW horror movie!!

Ghosty scary horror movie lovers like me will love it!!

Wish I could write something different like u apart from my humdrum lovey dovey stories LOL!!

Sorry for the delay & u know the reason so am not gonna repeat again...

Ni, u came first in this part & I probably think i'm the last one to comment LOL!!

(sorry I couldn't add Emo's as u know my net & hand is bitching me LOL)