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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
This was one scary TS. The way u have explained Rohan obsession over madhu was awesome. So RK is also dead. Looks like even after death Rohan did not get his love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
its very scary
wonderful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Di, dara diya aapne mereko...
But I liked this update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
It was Different but nice os.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
OMFG..Kavya..that was quite freaky awesome...wowww...
I never ever thoght u can write smthng like this...I mean such a brutal obsession..ghosh...scary..seriously...the image of RK in such a state is...ewww...

u r amazing dear...keep it up...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
super scary
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
What a terrific birthday gift sis, no one has given one like this.

You are always one and unique, so ur gift has to be that way, thank u so much sis.

Thank god, i read this one in day time, the highlight of the part is when rohan talking to all dismantled parts of madhu, first with her hands, to heel to eyes, god how much vengence he had. The way you made rk scared topped than the way u made madhu scared, because seeing our loved one in such a state would make us dead first na.

I wonder how u get such ideas sis, each one diff from other and that too each time u exploring a new genre. This wil be one milestone in ur writing, but i won't read it as many times as nina, as every time when i hear any sound from surrounding, my mind wil start to have wierd thoughts, he he, am that much brave. Lol.

And don't ever get upset over such sarcastic comments, let them bark, how long wil they fi it, if there is no response from our side, i think they don't have any better work to do.

Thank u so so do much for the second part sis.

Ni : you are wrong, now that both rk and madhubala are dead, now they wil show heaven to rohan, they wil hug, they wil kiss, and wil do all ahem ahem and rohan wil be on fire seeing this. 🤣 But its all in our imagination, as kavya wil not let rohan suffer like that, she is so much obssessed with Rohan khurana u know 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Well written! Hats off! (Can you believe it? I actually read it! 😆 )
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Brilliant horror writeup Kavya!
So Ghost RK killed Madhu & RK! But now both Rishbala are reunited in heaven! How that ghost RK will get madhu back? Ghost RK will regret for his mistake of killing RK! Now Rishbala will take their revenge from rohan, they are expert in that😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
U scared the hell of me...
nice storyyy... :-)

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