RiMa OS- The Message Delivered! Last Part- Page 9

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The Message Delivered!!

PART 1

In the evening, "Oho... Why this lock jams every time? Everybody is hell bent to irritate me!! Urrgghhh..." scorned Madhu as she twiddled her flat's key in the key hole in utter irritation. Suddenly her cell phone buzzed. She took it out from her jeans pocket and hissed more on seeing the caller's name. After a stare of one good minute on the screen, she reluctantly received the call. "Now what?" "Where are you, sweetheart!?" Madhu could easily figure out a mischievous simper on his face through his husky, flirty voice. "And where do you expect me to be, RK? Look, don't irritate me now... I am too busy with this... Urrgghhh... What the hell is wrong with you bloody lock??!" She jerked the key disdainfully, simultaneously spurning at RK too. "Relax darling!! Just call my name with love and see the magic then..." The rusted lock was already pissing her off and there, RK was getting too flirtatious. While twisting the key in the keyhole again she vexed at him, "RK... Please yaar!!" Suddenly, the lock opened. "OMG! It opened! RK... it opened!!" "I told you na... RK has that magic, love!!" Madhu hurriedly rushed inside relieved and threw herself on the bean bag. "Yeah Yeah... Why did you call me by the way?" "To check if you are still angry!" "Of course I AM... Rishabh Kundra! After so much leg pulling from you in the office, do you still expect me to be normal!!?" She snapped bluntly. "It was just a prank, Madhu!" vindicated RK. "I wasn't mocking at you baby! You know I love you!!" Her lips automatically curved with a fragile smile. Madhu knew it very well- how much RK loves her! Since the day he had joined the firm as her co- employee, an involuntary bond grew between them which slowly budded love in their hearts. But when it comes to keep your lady love happy, it takes lot of efforts and unfortunately today, poor Kundra did a blunder. Their entire group had a candid time in pulling her legs and RK too joined them. It was obvious for him to face her ire then. Madhu still tried to hold her angry voice to tease him, "No you don't!! No one does that to his love!!" "OK fine!" He sighed. "Go and login to your mail account!! You've got a mail, sweetheart!!" She sat up straight in perplex. "What is it?" "It's a bunch of videos of yesterday's bash at Aryan's place! I guess you remember last night, Madhu!!" She could again sense his flirtatious vox. Her face automatically flushed in redness. His naughty erotic sighs were teasing her a lot. "Aaahhh... I wish I could have got the video of O.U.R. moments... Right darling!!?" Madhu immediately gasped in haw. "Shut up RK! You didn't record anything... Right?" "Ahaaannn... Madhubala getting scared hunn!!" He smirked playfully. "Love... You didn't give me a moment to breathe... how come I could record anything hunn... You're too fast hunn..." "Just stop now RK!" Madhu was blushing profusely by now and his provocative words were adding more redness to her face. "Now stop blushing Miss Malik and check the mail. We are there in almost every video... thanks to your love for camera!! OK, now I am hanging up! Bye sweetheart!" "Haww! You won't please me now!!?? I am still angry, RK!" pouted Madhu. "Still?? Dramebaazzz..." She giggled hearing it. "OK. What do you want me to do?" "Come to my place... NOW!!" RK could feel the seduction in her voice. "Ahaaannn... And what about your room mates?" "Nobody is here till tomorrow... Mr Kundra!!" she whispered salaciously. "Coming in half an hour, baby!!" "I am waiting!"

Madhu bounced to her nearby desktop and switched it on. The light of the computer screen shone her face. She quickly connected the Wi-Fi and logged into her mail account. The screen read Loading...' as an increasing blue bar beneath the word. "The net speed sucks big time today! How am I going to download the videos!?" She leaped up in chafe and went to get herself a coffee while it completes the loading. Within few minutes, Madhu came hurriedly to the PC. The blue hyperlink Inbox' was showing an unread new mail through the number in its adjacent brackets. "You befool me again RK!" riled Madhu, seeing the mail's subject from his account- DOWNLOAD MP3'... "Stupid Kundra... How can he forget the difference between audio and video formats??!! Which video runs with .mp3 extension!?! Silly!! You just come here RK... I won't spare you now!!" With the same angry gumption, Madhu needlessly moved her cursor and clicked the unread mail. Seeing the mp3 link, she got vexed all the more. How much excited she was for watching her videos with her Idiot Kundra but this audio link ruined her day dreams already!! She annoyingly clicked it to download. Moments later, as it finished, Madhu played it. Some hazy noise began to play. Madhu rolled her eyes in chafe, "Fine! Here goes nothing!!" She grabbed a pair of earphones lying next to her, placed them on her ears and played the audio again. The mp3 began with some static white noise. "What rubbish it is!!" She was about to remove the earphones when a blur sound started. Madhu tried to catch it curiously. Some whispers were heard- though indistinguishable as to what was being said. Madhu got a little apprehensive with this unusual recording. She pushed the ear plugs more into her ears to get the sound clear but it didn't help. Suddenly, more and more whispers started to overlap one another, getting louder and louder which made her more disquieted. Following it, an electronic fuzz occurred- Madhu stood up slightly from her chair, sweated with strange terrifying sounds. Immediately, a loud horrifying scream pierced through the fuzz. Madhu quickly pulled out her plugs, panicked and stepped back from the computer. Visible sweat droplets were there on her face and her breath was pouncing fast with fear.

The audio file was still playing- the computer speakers were blaring the terrific noises throughout the room. Madhu quickly dashed on the mouse to stop playing it and clicked SHUT DOWN' to turn the PC off. As the screen went black, she tried to breath in relief. Madhu wiped off her sweat drops through her shoulder in comfort but suddenly she saw the computer rebooting itself. "What the hell??!! Just turn off!!" She damned the CPU enraged. Finally, it got shut down. Madhu at last sighed in consolation when she sensed something. She looked up at the computer screen and saw a silhouette of a man behind her. She quickly whipped around in horror but saw nothing. "What the hell is happening?" Her voice had now went weaker and eyes moistened in helplessness. "M.A.D.H.U.B.A.L.A...!!" A hoarse manly voice grunted slowly near her ear. Madhu turned back in scream but saw no one again. Those brimmed droplets slid down on her cheeks in extreme threat. She promptly ran from the living room hysterically and tried to make it to the exit door. The moment she tried to twist the door lock, the light started flickering ON and OFF throughout her flat's rooms. Madhu constantly tried to push the door but it felt to be somehow blocked from outside. Affright tears were flowing profusely through her fearful eyes. She was banging helplessly on the door, shouting but nothing was helping her out. Suddenly the lights turned off. Entire house got doused in pure darkness. Madhu terrifyingly slid down on the floor against the wooden door, breathing heavily in terrible scare. She huddled in the nearby corner, looped herself in her knees and cried... cried aloud so that at least a single human could hear her helpless sobs. "Please come soon... RK! Please!!!" All she could utter was his name... RK!! She badly needed him to be with her now!! Madhu hid her face in her knees with eyes twitched- like a pigeon who opts this way so as to save itself from the threat and feels safe but the reality... Well... it's not always in its favour!! Suddenly the lights turned ON. "Madhu..." she again heard the same gruffish virile whisper near her ear. Madhu promptly looked up horrified. "R...K...!!" He was sitting near her... with a mischievous simper donned on his face and impish brown eyes- staring directly at her. Seeing her saviour right next to her, Madhu immediately hugged him tightly and cried aloud. "Please. Save me RK!!! Take me out from here... Please!!" "That's what I have come here for... Madhu... ba..laa...!!" With the same crusty voice, he slowly caressed her hair. But before she could understand anything, he rived her hair back too forcibly. Madhu winced in extreme pain- her eyes trying to look at his wicked face. "R...KKk... What are you..." Before she could complete, he lifted her up by her throat- choking her breath. He was constantly staring at her with an evilly grin and his eyes turning red now..! "What... What... do you... want??!!" She uttered in suffocation. RK cocked his head sideways and spoke in a malevolent, demonic voice, "Y.O.U...!!!" The lights switched off suddenly again and a sharp feminine scream blew there in the room followed by a pure silence...

RK excitedly combed his hair in the rear mirror; took up the rose bouquet from the back seat and stepped out from his car with an aroused sigh!! He looked up at the building and spoke sexily, "Your man is here, sweetheart!! I am coming!!" and he ran inside hurriedly.

RK rang the doorbell and trailed over his gelled hair one last time before he faces his lady love. Nobody opened the door yet so he rang the bell again. "C'mon Madhu! Open the door, darling!! I am on time yaar..." He exclaimed but didn't get any reply. He got a little apprehensive now. Why isn't she opening? She never do that!! With a little suspicion, he curiously knocked the door but to his surprise, it slowly opened ajar. RK pushed the door tardily and saw a dense darkness and silence all around. "Madhu!!" He called out in concern. He was walking inside slyly due to the blackout. Abruptly, the lights turned ON. RK acutely looked all around and saw fresh blood spread all over the floor. "What the...?" He got impinged into extreme shock and terror. "Madhu!!" he exclaimed aloud in deep fear for her. "Where are you Madhu? Please come out, baby! See, I am here... your RK!" He was about to move to her bedroom when a blood drenched eyeball came rolling out and stopped near his shoe tip. He started breathing heavily seeing it entailed with a nerve and fresh blood oozing out from it!! Scared tears fell down. Before he could react, suddenly, he saw the computer screen turning white and then to Madhu's email account page. A pop up box appeared and it read... "MESSAGE from rishabhkundraRK@xxx.com DELIEVERED!!"

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Ni, i read ur long long long comment...its too longer than kavya's story LOL😆😆 & i totally agree with u dear!!😳😳 i hope ur "message gets delivered too" for some readers who gave such comments!!😊😊 yes, if they didn't like they can be a silent reader & no need to comment such awful things!!🥱🥱 it hurts the writer🥱🥱 but killer don't worry ur insane sisters are insanely in love with ur writing..nah...ur killing writing...😛😛damn killer...u r really tempting me to write a killing story & kill both the leads but not someone killing them, they themselves killing each other LOL how is it??😉😆

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Di i got confused in end is madhu dead???

Nd was her flat haunted???

Madhu is dead...u left it like that..

Kavya sweety..i didnt expect this from you..what a surprise...awesome 👏

but it is different and little scaring

while reading at the last I thought it is a ghost

and madhu screamed RK

then RK coming to the flat and seeing madhu in blood

Okay, I have read the OS Di. All I can say is... What a masterpiece. 👏👏 Truly a masterpiece.

A true horrorstory.😆 You know what I think, I have told you. 😆 Hilarious. 😆 I think Stephen King is so going to snatch this idea from you Di. So protect it somehow before he does so. 😆 People if you don't know who Stephen King is use Google Baba. He won't fail you there. He was good to me today.🤣 He helped me with my paper.🤣

But I literally rofled for this. 😆 At first I thought okay, a romance story. Later it was okay, we got a hacker here.🤣 Someone like Ullu Sullu Sullu or Rohan who secretly loved and admired Madhu and wanted to frighten and separated her from RK. Well mission accomplished and a lot more happened.🤣

I have read the comments for the OS, and actually I don't get what is so confusing.😆 It all made sense to me. But then again, one insane person understands another.🤣 But honestly all I thought was either it was Ullu Sullu Sullu or Rohan that murdered Madhu. Yes people Madhu is dead. A fresh blood drenched eyeball with a nerve cord still attached to it rolled on the floor reaching RK's feet. The ghost couldn't chew the eyeball up so he spat it out rolling it to RK.🤣 Thinking they would play with her eyeballs instead of marbles. 🤣 Or making sure that RK could see the eyes from his beloved one last time before finding her dismantled bodyparts all over the flat.🤣 Yes, I know how it could be confusing, Di never wrote it was Madhu's eyeball or if it was a real one for that fact. But given the impression RK had one could guess it was her eyeball. How many people has eyes like Madhu?😆

Hey maybe, they were going to use her eyeballs as softballs and her arms or legs as a bat for playing cricket.🤣

Okay, lets count all the facts given to us. And decide whether Madhu is alive or not. I assume she got killed, and was hoping RK being killed as well.🤣

RK teased Madhu at work, she wanted him to compensate her somehow, He sent a mail consisting a video of the previous night's birthday celebration of a minor important person right now.😆 She opened it and saw a mp3 file, instead of a mp4. Madhu couldn't resist the temptation and listened to the mp3. And eventually she met a person that obviously wasn't RK. Cause Madhu would recognise RK voice in an instance and it wasn't his voice, it was someone else. Ergo my previous and soon repeated point, it was someone else.

In all of this I remembered a moment from the Ring. If you thought Annabelle was scary, you haven't seen anything yet. 😆 Annabelle can't be compared with this movie. 😆 But I later scratched that thought, thinking it was a hacker (Sultan or Rohan) trying to scare Madhu. Mission accomplished. When things got out of hand, then my thoughts returned to the Ring, a ghost. But since the person could grip Madhu, and have seeing so many poltergeist movies, I can easily tell you. Yes it is possible for them to do so and talk. But since Madhu tried to decipher his wicked face, meaning it wasn't a ghost but something like Phantom of the Opera thing. And yes this one was living in the basement in Madhu's building much like the Phantom of the Opera in Paris. 😆 Also a living human being can't see a poltergeist. Only a poltergeist or dead person sees a poltergeist. Once upon a time I liked reading Phantom of the Opera, but now looking at the book I found it boring. Just because I am sick of reading.🤣 When it comes to horror movies, the Ring, both the Gremlins (cute little monsters😛), all the Scream movies, Ghostbusters, Halloween, different versions of Carrie, Leprechaun, the Chucky movies (not the latest one) and believe me the list goes on. I am so not going to bring up those awful horror movies that HW actually thought they could scare people. Even Casper was more frightening than them.😆 Well you Catch my drift. That guy who impersonated RK, was very much alive and killed Madhu.

A message for all of those who didn't like the story. Let me present one easy peasy solution for you. Just simply don't read the OS or if you have read it, just forget you've even read it. 😆 Don't you dare send PMs to my big sister, trying to discourage her and degrade her writing abilites. Let me just make myself clear on ONE point. If you aren't a writer and don't know how a writer takes out and shows her or his creativity, then don't you dare comment negatively on a story. I admit there are something called constructive critism, but what you did isnt't any of it. Sending PMs and post comments like previous stated aren't appreciated and won't be tolerated. I will never accept that. If you like I welcome you to do that on my story all you like and attac me all you like. I have two very constructive defending mecanisms that works like a charm. 😈 And that have never failed me once. But don't you dare do something like that on other stories. Here's a friendly advice from me to you. Keep those comments for yourself. Comments like that aren't appreciated. I admit I mock characters, stories and at some occasions even the writer and their thought process. But I only do that on a funny way, never ever trying to discourage someone from writing a story or a genre. I even try to give some suggestions. And I always take permission from a writer before doing any of it. I never do it if I haven't got permission from the writer. And they know when I write whatever it is I mean no harm whatsoever. I only do that in order to make the writer and others laugh. I repeat. I will never tolerate someone messing with someone else. Especially one of my sisters. If someone have something against any of my sisters you have come across the wrong person to mess with.

Now back to humor. The american singer Kesha has a song called You better move, you better dance, that I feel is appropiate;

By the way, I am the one yelling timber and I am not the one going down.😆