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tvcv

@tvcv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Brilliant update...

The way you described Rohan's obsession was really superb!!!

It was very scary...

The eyeball part was really very scary ...I hope I don't get up at night remembering it!!!

Please do write more stuff like this.

I really enjoyed(scared)reading this part a lot.

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

awesome scary story 😃

Rk is also dead that's shocking 😲

i like it thanks for pm 😳

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

such a scary story

and that rohan washing madhus body parts is so horrible

and finally RK what is his condition when madhu is in front of him

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Nina.. You are a devil.. God! why I opened this at midnight!!

Awesome horror story Kavya dii..
u should really have put a disclaimer not to read it at night..
well obv the last story got a meaning through this.. but then it was still enjoyable alone..
but this one was realllyyy horror...
i was horrified to the core when RK( i mean Rishabh Kundra) found Madhu's body.. and that ghost was sitting there..
and moreover when that ghost turned to RK and he knew it all the while that he was there..
man... it was scary...
Thanks for writing this...👏

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k.atrina75

@k.atrina75

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

You know.. yester-night when going to bed I was thinking about this story when I heard regular "thud-thud" from the other side of the wall.. and it didnt scare me though but i got really uncomfortable as it reminded me of Grudge where the boy punches on the wall like that...
🤣 🤣

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Mrs.Somerhalder

@Mrs.Somerhalder

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: k.atrina75
You know.. yester-night when going to bed I was thinking about this story when I heard regular "thud-thud" from the other side of the wall.. and it didnt scare me though but i got really uncomfortable as it reminded me of Grudge where the boy punches on the wall like that...
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.PassionateLuv.

@.PassionateLuv.

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

nice part kavya..my rm died 😭
Thx for pm 😃

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Kavya..im really very scared right now..my heart is pacing like a drum on a spree..oh god..ive never read anything like this..i dont knw how im going to sleep now..

But i must say...its brilliant..u are really marvolous..

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Ni33

@Ni33

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: k.atrina75
You know.. yester-night when going to bed I was thinking about this story when I heard regular "thud-thud" from the other side of the wall.. and it didnt scare me though but i got really uncomfortable as it reminded me of Grudge where the boy punches on the wall like that...
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Well you thought about the Grudge. I'm thinking to watch the Ring all over again.😆 Tell me is it a good idea now when I have an exam next week,🤣

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

what was that?? I m out of words.. It was too cruel more than ghostly! Why Rohan need to kill her like this?? Ripping each limbs, taking the eyeballs out!! This's the most horrible murder in a horror story I have ever gone through. I was trying my best to keep myself calm and stopping the imagination that was flashing up in my mind. But was helpless. U wrote so well kavya that made me compelled to imagine the terrible nauseating sight. I do believe in spirit and I said that before in my own stories and other threads but this is...just..dunno how to describe! I need to look into dictionary for new words. LOL.

anyway thanks for sharing this and PM.

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