MG FF -Tum Mille......THREAD 2 LINK ON PG 1 APR 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
nice... Liked it ...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
prologue
awesome dear...
whoa Maan married Geet in this way...
and Geet is furious for that...
interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
nice story
loving it
geet is minor and maan dont want her to be in KM...
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awesome part..

hehehe geet scattered all maan clothes and maan told her to assemble them..

maan telling dadi that he doesn't want geet to live here..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

wow lovely emotional update..bechari geet came to take her clothes but my maan ki gussa , omg maan babu too shout too much u dont know abt ur sherni...te way geet aranging his clothes an my maan ki hatred was lovely emotional..opps so my maan didt accept tis marriage some thing happen so tat he married her..i love te update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
bechari geet...sher k den mein ghus gayi...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
part 1
nice part...
awesome dear...
Geet is too funny...
and Maan has no idea whats waiting for him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
part 2
awesome...
hahaha Geet is a fighter...
Maan's past was nice...
but poor him not that happy...
and Geet's father is so cheap...
well their life is gonna be very dilchasp...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Part = 4

Dadi is upset b'coz of Maan's attitude...

Though she had expected this reaction from Maan, she is only worried about Geet, what would she think seeing Maan's anger?

Geet has been watching Maan from the balcony...she was waiting for him to leave so that she could come and have her breakfast...she is really hangry...

She is shocked to see Maan getting angry with his own dadi...he should at least respect her age...

Kaise aadmi hai ye? Koi apnon se aaise gussa kartha hai kya? aur dadi chahe kitne bhi galat ho, woh toh umar mein kitne bade hai? Geet too feels bad for dadi...

How could she live alone with this man? That's why she is desperate to find someone for company?

Par mein hi milli thi unko? Dadi ne toh bahut hi bhura kiya hai,Haina babaji?

Even she is not happy with dadi's decision...

Dadi finds Geet staring the entrance, Maan has just left...

So Geet has been watching him, and dadi knows that Geet is also very angry with MSK...

Dadi: hare Geet bte, wahan kyun rukh gaye hai aap? Aayiye, hummare saath nastha kijiye

Geet: woh aaise hi hothe hai kya?

Dadi: kaun?

Geet: woh...

Dadi smiles: ohhh woh, Maan?

Geet: haan, woh

Dadi: nahi nahi, aaj aapke woh thoda pareshaan hai, issiliye

Geet: par mujhe aaise kyun lagtha hai ki woh kabhi hasthe bhi nahi honge?

Dadi is astonished to hear that...how well Geet has read Maan's mind, that too within a day...

Dadi: woh... Maan ki koi galthi nahi hai, unke chehra hi kuch aaisa hai

Dadi tries to remember Maan's smiling face...when was the last time he smiled?

Dadi couldn't remember properly for it has been years...

Geet: aapne aaisa kyun kiya?

Geet looks into dadi's eyes and demands an explanation...

Dadi: humne kya kiya?

Geet: woh, aapne hummare shadhi inke saath kyun karwaya?

Dadi feels a little guilty for she knows that she is being selfish getting Geet married to Maan...

Dadi: kyunki hum nahi chahthe ki aap uss budde ko shadhi karkke apne zindagi barbad karein

Geet wonders why is dadi so concerned about her life? Geet toh Dadi ko jaanthi bhi nahi...phir kyun?

Geet: kyun? Aap toh mujhe jaathe bhi nahi?

Dadi: hare Geet bte, aap humme paraya kyun samajthe ho? hum toh aapke apne hi hai

Geet: lekhin mein ne toh aapko pehle kabhi dekha hi nahi

Dadi: agar hum kehthe hai aapke janam hi hummare samne hi hua toh kya aap ko yakheen hotha?

Geet is so surprised...

Dadi continues to surprise her...

Dadi: aur pehle ek mahene tak aap hummare paas hi the, kya aap maan sakthe ho ki aapko bachpan mein humne hi ek maa ki tarah pala posha tha

Actually Geet doesn't know anything about her childhood...she has heard her mausi say that her mother passed away while giving birth to her and that her mausi has adopted her as her own daughter...

Geet: par mausi ne kaha ki meri maa mujhe janam dethe dethe mar gayi, toh aap mere maa ko jaanthe ho?

This is the first time Geet is hearing about her birth...she only knew that she is being brought up by her mausi as her mother died...

Dadi: haan bte, hum bhi Hoshiarpur ki log hi hai, jab hummare bte aur bahu Maan aur unke bade bhai Vicky ko chodke chale gaye humme yaha aana pada, aur hum Ranno ko bahut achche se jaanthe hai

Ranno is Geet's mother...

Geet's eyes wet hearing her mother's name...

Geet has heard her mausi saying that she is just like her mother...

Dadi: aapke maa bahut achchi hai, woh apne betiyon ko bhut pyaar karthi thi, bas aapke dadi ko hi shikayat thi ki Ranno ne do do betiyon ki janam diya hai, unko toh sirf beta chahiye thi

Geet gets angry with her dadi now...toh aaisi baat hai? issiliye usski nalayak beta bhi usske tarah hi hai...

Dadi: aapke dadi ke jaane ke badh Ranno phir se pregnant ho gayi, aur Mohinder chahatha tha ki iss bar zaroor beta hoga, kissi sadu ne kaha tha, issiliye itne saalon ke badh tummare maa ko phir se maa banna pada, bechari toh bahut kamzoor thi, tummare nikambe papa toh hamesha doston ke saath pithe hi rehtha tha

Aur uss raat bhi woh pi pikke behosh ho gaya tha...

Ranno bahut dard mein thi...aur woh hummare paas aagayi...

Mein aur Lalaji Ranno ko apne gadhi mein shehar ke hospital lekhe gaye, aur wahan aap ko janam dethe hi Ranno aapko iss duniya mein akhele chodke chale gayi

Dadi is also in tears remembering that unfortunate incident...

Dr ne kaha ki bachi bahut weak hai aur ussko ek hafte tak hospital mein rakhna padega...

Aur hum aapke saath hospital mein hi rukh gaye...

Aap toh tab bhi aaise hi thi, bahut pyaari si, chulbuli si...

Hum ko toh aapko aapke papa ke paas chodne ki himmat nahi thi...

Hum jaathe ki woh aapko bhi aapki maa ke paas bhej dega...

Dadi gets very angry mentioning about Mohinder...

Geet is happy that Dadi knows very well about her family...specially her mother...

Humne toh sab se saaf saaf keh diya ki ab Geet hummari pothi hai...

Mohinder ne bahut koshish ki, aapko hum se cheenne ki...

Aur kissi ki bhi himmat nahi Lalaji ka samne karne ki...

Dadi is so proud of dadaji...

Phir aapki mausi aake aapko apnaya tha...Rajjo bhi Ranno ki tarah bahut hi achchi hi...haina?

Haan Geet ki mausi ne Geet ko ek maa ki tarah hi apnaya hai...

Geet nods her head...

Dadi: aaise hi aap Hoshiarpur chodke Amritsar chale gaye the

Geet is so surprised...her hatred for dadi slowly turns into love...ye Dadi itni bhi bhuri nahi hai...haina babaji? Aapne toh humme sahi jagah hi pohunchaya hai...par shadhi ko mein nahi maan sakthi...

Geet is only ready to accept dadi...not MSK...

Dadi continues...

Dadi: issiliye jab uss din munshiji ne aapke barein mein bathaya tha hum apne aapko rokh nahi paye, hum foren Hoshiarpur chale aagaye

A week before...at KM...

Dadi is waiting for Maan...Maan has some urgent meeting and Nakul has already set the table for breakfast...Maan mostly skips his breakfast in such times, so Dadi is here to make sure he eats his food...

Munshiji has also come earlier and is also waiting for Maan...

Dadi finds him unusually sad...

Dadi: Munshiji, kya baat hai? Pinky kaisi hai?

Munshi: Pinky bilkul teek hai dadima

Dadi: phir aap itna pareshaan kyun ho?

Munshiji: mujhe ek choti si madat chahiye dadiji

Dadi: munshiji, kahiye, kya hua?

Munshiji: woh...mujhe kuch paison ki zaroorat hai

Dadi smiles...

Dadi: bas itni si baat? Aap Maan se poochthe toh wahi aapko paison dethe

Maushiji: lekhin dadiji

Munshiji hesitates...

Dadi: aap Maan ko jaanthe haina? Woh toh kabhi mana nahi karenge

Munshi: par dadiji, ye toh bada rakham hai

Dadi now understands why munshiji is worried...must be some big problem...

Dadi: teek hai teek hai, kitne paise chahiye aapko?

Munshi: 5 lakh

Dadi: 5 lakh?

Munshi: haan dadiji

Dadi: kya baat hai munshiji? Aap ne Pinky ki shadhi toh nahi karwa rahe ho? woh toh abhi bachi hai, abhi abhi school complete kiya hai, let her join college, shadhi ki kya jaldhi?

Munshi: ye paise Pinky ki shadhi ke liye nahi, kissi aur ki shadhi ko rokhne ke liye hai

Dadi: munshiji, aap ko patha haina? Kissi ki shadhi ko thodna bahut badi paap hai

Munshi: par ye shadhi hothi toh woh usse bhi bada paap hoga

Dadi: aap ko kya ho gaya hai? mujhe kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aatha

Munshi breaks down...

Dadi is also worried...

Munshi: mujhe kissi bhi kimat mein iss shadhi ko rokhna hi padega, Ranno ke liye nahi toh bhi kam se kam Geet ke liye toh mujhe ye kaam zaroor karna hoga

Dadi: kya kaha aapne? Geet?

Munshiji: haan dadiji, wahi Geet, hummare Ranno ki beti

Ranno is Munshi's cousin...

Dadi: Geet ki shadhi? Lekhin woh bhi Pinky ke umar ke hi hogi, itne badi ho gayi hai kya?

Dadi remembers the past...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Nice update
Dadi telling geet about her mom n her birth
Geet liking dadi now😊

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