MG FF -Tum Mille......THREAD 2 LINK ON PG 1 APR 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Interesting start..Congrats for the new story..Pls continue..
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#12
congrats on the new story!!!!
interesting start
continue soon!!!!!
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#13
congo for new story.. nice start.. maaneet married and geet not ready to accept this marriage..
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awesome start, waiting for update
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congrats for the new story ...
interesting concept ...
continue soon ...
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Part = 1

Geet is fuming inside but she couldn't show her anger on Dadi, her main villain is only MSK, and poor Dadi, she is obviously happy that her potha somehow got married, though she had to use her money power to get a bahu, else no sane girl would agree to marry that sadu MSK.

Geet stands still expressionless, Dadi leaves instructing the girls not to spoil her bahu's natural beauty with their artificial make-up. She wants her bahu to look like a princess.

After Dadi leaves Geet literally throws the girls out and just wears the dress that Dadi had chosen for her.

She has got a plan and she had to act according to Dadi's wish to succeed in her plan. Then she waits for her villain.

After a while Pinky, munshiji's daughter comes. Pinky is the only one Geet knows here in Delhi. Geet had met her at a couple of functions and Pinky is a distant relative of Geet.

Pinky: hare Geet, tum toh bahut sundar lag rahi ho

Geet: Pinky, tu kahan chali gayi thi?

Geet is happy to see Pinky...Pinky looks at Geet and knows that Geet is scared and worried...

Pinky: Geet, Dadima ne mujhe bhulaya tha, issiliye mujhe jaana padha

Geet: Dadi ne? kyun?

Pinky: ye dekho, mein kya layi hoon?

Pinky has brought a plate full of fruits and milk...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Pinky: hare, phal hai

Pinky picks a fruit and starts eating...

Geet: mein yahan kitna pareshaan hoon, aur tujhe toh khane ki padhi?

Pinky: tujhe bhi toh bhook lagegi? Haina? Ye lo

Pinky gives one to Geet...

Geet: nahi, tum hi khao, mujhe koi bhook nahi hai

Pinky: subhe se tumne kuch bhi nahi khaya hai Geet

Geet: meinne kaha na, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Pinky: Geet, tumhare bhooke rehne se kuch nahi badalne wala hai, mere baat ko suno aur kuch khalo, warna aadhe raat ko behosh ho jaoge tu

Pinky smiles...

Geet gets worried...what?

Geet: kya? tum kya kehthi ho Pinky?

Pinky: haan Geet, tum bahut kamzor ho gayi ho

Geet: nahi, mein behosh nahi ho sakthi

Geet thinks that if she faints then it would make MSK's job very easy...

Geet knows very well that to carry out her plans she need to be strong, stronger that that MSK...haina babaji?

She then grabs the fruits and milk from Pinky and finishes off in a few minutes...actually she has been starving from morning...

Dadi comes to see her bahu...she finds the plate and glass empty...

Dadi looks suspiciously at Pinky...

Pinky: meinne nahi, Geet ne hi sab kuch katam kiya hai, haina Geet?

Pinky looks at Geet...

Geet: haan, mujhe bhook lagi thi, issiliye meinne khaliya hai, kyun? Mein kha nahi skathi?

Dadi laughs at her attitude...

Dadi: kissne kaha ki aap nahi kha sakthe ho? mein aapko aur bhi bhijwathi hoon, jitna chahe kha sakthe ho, ho sake toh apne pathi ke liye bhi kuch bachakke rahikye

Geet's anger doubles hearing dadi calling MSK her pathi...

Geet: kaisa pathi? Woh mere pathi nahi hai

Geet murmus to herself...

Dadi: kya beta?

Geet: kuch nahi hai, Pinky, hare Pinky

Geet tries to escape...

Dadi holds her hands...

She then puts kala tikha on Geet's ears...

Dadi: aap toh sach mein pari lagthe ho, kissi ki nazar na lage

Geet blinks as she doesn't know whether to curse her fate or this Dadima for all this...

Dadi: teek hai beta, ab hum chalthe hai, hummare sone ka waqt ho gaya

Geet then looks at Pinky for help...

Dadi: Pinky bte, aapko munshiji dhoondh rahe the, aapko bhi ghar jaana haina?

Pinky: ji Dadima,mein abhi jaathi hoon

Dadi leaves and she sends Nakul with more fruits and milk...

Pinky: toh Geet, mein chalthi hoon

Geet: Pinky, tum toh kuch dher aur rukh sakthi haina?

Pinky: nahi Geet, mujhe jaana hoga, Maan sir abhi aathe hi honge

Geet: Pinky, mujhe yahan nahi rehna, mujhe bhi tere saath lekhe jao

Pinky: hare Geet, ab teri shadhi ho gayi haina? Hum aaise nahi kar sakthe

Geet: par mujhe ye shadhi mansoor hi nahi hai, ye shadhi nahi zabardasti hai

Pinky: Geet, pehle toh sabko aaisa hi lagtha, phir dhere dhere sab kuch teek ho jayega

Geet: tum toh mujhe samajthi hi nahi

Pinky is embarrassed...poor Geet...Pinky also feels pity for Geet...but she can't help Geet

Pinky: Geet, mein subha aathi hoon, gud night Geet

Geet: kaunsi gud night? Ye toh mere zindagi ke sabse bhuri raat hai, haina babaji?

Pinky smiles and tries to cheer Geet...

Pinky: dekhthe hai ki subha tum kya kehthi?

Pinky winks...she hugs Geet and leaves...

Pinky had to leave...it's time for her exit...

After Pinky had gone Geet is left alone in that room...

Geet gets her ready for the SR...yes, she had to make some arrangements...

Geet takes a quick look around the place...she had to get ready for action, haina?

The room is decorated with flowers and illuminated with candles...

Just like Geet had seen in the movies...

She wonders what could happen next...

The thought of some stranger touching her frightens her and she is not ready for that yet...

"babaji, aaise nahi ho saktha"

Geet knows what to do now, she waits for her woh, the MSK's arrival...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
loved the story plot...
keep it up..
geet is totally jangli billi..😛
waiting for msk's entry...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Nice part geet is planng smthing 4 MSK
waitng 4 d nxt part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Nice part..I am loving geet a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
awesome start
y they make her marry msk
forcefully

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