SHREE FF : DIL KI NAZAR SE [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys I am back from my break & I know few of you must be really mad at me fr not completing
my last FF but now I am back...this is an autobiographical FF & I had written this on request of my dear friends RIMI & one more MEERA as they wanted from me. Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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DIL KI NAZAR SE


There is a famous saying that "SCIENCE IS A GOOD SERVANT BUT A BAD MASTER" Being a technical person I had always felt entire my life that those who use science for destruction if they had used this same power for well being of normal people then this Earth would be a best place to live in.


I had spend my entire life with gadgets people call me gadget freak & I too agree that I am a big gadget freak & my passion towards technology & gadgets had lead me to a great success in life today I am working as Technical head in Crime Branch of Mumbai.


Science & technology was really hard to me at times I even lost my most dear friend due to this science & inventions but my love for gadgets has not reduced even a bit but surprisingly It made me more stronger & powerful to fight against those people who use science for destruction.


People say that I really play well with gadgets but hardly have they known that it took lots of effort to come to that level. Starting from the beginning I was really a good student. My Father was a very Famous Businessman of Kolkata my home town & my mother was a soft hearted housewife I had an elder brother & a very loving family.


I was pampered a lot by my family but Life is not the Bed of Roses something grave shook me up to the core & my life took a vigorous turn all of a sudden then I realized that what the hardships of life are.


Now I am 43 a Technical head in Crime Branch of Mumbai, a loving husband, & a father of a cute daughter a Naughty son, & a responsible person & citizen.


Life has taught me various lessons & during all this course of time one thing remained constant in my Life that is to fight crime through all my powers of science & technologies that God has provided me with & it will remain constant till my last breath.


I joined police technical department with a same reason thou the life was not at all easy at all but it didn't affect the decision that I had taken firmly in fact it got stronger with every difficulty that I had faced in all this.


It was never easy when thousands of life depends on your one decision & in the beginning of my career I always use to think that I had powers but great powers give you great Responsibilities too & that I learnt from each passing day at my workplace. I had made great friends in life & lost them too, but still my passion of Gadgets & my fight with crime is still on. I am SHREEKANT SEN.


Written by: SHREEKANT SEN (Technical Head Crime Branch Mumbai)


Characters are:

All ETF Characters are same...

Mr Subhash Sen & Mrs. Shikha sen: Parents of shree love him a lot Subhash is a famous industrialist & very hard working Shikha is a sweet housewife.


Sanjeev Sen & Shruti sen : Brother & sister-in-law of shree they too love him a lot Sanjeev helps his father in business & shruti is a house wife. They love shree a lot & respect his decisions.



Malvika Dasgupta (Mishthi): Friend of Shree a sweet natured girl. She is a neighbor of shree & both families are very close.





we will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊

So How Was it please give ur Reviews 😊




Edited by GOLD.A - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1

PART 1 ---- PAGE 5
PART 2 ---- PAGE 12 & 13
PART 3 ---- PAGE 18
PART 4 ---- PAGE 24
PART 5 ---- PAGE 31
PART 6 ---- PAGE 38
PART 7 ---- PAGE 45
PART 8 ---- PAGE 53
PART 9 ---- PAGE 61
PART 10 ---- PAGE 67 & 68
PART 11 ---- PAGE 73
PART 12 ---- PAGE 79
PART 13 ---- PAGE 84
PART 14 ---- PAGE 89
PART 15 ---- PAGE 96







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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE : Guys I will update this FF twice in a week or depending upon my work n ur response too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its nice one di
Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting for the next one
Thanks for the pm di
zubiya92 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so it is on sree

good continue soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Superb Concept !! Do Update Soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally you started goldie..

this time no mistakes..awesome prologue..😃
waiting for the story to unfold..😊

continue soon..thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ahan new ff great!!! waiting for the first part...carry on dear

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