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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Kutti first of all how do you write such big reviews man? 😆
But I agree,with everything you said about every character
We all did know Manik would back off,not Cuz of sympathy but Cuz he loves his best friend his brother
Also I do believe in this too that it's Nandu who has to decide at this point,we all know the answer is Manik,but he dint/won't let her take it Cuz he already has backed off
It will be Intresting to see what will happen next
I really liked Mukti's scene yesterday,she needs that support from her friends and family
Alya will realise what she is doing or did was wrong
Amazing review girl <3
Love you :*

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

ADITI Man Hats Off to U just Killed it...

Edited by Endurance - 10 years ago

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Amazing post! 👏

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ShonaSparkzz

@ShonaSparkzz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Congratulation my dear wify :)

That was a beautiful recovery. I guess my disappointment really gets to you.

The first words were like that of the first step on sand. A walk along the beach where the water absorbed your foot impressions leaving a perfectly plane sand for a new story. Like the flow of water the emotions flowed.

It is great to see you back in form.

As usual you have captured the emotions well.

And the concept that you chose to weigh their feelings against happens to be my favourite "The Balance" in my words "The yin and yang" "The Equivalent Exchange".

Keep up the good work.

As far as Cabir is concern -Let me make it clear I am not against Gay relationships its just that I feel he is the way he is because his judgement is clouded by the the lack of a male loving figure like his Dad or Brother in his life. They do exist but the their presence or in this case their absence has left a negative impact on him which he is fill in Aditi's words he is try hard to attain balance by complimenting that loss and projecting it another direction.

And like you said latch on one single entity will soon lead to self destruction.

And here is for the improvement feedback.

1.Would be nice if you experimented more with words.

2.And I know many readers don't appreciate it but it is surely a writers favourite- cliffhangers

Because integrating your readers imagination into your story is necessary

And these are few of my requests

1.Some questions are better unanswered well this is a personal request cause I am a sucker for mystery

2. It would be nice to see you experiment with comparative behaviour as in placing one character in another's shoes

3. Finally, I am waiting for your take on Nandani's and Harshad's though process :)

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Ambylicious

@Ambylicious

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

WOW .. what an amazing post aditi.. 👏

very well written and very BALANCED 😛

thanks to u, now i understand our Manik even more. 😊

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Aparajita

@apardh_ba

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

U hv written so beautifully. keep writing

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ParthKiBabe

@ParthKiBabe

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

I want to kiss those hands of yours and brain of yours and heart of yours for writing like this.
I LOVE YOU ADITI <3
Aaru

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Mrinal Krishna

@Sexpot

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Aditi very intuitively written. The reason this episode angered me was that Manik didn't balance his character out well. We all know that he is a fantastic friend but it seemed so obvious to us that he is a very intense and passionate person. His interaction with Dhruv didn't reflect the turmoil of a dilemma. He chose dhruvs "feelings" too quickly. It seemed sane and rational but the Manik we have grown to love is volatile,unapologetic and in your face.

I couldn't savour Nandu's happiness because of Manik's inability to voice his inner feelings to his BFF. I ain't buying manruvs friendship no more.

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo
Res baby :*
(gussa gaya? 😳)

Bilkul bhi nae -.-

Originally posted by: nyxx
Resss

Originally posted by: -Crazy..Life-
Res.
Will comment tomorrow with a clear mind.
Just want to say this post cheered me up quite a lot! <3

Tum log kab unreserve karne vaale ho -.-

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: fan145
Awesome..just perfect ..the way have pinned it absolutely awesome..i

Originally posted by: addictedlove
What a write up.
Amazing!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Endurance
ADITI Man Hats Off to U just Killed it...

Originally posted by: poo_j
Amazing post! 👏

Originally posted by: topsy003
WOW .. what an amazing post aditi.. 👏

very well written and very BALANCED 😛

thanks to u, now i understand our Manik even more. 😊