||Parvati Patil|| {FanFic}

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Disclaimer:Harry Potter and Co. are the Property are J.K.R. This is purely a work of fanfiction, and I do not profit from it in any way, shape, or form... unless you count personal satisfaction.

Author's note :Hello Wizards and Witches of HP forum, I am Madhura a new Witch. I am visiting this forum from many days and finally decided to introduce myself with a story. I think I don't need to tell you how much I love Harry Potter because I am a HP fan and you all here are also HP fan , so you can understand what HP means to me. I will just say Harry Potter is Magic. This is my first HP fanfic that also on a little different character.I read some Fanfics on random sites on Parvati Patil and really liked the character .Hope you all will enjoy her Adventure and problems.


She pushed her trolley directly at the solid barrier , ignoring a muggle suspiciously staring at them , and found herself , a second later, standing on platform nine and three quarters where the scarlet Hogwarts express stood belching steam. Her twin sister , Padma and her grandmother joined her within seconds. Her grandmother started giving her instructions as they moved up the platform.
'write us whenever you are free dear" said Parvati's grandmother. Parvati and Padma hugged her.

'Tell mom and dad, we love them dadi (grandmother) ' said Padma .Parvati rolled her eyes and murmured 'as if they care'

'Yes dear, you be good and stay safe' said her grandmother

There was a whistle behind them nearly everyone had boarded the train and doors were closing .

'You'd better hurry 'said their grandmother.
Parvati and Padma hurried forward their grandmother helped them to load their trunks on the train. Parvati slammed the door behind her and the train began to move.
'You make sure you look after yourself ' said grandma

Parvati and Padma wave until the train had turned a corner amd their grandmother was lost from view. Both set off along the train to find a empty compartment . Parvati was thinking about her parents, whom they left in India fighting with each other. From last fifteen years whenever she saw her parents together , they were fighting. It was the hardest time for her and Padma when their parents decided to divorce 6 years ago when she was 11 year old. From that day she and her sister are living with their grandmother. She hates her parents, she hates her parents for leaving her and Padma alone. Padma loves them and still hopes that one day her parents will come together again.

Padma found her friends .Parvati searched for her best friend, Lavender . She didn't found her nor did she found a empty compartment.

At last she found a compartment , which was not empty, but there was enough place for her to sit. She pushed her way through the door and saw Harry Potter , she read about him all summer in daily prophet , about the fight with death eater's in ministry. However, she was not interested in his life , she had her miserable life to think about. There was Neville's bottom which was sticking out from under the seat as he groped around for Trevor, and Luna Lovegood who was sitting near window wearing some weird specs which ,made her look like a owl, reading The Ouibbler.
'Hi Harry' said Parvati wearing a blank expression
'Hi Parvati' said Harry looking at her suprised , he never saw Parvati without a smile on her face.
'Can I join you ? You see there is no empty compartment..'
said Parvati
'Ya sure 'said Harry indicating her to come in, Luna made place for her and she sat near the window, opposite Harry

She looked out of the window as she again thought about her parents and Padma. Harry was suprised to see Parvati sad and silent, like whole school, he also thought that she was a brainless giggle machine.
'you all right Parvati ? You look sad' said Harry
Parvati started.
"I...yes..I..'
'I think Wrackspurt got you also' said Luna sympathetically, peering at Parvati through her weird spectacles.
'I-What?'
'A Wrackspurt ...they're invisible, they float in through your ears and make your brain go fuzzy 'she said 'I thought I felt one zooming near Harry and now you'

'Thanks Luna , I am fine' Parvati
Harry and Neville caught each other's eye and hastily began to talk Ouidditch.

Parvati again looked out of the window at the trees running, when she heard someone humming her favourite hindi song .She looked out of the compartment door and saw a tall, little fair and muscular boy, Nikhil, passing. Nikhil stoped and pushed his way through the door.
'Hi Harry , I heard you are the new Ouidditch team captain' said Nikhil
'Hi Nikhil 'said Harry 'yes I am the new captain'
'Great! , When are you holding trials? 'said Nikhil
'I am not sure yet' said Harry 'I will let you know'
'Oh, right' said Nikhil and looked at Neville and Luna
'Hi Neville, Hi Luna' said Nikhil.Both of them greeted him.

Nikhil looked at Parvati who was looking at him from the time he entered.
'Hi Parvati 'said Nikhil
'Hi ...Hi Nikhil' said Parvati looking straight in his brown eyes and smiled. Harry looked at Parvati and then at Nikhil who was also smiling .Nikhil closed the door and went humming the same song . Parvati felt a little light now after after meeting Nikhil she thought maybe her this year will be good.She had also made some promises to herself and Padma that she will take out the mask she was wearing of fake Parvati.However, she was tired of pretending to be somebody she is not sometimes for lavender and sometimes because of her fears .When she met Lavender she thought this is the only way to mix with others, but now she has realised her mistake and has vowed to change it.

A/N : me again! okay I have tried to fit her story in the real scenes created by J.K.Rowling but only for this part in other parts I can twist , turn and cut it😉 and yes I love reviews!
PS:Sorry for grammatical mistakes I didn't recheck it properly.

Edited by ..Madhura.. - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear I am a Harry potter fan but never read books, only watched movies. 😳

well I appreciate your writing and love to read next part soon
🤗
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interesting start... waiting to read further... thanks for the pm.. n update soon :)
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moi loves HP😳
i have read books and jus love this series
amazing start😊
continue soon⭐️
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Awosumme part i also dnt read books nly watched movies
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Thanks for the pm
great start would love to read further
havent read the books only watched the movies
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Wow Harry potter ff ⭐️
Amazing start ..
Really loved the story line..
First part was brilliant very well described .
Thanks for the pm ..
Plz update next part soon ., 😊

Ps update legendary eight too plzzz 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archi21

Dear I am a Harry potter fan but never read books, only watched movies. 😳

well I appreciate your writing and love to read next part soon
🤗


Oh that means you under Harry Potter umbrella
thanks for appreciating my work dear
hey I forgot your name
what's your name?
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Originally posted by: -phenomenal-

interesting start... waiting to read further... thanks for the pm.. n update soon :)


thanks Anjori means a lot
love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

moi loves HP😳

i have read books and jus love this series
amazing start😊
continue soon⭐️


oh another potterhead 😃
me also love hp
thanks

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