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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful work please contiue with the great job 😃
please post soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
very good...i will again say, it is emotional..something like "Kuch Kuch Hota Hai"
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-5....kumud was called 2 the office room.so she goes there after the class.kajal goes out.garv cumes & takes her in his arms.kajal was surprised:papa,u came so fast. garv smiles. kajal looks around 4 kumud.but she does'nt see her.they travel in the car. garv:ok baba,how was ur day 2day? kajal:nice papa. garv:u liked ur teachers & friends? k:yes dad. garv:u seem 2 be very happy. k:u no papa..ppl were lying that i'm unlucky.2day 1 person told that i;m very lucky. g:who is that person? K:my class teacher kumud ma'am. garv smiles softly. K:u no she is very sweet.is my mom too that pretty? garv was shocked. K:tell papa...G:yes. K:2day kumud ma'am asked my mumma's name. garv was shocked:then what did u tell? K:what can i say papa?i don't no my mumma's name.u don't tell anythinhg about my mumma. garv did'nt no what 2 tell. K:papa,whats my mumma's name? Garv was shocked.he wants 2 change the topic:ok beta...i'll buy icecreams & chocolates 4 u. K:papa,when will my mumma cum 2 see me? again garv was shocked. K:tell papa. g:she will cum soon. garv was really upset. during the night,garv tells nice stories 2 kajal. K:papa,kumud ma'am told us a nice story.she is so sweet.u shud meet her. G:ok. K:2morrow u shud not take me home b4 u meet her. ok? g:ok. K:promise..g:promise. K:then sing a song 4 me. garv smiles 7 sings a song 4 her.slowly kajal goes 2 sleep.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Garv....singing? lolz.. 😆
Continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aww that was cho chweet Jasmine PLZ continue yaar😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-6....Garv drops kajal 2 the school.kajal:papa,plz don'rt 4 get 2 meet kumud ma'am in the evening. garv:ok dear. he kisses her. kajal tells kumud:ma'am,2day evening my dad will cum 2 see u.he is very sweet.he is the most wonderful dad in this world. kumud smiles. in the evening,kajal goes out with kumud.garv was cuming. kajal runs 2 him :papa...garv takes her in his arm. Ka:ma'am,this is my dad. garv smiles at her.kumud was shocked 2 see garv. garv cumes near her:u r kumud ma'am.am i right? kumud shakes her head. kajal goes 2 ply with other kids. kumud:u r ? G:u may be knowing me as kajal's dad.i'm garv sachdev. kumud smiles. garv:kajal likes u very much.she is fond of u.she always talks about u. kumud smiles. G:i think kajal is lucky 2 hav a classteacher like u. KU:kajal is lucky 2 hav u as her dad. garv smiles:i'm lucky 2 hav her as my daughter.u no,she is my everything.she is my life. ku:kajal's mom? garv becomes dull. Garv:kajal's mom left us when she was too small.she does'nt remember her mom's face. ku:what is that lucky person's name? lucky in the sense...2 be her mom & also 2 be ...{she hesitates 2 say that}ur wife. garv's face becomes really dull. G:kajal's mom's name is tashu. kumud has a pity smile on her face. G:ok then bye ma'am. kU:ok..but plz don't call me ma'am.call me kumud. garv smiles.he walks away.kajal runs 2 him.kumud keeps her yes on him.her eyes rose up.garv's mind was full of kumud's face. suddenly garv turns back 2 see her.kumud had already turnd back.so he was not able 2 see her face.her hair was flying in the air.garv had a special feeling seeing that. he cud'nt believe himself,his mind tells:this was the girl who i was looking 4...but unfortunately...its too late.now i'm kajal's dad.my dreams & dream girl hav left me long ago. garv controls his feelings. he remembers kumud telling him 2 call her 'kumud'.garv is thinking that & driving.background song:tere naam....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job.. please update soon. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-7.....Kumud's mind was full of garv.she cries. The next day she cud'nt concentrate on teaching.she was always looking at kajal.kajal has an innocent smile on her face.kumud dreams herself as garv's wife.she makes breakfast 4 her family.kajal is their luvly daughter in the dream.kumud was a caring mom & a romantic wife. garv:we r so lucky 2 get u in our life.u r the most wonderful wife,bahu & mom. kumud smiles. suddenly kajal calls her.kumud wakes up from her dream. K:will u teach us a song? K:o sure. kumud sings a lullaby.it was meant 4 kajal.all the students were impressed by it. when the bell rings,the kids go out of the class. when kajal begins 2 go out,kumud calls her. KA:what ma'am? KU:that is....did ur dad talk anything about me? kAjal thinks whteher it happened so.kumud was eagerly waiting 4 it. ka:u no ma'am...KU:ya...? ka:actually i don't remember whether he had asked about u. kumud becomes moody. kajal runs out.garv was waiting 4 her.garv's eyes were looking 4 kumud.kumud cumes out.garv smiles at her.kumud also. he begins 2 walk 2wards kumud. but kajal:papa,we'll go soon..garv:ok..both of them get inside the car.kumud becomes sad. garv looks at kumud b4 starting the car.so kumud becomes happy. the cAR STARTS.kumud looks at the car till it goes away from her eyes. garv:beti..did kumud ma'am tell anything about papa? he had onlyleast hope 4 a positive answer. kajal:ya.... garv was surprised:what? KA:2day kumud ma'am was talking about u.she asked whether u talked about her 2 me? garv becomes happy:what did u tell? ka:i told i don't remember. garv smiles:if she asks again asks about it,u shud tell that papa asked about u.ok? ka:ok.. garv was thrilled that kumud asked kajal about him.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PARt-8...Kumud stands at the school compound.she thinks:where is kajal?garv will cum 2 drop her. garv's carcumes.kajal cumes out of the car.kumud becomes happy. she expected garv 2 cum out of the car.but nobody else came out of the car.the car went away.kumud became sad.kajal cumes 2 her:Goodmorning ma'am. kumud smiles:Goodmorning kajal. Ka:ma'am,i told papa..Ku:what? KA:that u asked whether he talks about u at home. kumud gets embrassed. she thinks:garv might hav lost his impression about it.he might've thot bad about me.that may be the reason of not getting out of the car.he might've seen me standing here. ka:ma'am..2day,papa did'nt cum with me 2 the school. KU:what?then who drived the car? ka:its our driver.papa had 2 go 4 an imp meeting. kumud thinks:so thayts the thing & not bcoz garv is angry about me. In the evening,garv cumes 2 pick kajal.she was angry:i'll not talk 2 u,bcoz u did'nt drop me in the morning. G:i'm sorry beti..i'll buy icecreams & chocolates 4 u. kajal smiles.he tickes her.kumud cumes there seeing that beautiful sight. garv looks at her.kumud did'nt no how 2 face him. G:hi..KU:hi..G:hi..kumud smiles. ka:why both of u r saying HI 2 each other? both of them becum shy. G:kumud,2morrow is kajal's b'day.we've arranged a party.u r expected 2 cum there. kU:sure,its my pleasure. garv & kajal becum happy.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cant wait
cont soon please!!

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