Trespassing
That seems to be an apt title here
Vyan trespassing in Geet's dream. Geet trespassing on Maan's property. Maan trespassing on Geet's quiet moment.
CAUTION: My comment is solely based on my skewed love for IOYSM Maan. So debate with me if you want but I have to get this out.
She is so disturbed by the dream, she does not want Vyan as the father of her children.
As always Maan's pain was slashing; perhaps due to an irrational belief that true love should always win.
As always Geet irritates me. My coolness towards her is for just the reasons she gave today. She was a coward. Big time.
In a part of my mind I have always disliked that about her. She led him on according to me.
Most women know when someone is in love with them. Not perhaps right away, but in a few weeks, you can guess. This went on for three years!
If there was no chance for him, due to her family or her preference she should have had the guts to say it to him. She let him hope and then she crashed them...
Even now she is affronted by his behavior? Kyun Geet? When were you fair with him that you expect him not to make you even the slightest uncomfortable?
Yes you have a right not to return his love. I agree with that but he was not a stranger. He was a friend and she could have voiced her thoughts to him. At least she could have stopped this internal bleeding of his heart.
Our actions have an influence on another's life.
Yes Maan could have moved on also. He could have stopped loving her. If you believe that, Please make a plan for that and post it on the net for those who are hurting.
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Venting done.
I loved the scenes you created
The last one was epic.
I am so glad he did not kiss her.
At least that gives me hope that when it will happen, if it does, that he will not be the only one in love; that somehow they would have worked things out.
This is a different Maan from IOYSM and I get him totally.
As for Geet, she was finally able to voice something to him and that at least shows that she wants something else between them. Perhaps not passionate love yet but something which will soothe them both.
As a writer, I have to acknowledge the terrific way you have made the transition in Geet's character. As annoyed as I can get at her, there is something about her that wants me to see her calm and happy. She has endured a lot and she is getting stronger as a person day by day.
How are we to wait now?
Aisse hi keh rahi hu. Forget all about us and enjoy these golden moments of your life.
🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 9 years ago
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