SG-FF|PyarHainIshqAurDosti|UPDT ! Pt6-Pg7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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NEW FF
Hey guys, my name is Deena and i really wanted to have a FF too. I have written another one for another forum too. I luv the KAA forum and i luv KAA! and all the FF's they write here really inspired me to write my own. Its of course a SG, Shiv and Gauri FanFiction. I have started writting but im not gonna update today since it is a sunday and i update from Mondays to Thursdays. So hopefully i will start updating tomorrow or the day after. Since it is a new FF i might delay the posting. But i will try to post it on tomorrow. I hope u will like it. I will post the hyperlinks to the updates on the first page so that it will be easier for you. Also if u like i will post the hyperlinks on the updates as well. I hope u will all enjoy it. Its not really great, but its okay...so far.
Take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|


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INDEX:

PART ONE | PAGE TWO

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PART TWO | PAGE TWO

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PART THREE | PAGE THREE

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PART FIVE | PAGE SIX

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PART SIX | PAGE SEVEN

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Posted: 18 years ago
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okk.. sweetie..

i am all up for reading your story as well..

go for it!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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deena welcom... a new writer on the block the more the merrier... 😳

Looking forwards to ya SG story

kat 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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looking forward to ur fanfic 😛 ...............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay, another fanfic!!!
cant wait till the update, deena!!!
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls start soon
i like ur tittle
cant wait till u update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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the title is great. Plz start updating as soon as possible. Love FFs about Shiv and Gauri!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah da title is gr8
plz start soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

okk.. sweetie..

i am all up for reading your story as well..

go for it!!

thanks,i am almost finished the 1st update. i have some idea's but i havent written them yet, i will in the future though.😉


Originally posted by: Catwoman

deena welcom... a new writer on the block the more the merrier... 😳

Looking forwards to ya SG story

kat 😊

thanx, i will post it soon. 😳

Originally posted by: kalsang_11

looking forward to ur fanfic 😛 ...............

thank you. am trying to post the update soon.😊


yay, another fanfic!!!
cant wait till the update, deena!!!
😊

yes, there are so many FF's in the KAA forum,😆


pls start soon
i like ur tittle
cant wait till u update

thanxx, i will start posting it soon.


the title is great. Plz start updating as soon as possible. Love FFs about Shiv and Gauri!!!

thank youu, i will prolly post asap 2morro. i still want to work on it a bit. i luv FF's about Shiv and Gauri too, and there are soo many shiv and gauri FF's on here!😃



yeah da title is gr8
plz start soon

thankss, i will hopefully start very soon.😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, i think i will post now. Its a bit boring i think, but hopefully the next update will be better. Okay then, here i go, with my 1st update. Hope its okay.

Note:Please put on the song "Yeh Mera Dil" from "Don-2006". Thank you. If this is not possible then you may just read. And the song lyrics will be in blue, with their actions in black.

Recap: NONE!!😆

For Index: Go to page ONE😉

PART ONE

A Guy gets flowers|A Girl walking through a hallway
Guy starts walkings smiling|Girl meets the end of the hallway and comes into big place (hardwood) and jumps in to the dance.

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (The main door opens and the guy steps inside the dance studio. Wind came gushing at him. His hair flying, he combs through his hair and looks infront of him in awe|The girls eyes open, her long eyelashes seperating from the bottom ones)
deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, (u see the back of a girl, as she dances)
aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane,(u see the feet of girl moving in hard steps-see her payal clinking)
mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane(she shifts shoulders to the music and moves hands quickly)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (Guy stands there with mouth open. | You see the girls lips smiling)
yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (You see the girls bare waist/stomach)

Girl continues to dance as guy follows her with his eyes

Dil woh jaahe jise, jaahe jise use paaya (comes towards the guy)
pyaar woh yaar ke joh naam pe hin mitjaye (circles with finger tracing shoulders and stuff)
Dil woh jaahe jise, jaahe jise use paaya(winks and moves a lil back frm guy)
pyaar woh yaar ke joh naam pe hin mitjaye (brings her hand to her heart and shakes her shoulders)
jaane kyun badle main, jaan loon nazrana(whispers in ear-making guy blushed)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, [walks/jumps/runs/and yeah, (u get da picture) back to da platform]
deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, (hits both of her hands together, making the make-believe bangles clink[she didnt actually have bangles on, thats y she was pretending she had some on])

As the music continues u see her hair swaying in the wind as she performs

pal pal ek har chal, dil main ek tufaan hain, (dances with her stomach swaying back and forward to the beat of the music)
aane ko hain woh manzil jis ka mujhe armaan hain, (u see her sparkling eyes, full of happiness and excitement-and bindiya on forehead)
pal pal ek har chal, dil main ek tufaan hain, (comes and gets guy by hand)
aane ko hain woh manzil jis ka mujhe armaan hain, ( puts his hand on her waist and slides her hand on his neck-they both share a lshort eye-lock,smiling)
bhool ka na tujhe dil ka yeh nagrana(dancing with him)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (pushes him and walks back)
deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, (makes a nodding thing with index finger and nods head)
aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane, (blushes and stuff)
mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane, (moves ears back and forward making the earings sway)

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (continues with her dancing as guy comes forward)
yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, (guy reaches her and is about to pull her towards him when she spins around, her hair whipping the guy softly)

As the song comes to an end, both girl and guy look at each other.

Ipshita: Arey Anupam! Tum!?

Anumpam: Haan mein. Jabse tho mere saath naachri thi, tho jabb nahi pata tha kya?

Ipshita: Kya nahin pata?

Anupam: Ke mein Anupam hoon.

Ipshita: Haan, magar mujhe ganaa tho khatam karna tha, tho...i just improvised...and yes, i knew it was u, but i had to finish my song!

Anupam: Ipshita, tum acha naachleti ho.

Ipshita: Oh god Anupam... tum kabb sudhroge?

Anupam: Jabb mujhe tumhara pyar milega.

Ipshita: Anupam, tum ko tho patha hain, ke mein aur Shiv ki shaadi hooni wali hain, mager tum phir bhi...

Anupam: Hoone wali hain, hoi tho nahin, na?

Ipshita rolled her eyes.

Ipshita: Acha, tho tum yahaan kaise?

Anupam: Jahaan mera dil, wahaan mein. Aur tum ho meri dil, tho mein yahaan.

Ipshita: Uh...

Anupam: Jaan, tum jahaan jahaan, mein wahaan wahaan.

Ipshita glars at him

Ipshita: I can see that...

Anupam: Kya mein meri dost se bhi mil nahin saktha?

Ipshita: Haan, mil saakthe.

Anupam: Tho phir?

Ipshita smiled at Anupam.

Ipshita: Mein abhi badal kar aathi hoon. Phir main aur Shiv dinner ko jare hain.

Anupam: Khaan par?

Ipshita: Tumse matlab?

Anupam: Nahin, mein soonch ra tha, ke mein bhi wahin ajatha hoon.

Ipshita sighs.

Anupam smiles and pulls something long from his back pocket.

He bends down in a "proposal" type way and offers the red rose to Ipshita.

Anupam: For a lovely friend and my soon-to-be wife

Ipshita: Tumhe sharam nahin athi?

Anupam: Ishq mein sharam ki koi baath hi nahin.

Ipshita: Kya tumhe daar nahin?

Anupam: Pyar mein koi darne wali baath hi nahin.

Ipshita: Dosti khi liye

She takes the rose from Anupam and leaves,smiling, her hair once again swiping on Anupams face. He looks delighted with a big smile on his face

Ipshita walks down the hallway towards wherever she was going.

Anupam sighed and just couldnt stop smiling. He shakes his head.

Anupam: Shes mine! Ipshita is mine!

Ipshita yells from somewhere far away,

Ipshita:Yeah right Anupam!

Anupam: Kya matlab!?

Ipshita was about to open her mouth to yell again but she decided against, let him be happy in his imaginary world.

Ipshita: Never mind! Yeah sure, im yours! okay!? happy!?

Anupam: You bet i am!

Anupam smiles to him self and walks towards the couch to sit and wait for Ipshita.

Preview:
Ipshita sitting with a guy in a restaurant smiling.
Anupam all angry and mad, u see his fist.
You see a guy come out of a car and hed towards a big office building.


Edit**
Hyperlink to part two: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=2 &#11454266 or just simply scroll down as its rite below.😆

Edited by sakeena - 18 years ago

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