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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please post ur reply. 😊 Complain, comment, or critisize. 😉 Thanx, 😳 take care. 😛

with regards,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ipshitha is cheating on Shiv???With whom???Hopefully not Anupam!!!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

Ipshitha is cheating on Shiv???With whom???Hopefully not Anupam!!!!pls continue soon

You will find out soon.😉

I will continue as soon as i can.😊

take care😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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im sorry about your loss, hope u r doing fine


only nw i found this FF
sooo many chracters...hard for me to remember 😆 😆 😆
ippy 😕 wht is she upto this time 😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash9

im sorry about your loss, hope u r doing fine


only nw i found this FF
sooo many chracters...hard for me to remember 😆 😆 😆
ippy 😕 wht is she upto this time 😕

thanx for ur sympathy.

well you'll see what shes upto very soon.😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank youu😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

nice part

i think ippshita and shashank r together.they r cheating shiv-gauri respectively.poor shiv.waiting for gauri's entry.

Edited by mintfresh - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mintfresh

nice part

i think ippshita and shashank r together.they r cheating shiv-gauri respectively.poor shiv.waiting for gauri's entry.

thanx😊

you will find out soon😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART SIX

Recap : Shiv is introduced. Ipshita and Shiv head out for dinner in a hotel. Shiv has some surprise waiting for Ipshita. Ipshita excuses herself and goes to a hotel room. A voice calls her from inside - she replies.

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Ipshita walks inside the room, looking over her shoulder to check that the door was locked. It was.

"Kahan thi tum Ipshita. Mein kabsi tumhara intezaar kara tha"

Ipshita : Look, im sorry. 😡Magar mein kya karthi ? Shiv ko patha chal gaya tho..."

"Shiv ko kabhi nahin pata lag saktha."

The man swivles around in his chair from his desk and gets up. You see his shoes. He walks towards Ipshita. He gets there and puts both of his hands on her shoulders. You can see him. His shoes , pants, and shirt.

"Understand ?"

Ipshita : "Yes but..."

The man cuts her off"

"Then thats it."

The man runs his hand down her hair as Ipshita puts her arms around the man. The man also then puts his arms around her waist and they put their forheads against one anothers.

"I love you Ipshita."

Ipshita : I love you too Samar

The shocking music plays and the camera rolls up onto Samar's face. 😲😲

Ipshita: Aab mujhe chalna chahiye. Mein tumhe ghar mein milti hoon. Okay ?

Samar : Teekhe dil dooba😕

Ipshita blushes.

Ipshita : Aab bhi na!

Ipshita removes herself from Samar's arms and fixes up her outfit then quickly comes back to Shiv.

Shiv : Ippi ! Tum kahan thi!

Ipshita : Shiv ! Tum bhi na. Meh to just..."

Shiv cuts her off.

Shiv : Woh sobh chodo. Khana shoro karinge ? Mujhe bohoth bukh lagi hein.

Ipshita : AWW! my poor Shiv !

Shiv gets up and sits on a chair closer to Ipshita. He reaches for her hand. Suddenly his nose twitches.

Shiv : Ipshita , tum kabh se mens perfume pehna shoro kare ?

Ipshita : Shiv ! Woh tumharse lageya hoonga.

Shiv : Mein tho yeh perfume nahin pehentha.

Ipshita sits there. Stoned ! 😆

Ipshit gets up arrubtly.

Ipshita : What the hell Shiv ! Tum mujh peh shakh kare ho ? Mein yeh tho kabhi nahin sonchi , keh tum itne giriwi ilzam mujh par dalooge. Good bye Shiv Kapoor ! 😡😡

Ipshita leaves. Shiv calls her name many times and tries to follow after her. But the security guards stop him.

As he still needs to pay the bill. 😆 😛 And now WHY waste a perfect delicious dinner because of a snob ? Well you wouldnt. And neither did our lovely Iqbal Khan Shivy !! 😳 😳

He went back to his table. Ordered for more things. And settled back to eat. 😃

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"Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai"

She practiced for her performance as she put on her jewellery. Earrings are swinging as her ear is shown , and she is putting on her earrings. Then you see her foot on her bed. As she connects the two links of her payal. You see her lips singing in complete "Sur" as she applies lipstick. You see her sari being folded and tucked in. Eyeliner being added on as the last quick touch to her eyes. You see them. Sparkling eyes. Causes you too be lost in them. You see her feet being put into glamerous sandles. She dances a little while she grabs her cell phone and heads out to meet her family and friends downstaires in the living room.

"Aai aise raat hai jo
Bhahut khushnaseeb hai
Chahe jise door se duniya
Woh mere kareeb hai
Kitna kuch kehna hai
Phir bhi hai dil mein
Saawal hai kahin
Sapno mein jo roj kaha hai
Woh phir se kahun ya nahi"

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Back at the restaurant Shiv is eating happily. But a little lonely.

Man WHY did everyone have to go to the stupid party. I need to get some jammin in here.

Shiv calls his friends, but they are all too busy and can not come. He calls Anupam.

Anupam : Yeah ?

Shiv : Man Anupum imma so ... forget it.

Anupam : WHAT ? 😕

Shiv : yo bro just get here

Anupam : Where Shiv ? Arent you coming to the party ?

Shiv : Im not going to some retarted party.

Anupam: Shiv cool down , WHY are you sounding so pissed ?

Shiv : ANUPAM DONT YOU GET IT I SAID GET HERE !

Anupam replies with an okay and hangs up.

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A while later , Shiv looks up to see his friends. They come and grab chairs.

You see sandles. (maybe some familier ones?) Thenit goes up , and you see a pretty sari. The camera goes all the way to her smiling mouth. Then you see eyes. Then you see her hand running through her hair. The camera is now behind her. And you can see her head to toe from the back. The pretty one that was practicing her performance before stood there.

Shiv : Arey Gauri , tum bhi beto na.

Then you see the face of that pretty one. 😳 😳

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Preview : Ipshita is talking on the phone.

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Hope you guys enjoyed that. 😛 Sorry for posting an update after sooo long !! 😭 😭 Take care! 😊😳

- Deena 😉

Edited by sakeena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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YAY ! Gauri is introduced !! 😉

please comment , critisize or complain

and remember , as usual i need 3 replies to continue on !! 😊

- Deena

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