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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Ipshita: Jaana zaroori hain?... is a anupam line right?

Ok wow u given us 2 parts...👏👏...

love the song and way to described it!

looking for to SG!!

kat 😳

😆Yes, "Jaana zaroori hain?... " is a Anupam line, i better fix that.😆
thank you, SG will hopefully be intoduced soon!

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddess

brilliant 2 parts.. gr8 start.. and i am looking reallii forward to Gauri's
intro..!!

please do continue soon!!

thanx so much, Gauri will have her intro soon.😉

Originally posted by: shivgauri

nice part!!!but seriously Shiv loves ipshitha 😕????? pls continue soon

thanxx😳 yes, shiv luves ippi,😆 but lets see where that goes till. will continue soon.😊

Originally posted by: pinguunique

wow the first two parts are really great! 😊Especially the beginning with the song was very different 👏👏👏. Nice to see anupam against shiv for ipshita. But where's gauri?Plz make her enter soon.

😳thankk youu. dont worry, gauri will come soon, cuz without her, there is no story.😉

Originally posted by: mintfresh

nice start
eagerly waiting for shivgauri scenes
plz cont soon

thankss. im waiting 4 da shivgauri scenes too!😆 will hopefully post 2dayy

Originally posted by: gujibabe

just read both parts!!!
where is gauri???]
and y does shiv love ippi??? 😡
lol 😆
continue soon plz!!!

gauri's coming, since her and shiv are the main charactors it takes longer 4 them to come in.😉 yes, im very mad at shiv for loving ippi too!😆 but lets hope that marriage doesnt go to far.😉 will try to post an update 2dayy😊

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Thanx everyone for all ur posts, it rilly means a lot to me, thanx so much!😳
will try to post an update 2day, and lets hope that shiv DOESNT get married to ippi.😉 take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|


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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Hey guys, i thought that i would let u know a lil bit of background of the characters before we continue with part 3. I didnt mention all of the characters from the show[4 example, Maasi Ma, Daksh,etc] becuz they rilly are the same as in the show and arent rilly the main charactors. And as i said in my 2nd update that gauri's gonna have bro's and mother and yeah. so i have added that. Gauri only has one brother. I added a couple of new charactors in the fanfic. and a lot of the charactors in the show, their info has changed so its very important that u read this. I will call it Part 3. Even though it rilly isnt a part, but its some info u gotta know b4 moving on, so ill call it part 3. and ill try to post on part 4 2day, if i cant 2nite then i will 4 suer post it on 2morro. well hope u understand it all, if u have any questions then feel free to PM me or post a message in the ff. thanx for ur time. and here is part 3!! forgive me if im missing anything. i have to add more things on to ipshita and anupam but i will do that l8er in the future. i no its boring, but its important if u wanna understand the ff, so take care.😉

with regards,
|[>Deena|
For part 2 and 1 please go to page 2. and for the index please go to page one, thanxx.

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PART THREE

CHARACTERS

Gauri Chatterjee: [Played by Pallavi Subhash- same as show] Lives in Shiv house, as her father and Shiv's father cannot be separated! Lol. Has a thing for Shiv, but Shiv only considers Gauri a friend. Shashank asked for Gauri's hand, and Gauri didn't want to be mean, so she accepted! Wonder what shes gonna do…

Shiv Kapoor: [Played by Iqbal Khan] Enjoys the fact that so many people live in his gigantic house, every girl in the country DIES for him, has loads of buddys.has a millionaire for a father, spends money like THIS, and loves Ipshita with all his heart… at least he thinks…

Anupam: [Played by Hiten Tejwani- same as show] Lives in his bestfriend, Shiv's house and has his family consider him their own. He is madly in love with Ipshita but only to be rejected…and not once…A LOT of times!

Ipshita: [Played by Shreya Bhinst-same as show] Good friend of with Gauri, in a relationship with Shiv, has Anupam dying over her, and lives in Shivs house with her mom and sister…Shes a postitive character so far… but anything can change…anything can happen…in just a wink…

Shashank: [Played by Eijaz Khan] Lives with his father and mother, Mahen and Nikhila… Shashank always felt that Nikhila preferred her other children more then him, but y? When he proposed to his good friend Gauri, and she accepted he was mad with happiness. Now he stands with pride…with his love at his side…Gauri…or is it?

Ram: [Played by Amit Khanna- same as show] His parents were good friends with Mahen Kapoor even though his parents were poor. So then when his parents died in a accident of some sort when he was a lil kid, Mahen adapted him and treated him like his own son. At the moment he is in love with…Gauri!

Mrs. Nikhila Kapoor: [Played by Achint Kaur- same as show] She dislikes Shashank, while she loves all her other children. She has some what a positive in the show…at least so far…

Vivan Kapoor: [Played by Karan Patel] Has a great older brother, Ram. Ram and Vivan are very greatful to the Kapoor family for taking them in and considering them their own. Madly in love with Gauri's sister Kaya, but to bad…Kaya doesn't love him back…

Kaya Chatterjee: [Played by the same person in the show] Gauri's younger sister. Shes a bit too pampered, but she loves her sister and family. She dreams of becoming a doctor and goes to college for that purpose. A happy girl that is in a relationship with non other then Samar Kapoor.

Samar Kapoor: [Played by Yash Tonk-same as show] Shiv's OLDER brother. He is the "Bandar" of the house. Samar is a funny, friendly, naughty guy. He has loads of girlfriends but only one of them matter to him, only one of them he has interest in…Kaya. And he is so happy that she loves him back.

Palak: [ Played by the same person in the show] Ever since her rape, she has changed and followes in Gauri's footsteps as she looks up to her. She adors her family and has Kaya as her best friend. Her life would have been perfect if only she didn't have a kid without a father…and had Ram's love.

Mahen: [ Played by the same person in the show]A multimillionaire successful business man with many children. He is greatful for his friend that stays with him in his house.

Alok: just what he is in the show. And by looking at the rest of the charactors, I think u have figured out the details and changes.

Shiv's Dada: [Played by the same person in the show] just what he is in the show. And by looking at the rest of the charactors, I think u have figured out the details and changes. The short form for shivs dada is Sdada- I will use that in the story.

Shiv's Dadi: [ Played by the same person in the show] just what she is in the show. And by looking at the rest of the charactors, I think u have figured out the details and changes. The short form for shivs dadi is Sdadi- I will use that in the story.

Ipshita's mother: [Played by the same person in the show] She loves both her daughters very much and will do anything for their happiness. She is happy for Ipshita, since she found her love. But she is sad for Kritika since…well, cuz of Shashank. She has hatred for Gauri in her. She dispises her very much. But Gauri in return treats her with respect and kindness even though Ipshita's mother is very rude.

NEW CHARACTERS

Priyanka: [Played by Roshni Chopra aka as Pia on Kasam Se] Anupams lil sister. Loves Vivan.


Kritika: [Played by Karishma Tanna aka Palak on Palki or Kritika on Koi Dil Mein Hein] Ipshita's lil sister. Loves Shashank.

Gauri's Dada: [Played by Ronit Roy aka Mihir Virani frm Kunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi] the short form for this is Gdada-I will use that in the story. Lives in the Kapoor household and have friendship with Shiv's Dada

Gauri's Dadi: [ Played by Smriti Irani aka Tulsi frm Kunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi] the short form for this is Gdadi- I will use that in the story. Lives in the Kapoor household and have friendship with Shiv's Dadi.

Mahi: [Played by Saakshi Tanwar aka Parvati Agarwal frm Kahaani Ghar Ghar Ki] Has Alok for a husband and Gauri and Kaya as kids. She is very excited but tearful that its time to get Gauri married to Shashank. Her life is full of happiness, except she doesn't find Gauri all that happy, what could be the reason?

Rahul: [Played by Naman Shaw aka Pushkar frm Kasam Se]Gauri's lil brother that is totally obsessed with his fiance, Ishika.

Ishika: [Played by Divyanka Tripathi aka Vidya frm Dulhann] Gauri's best friend, Shashanks lil sister and is engaged to Rahul. Her life is just great!

EDIT*****
Hey guys, i forgot to mention Shilpa, shes a big part in the show, isnt she? she is played by the same person in the show and she rilly likes Ram. Too bad Palak likes Ram too, but sad that Ram likes neither of them. He likes Gauri, and Palak and Shilpa both know that. Also Palak, Shilpa, and Kaya are bestbestbest friends. and shilpa is ishika's lil sis in this. she also lives in the kapoor house with her sis.

NEW CHARACTERS COMING SOON


Edit Again...😆**
Hyperlink to part 4: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=4 &#11577191
Edited by sakeena - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Please comment, complain, or critisize! thanxx
take care,

with regards,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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my my.. such a large group of characters, look forward to part 4... to see
what happens!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

my my.. such a large group of characters, look forward to part 4... to see
what happens!!

😆yes, there are a lot of chacters. thanx😳 i will post the update on soon.😉
take care,😊

with regards,
|[>Deena|

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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Please comment, critisize, or complain.
I will post the update asap.
thanx, take care.

with regards,
|[>DEENA|

Edited by sakeena - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
great introduction of the characters. 😊 It really will help in the update. So plz update asap.Can't wait to read abt Shiv falling for Gauri.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice intro
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: pinguunique

great introduction of the characters. 😊 It really will help in the update. So plz update asap.Can't wait to read abt Shiv falling for Gauri.

thank youu, i will post the next part soon

Originally posted by: mintfresh

nice intro
eagerly waiting for next part

thanx, will update asap

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, sorry for the delay. Just a lil busy but im back. I know i didnt up date yesterday or on friday but im getting together a long one, just for u guys. So thanx for being patient. Its not such an exciting one, but its something, ill get a better one in my next update. This one is pritty boring and for those who have red my characters please go back and check once more for edits. I am just going to go edit some details of the characters on part 3 page 3 rite now as i made some changes, so if u have red that plz read again and make sure that u know what everything it. thanx. so here it is...the boring part 4....take care,

with regards,
|[>DEENA|
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PART FOUR

Ipshita was taken out of her thoughts as her cell rang on her neatly made and decorated bed. She went towards it and looked at the screen, it was SHIV!!

Delighted Ipshita decided to wait a couple of rings before picking it up, if he luved her, he would just have to wait. Finally after a bit of torture to poor Shiv, Ipshita answers her phone.

Ipshita(bored tone): Hello.

Shiv: Ipshita! Hi darling! I miss you.

Ipshita: Shiv, hum subha koi to mile the.

Shiv: Mujhe patha hain, magar phir bhe.

Ipshita: Shiv… phir bhe kya?

Shiv: I love you.

Ipshita: I love you too Shiv.

Shiv: I love you more Ipshita.

Ipshita: Shivv!

Shiv: Kya?

Ipshita: Kya kya? Jaana nahin hein?

Shiv: Tum tayaar ho?

Ipshita: Takhriban.

Shiv: Kool, ill see you at the car, be there in 5 minutes.

Ipshita: Shiv! Mein Dekhoonghi.

Shiv: Ipshita!

Ipshita: Okay baba! Khooshish karungi. Teekhe?

Shiv: Okay.

Ipshita: Okay bye Shiv…

Shiv: Bye sweetheart.


Ipshita waits for Shiv to hang up. After some time of waiting she speaks in her call once more.

Ipshita: Shiv? Tum vahaan ho?

Shiv: Haan.

Ipshita: Rakh do no jaan.

Shiv: Pehle tum

Ipshita: Pehle mein kyon?

Shiv: IPSHITA

Ipshita: Okay, okay. Relax Shiv. Mein rakh deti hoon. Just chill. God.


Ipshita puts down the phone and goes into deep thought || You see a pair of black shoes walking on marble floor

Ipshita comes out of her thoughts and she walks towards her dresser once more || The black shoes turn a corner and continue walking

Ipshita puts down her phone on her dresser and smiles to her self. She is so lucky to have Shiv as her Jeevan Saathi || The black shoes come upon a door

Ipshita wonders off to her balcony || A hand has been placed on a doorknob.

Edited by sakeena - 18 years ago

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