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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please comment, complain or critisize! thanxx.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay, i think im gonna post part two too. no one said anything yet to my part one, i knew it was boring 😭
well here is part 2, im not rilly done, but i think its an okay spot to end it, but i think its more boring then part one. 😆 anyways take care,

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Posted: 18 years ago
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INFO

Hey guys: Yes I'm back with my 2nd update! It still is pretty boring… well here it is! Hope u enjoy it! I will make sure that the next update is better. So here goes nothing….
Note: Watch out, you will get lots of intro's in this one. Such as Gauri's brothers which are not in the show. And her mother and her grandmother Her grandfather is…hmm..i dunnu, ill think about that, maybe he has passed away, maybe not, u'll see. Oh and what about her other grandparents, cousins, aunts, uncles….uhh, I don't think I need all that people, lets just keep it basic. Oh and Ipshita and Anupam live in Shiv's house. And remember, shiv is iqbal khan, this shiv is not yash tonk. And samer looks exactly like shiv. Two Iqqu's! woot!!

Recap: Intro to Anupam and Ipshita. Ipshita is going to get married to Shiv soon. Anupam hears about how they were going to go to dinner that night. 😡 Anupam luvs Ipshita, but Ipshita only considers him a friend, a good friend.(Ippi dances to "Yeh Mera Dil" in her Dance Studio)

For Index: Go to page ONE

For Part One: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=2
i dont rilly actually NEED to post the link to part one. cuz if u scroll up, u will see it. If ur too lazy to scroll up then here's the link, but i think its easier if u simply scroll up.😆 Its like practically the post above this, i could have just put them in one post too, but oh well, whats done, is done.😆

PART TWO

Anupam and Ipshita made there way to the Kapoor house.

Anupam: Ipshita, I love you.

Ipshita: That's great Anupam.

Anupam and Ipshita both sighed. Anupam was determined to get Ippi's luv but so far...he was NOT succeeding. And Ipshita knew that Anupam was totally in love with her, but what could she do? She couldn't leave Shiv just cuz Anupam was crazy about her, Anupam would one day get over it. He HAD to.

Anupam: Well here we are.

Ipshita leaned over and kissed Anupam's cheek, as Anupam blushed.

Ipshita: Thanx for the ride. I'll see ya later, k?

Anupam was to stunned to reply, but quickly broke out of it.

Anupam: Jaana zaroori hain?

Ipshita rolls her eyes, she should NOT have kissed him, or told him to think whatever he pleased, it really got on him, now he thinks she LIKE him or something, and that is soo NOT true!

Ipshita: Anupam, remember? Shiv, me, dinner?

Anupam: Agar tum mujhse pyar karti ho tho Shiv ke saath jaana kyon?


Ipshita looked at the helpless Anupam whine like a real kid.

Ipshita: Look, I know it hurts, but Anupam, face the fact. I do NOT love you. I love Shiv, and Shiv loves me. So if u will excuse me…

Anupam didn't didn't get a chance to hear the rest of the sentence as she banged the car door, and stomped away into the house, her heels clicking away, her dupatta flying in the wind, her hair swaying in the wind…

Anupam: Oh god Anupam! Stop thinking about her, you'll never get her, who would want me rather then Shiv Kapoor, the richest man in India, every girls dreams….

Anupam sighed, he was hopeless. But he was determined, he would do ANYTHING to get her, even give up his life….ONLY if he had to though…only IF….

*****

Ipshita was sitting infront of her dresser, putting on the last bit of jewelry. She had on a white saari with blue kaam. Her sandels elegantly matched her saari and her earring swinged as she moved. She lifter the bindiya up to her forhead ant put it on. Then she took out her payal, then decided against it. It was meant to be a quite and peaceful dinner, her payal would just be disturbance…and noise pollution, she laughed softly as she remembered what Shiv had told her. Ipshita was about to reach into her drawer once more when a knock was placed at her door.

Oh god! Its Shiv! Well, someone has come on time, Shiv is ALWAYS late. Ipshita smiled and quickly got up. She walked towards the door and opened it.

Ipshita: Arey Maya Aunty, aap?

Ipshita was kinda disappointed, she was expecting it to be Shiv. Where was he anyway? It was getting late, they should have been leaving by now. But no, Maya Aunty was here to give her a lecteur or something. GOD!

Maya: Tum tayaar hoogi?

Ipshita thinks to herself, I would have been, if u wouldn't have come knocking at my door! Ipshita likes Maya aunty but this was NOT the time to get into a conversation or whatever Maya aunty was there for.

Ipshita: Aabi bas…

Maya cut her off.

Maya: Anyways, mein tho baate ne ki liye ayi thi ke Shiv tumhara baher, gaadi pe intezaar kara hein. Tho jaaldi kar, teekhe?

Ipshita was about to reply but Maya turned on her heel and left, clapping away against the marble floor. This is noise pollution AND damage. Those heels are prolly so sharp that they chuck marble out of the floor. Maya Aunty should seriously wear different shoes in the house, the whole house prolly heard that. Or at least she should put some rubber under her heels. She laughed once again as she remembered what shiv had said. There were so many memories of them, just them. Shiv was the man for her. She luved him, and he luved her.

Ipshita was taken out of her thoughts as her cell rang on her neatly made and decorated bed. She went towards it and looked at the screen, it was SHIV!!

Preview:
Ipshita sitting with a guy in a restaurant smiling.
Anupam all angry and mad, u see his fist.
You see a guy come out of a car and hed towards a big office building.
[its the same preview as part one.😆]


Well thats it for now. I will hopefully post 2morro. I know that this part was rilly boring. I will try to put in more ShivGauri scenes but not just yet, first i still have to do there intro.😆 And as for Ipshita and Shiv's marriage...lets hope it DOESNT happen. 😉Well take care. I will update soon.

with regards,
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Edit**
Hyperlink to part three: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=675938&TPN=3 &#11471202

Edited by sakeena - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please comment, complain or critisize! thanxx.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ipshita: Jaana zaroori hain?... is a anupam line right?

Ok wow u given us 2 parts... 👏 👏 ...

love the song and way to described it!

looking for to SG!!

kat 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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brilliant 2 parts.. gr8 start.. and i am looking reallii forward to Gauri's
intro..!!

please do continue soon!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
nice part!!!but seriously Shiv loves ipshitha 😕 ????? pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow the first two parts are really great! 😊Especially the beginning with the song was very different 👏 👏 👏 . Nice to see anupam against shiv for ipshita. But where's gauri?Plz make her enter soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice start
eagerly waiting for shivgauri scenes
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just read both parts!!!
where is gauri???]
and y does shiv love ippi??? 😡
lol 😆
continue soon plz!!!

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