THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 118

Maan is so desperate to spend time alone with his Giit.

Commented for Chapter 71 on blog

Chapter - 72

Its an awesome blossomed update !!!

Hi dqno1,

Sorry I wont be able to comment for the previous threads, cause frankly speaking I really cant remember what happens in which thread. so I thought to write a short review of each character and story, hope dats ok wid I would have re-read ur story but dnt have da time sos.

Dev: long ur characterisation of him. Big time flirt suits him to the T. His caring and loving also which I adore. but love his funky and care-free side. his soo funny in terms of his songs be in naina, or geet. Love his character totally different from da show

naintara - shes brave, confident and very intelligent - so love her also, I actually liked her in the actual show - I love t hate her if u knw what a mean, but I totally love her ere since shes the caring big sis to our geet. she has a horrible past but I like da fact that she doesn't let it affect her much. I liked er initial interactions with dev.

dadi- oh I totally love her especially her trying to be Sherlock holmes. dadi is da best totally whether dats the show or ur story.

Maan- I really couldn't imagine a shy maan but after ur story I can, yes I love his dedication to work n all but most of all his love for geet n da fact dat his didn't may no heed to any other girls. so yeh I love a man like dat totally in love n loyal to geet and so it should be. him n nakul n da gay thing was really funny

Geet - I love her I mean I love all ur characters but geet is my fav along wid dadi sorry if any1 disagrees wid me. very much like the geet we all knw n love, shy, reserved and innocent. hovever full of character once u get to knw her. I like how you developed her character over time. I mean we all knew maans stance in all this but u provided quite limited insight into geets feelings although we knew she loves him due to her actions however her personal views were not as clear unlike maans to me anyways.

I hate Brij totally hate him, I can stand violence to some extent but never force I hope inda future episodes he gets a beating n can dat be from naina n er mom n not dev n maan I mean dey can also murder him later but first des womens should teach him a lesson o yeh n kabirs mums alwell plz, I know u finished wid da sorry but would like to see him in bruises if not DEAD.

so far I like all da characters and how the story in folding out to be, I like the more spoken n bold geet however I would like to see geets darji and maans interaction in terms of wedding or have a missed it if so plz let me know. last but not least I think your a fabulous writer, quite expressive and you've given all your characters equal exposure which is nice. hoever initially I did find I slightly confusing with da time line. I hope this is sufficient enough can I now have the next chapters 69 plz, plz, plz n I promise to write regular comments on ur story

hey

part 68 - well it wasnt unusual to c maan so hyped up, but dead funny, i loved dat geet paid no attention, well at least dats wat it seemed like to maan. poor maan, i love dis situation totally different n funny, n dev was icing on da cake


Part 69 - poor maan is soo desperate, i may sound devious but i liked it, it made their union all the more xciting. lunch in her apartment was gr8 n nakul i must say i love his (not stupidity) but naivety his never ending quest to impress his maan sir, which always ends up frustrating him. Geet is so nice, so full of humanity. I LOVE HER for who she is,

Part 70 was quite funny, I love the reactions of geet and her innocence. Dev was hilarious but I like the understanding between maan-dev, maan-geet, n maan-dave. I liked da dance, cant w8 2 knw wat happens in 71

Now i can plz have part 71, sorry but ded buzy ryt nw wid uni starting and all but defo will try to ryt a short update for all parts nxt tym, n are you ok with text form or shall i write full full sentences. please let me know

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Chapter - 72

It was one of the most beautiful part of the TL.

The parting pains them but the promise to be back makes them happy and excited !

Beautifully written the emotions and its flow !!!

Brij' dark side is out.

He is biggest fool to ignore all the love and care he gets, and becoming a monster and ruining everything for the materialistic things.

Nice chapter !

😛 passion contrlld by feet voww😛 bee hhara maan!

Beautiful story. So well written. Love it. Just started reading it . Don't know how to access your blog

Beautiful story. Just started reading it