THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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deepthich

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1161

😭 😭

maine pura itna bada update likhi aur pura chalagaya... i pressed back button unknowingly ...

anyways rewriting what i wrote...

loving the romance dearo... u know actually constant romance should be boring... but i dont know if its ur writing or the character's involved in it... im so addicted to this MAANEET romance now... u wrote it so amazingly... i dont want to end reading it...

loving it to teh core... im not writing it to imress you or something else... sach me... there are only few stories that i like so much that even after completing reading it... i start imagining them... n feel happy... that sthe impact i have from few stories... that also depends on the way people explain things... n u are fabulous in that... sach agar i wouldd have missed reading this story... or would have neglected asking u password i would have missed so much... i would have missed an amazig feeling that i feel now whenever i read this...

sach kahu... im literally so busy these days bcoz of my work... but to read this story... i dont know how im managing to take out time... but i feel happy after reading atleast one update...

but im also feeling sad that i wont be reading this story after few updates... bcoz its going to be end... 😭

u know initially when i use to read other couples's lovestory like dev-tara... and many more that we have in this story... i used to feel u are using all the romantic momets for them... what will remain for MAANEET... but though some scenes are similar... they are so different when it comes to MAANEET... so loving... so dreamy... at the same time /... u brought up many more new romantic angles... loving this passionate MAAN yaar,,, so very much...

loving everything yaar... their afternoon lunches... skype chatting,... now outhouse meeting... 😳

cant wait to read next ... so send passord soon...

by the way i love when u use some inspirational words also in ur story...

like dadi's words to maithilima...

and some beautiful thoughts... like this "Every woman is split into two Maan. On the one hand is the home where she was raised with care and love and on the other side is someone who is her world. There are responsibilities and love on both sides Maan. With the help of a loving partner both sides can be managed. Do you think Maan that she wants to leave you even now? Why is she crying her eyes out in her room then?".

u are fabulous writer dear,,,, sont stop writing on our lovely MAANEET... this couple makes ur writing alive... as i feel... 😳

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AAINAPATEL

@AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1162

Read 2 parts both were awesome 68 nd 69... Maan's craving nd geet's shyness s d JAAN of ds story. Wah MSK s afraid i mean sort of afraid of *NAKUL* HAHAHAHAHA. Not of nakul bt actually his acts... And here nakul bichara sirf help hi to karna chahta h... Missing dev-tara... And shairies too... (ya i knw m a shairi freek)... And dat dream nd blindfold part was too much **blushy blushy**... Geet!! wid d comparision of maan nd aman u really insulted maan's physique... Tum kya jano he had spend extra hours on it today... or aaj hi sari mehnat ka bhajipala kar diya... Bdw superb prts u hv amazng skil of writing...

Me busy 4 sm days so will read nd cmnt whenever i get time...
Nd plz pm me the link of all ur wrks newer nd older to...
Make sure u send link by lappy lolz... I really feel bad to nag u agn nd agn 4 d same links. Sorry 4 dat dear...

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AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1163

Nice part 70... Bechara maan... dev ne kya dimag lagaya h,,, hahaha... chotu... me still laughng... Well dev-tara back... Nd dave nd sameera too nice 2 see dem agn in stry...
Dining table seen was AWESOME... Nd dev's songs to tease dem were the cherry on cake...

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AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1164

I cnt stp myslf frm readng further evn after being so busy... I actualy skipd my aftrnoon nap nd read part 71 nd nw i m little free so decided 2 read nd cnt hold my hands 4m gvng u a big wala cmnt... Bcz maanji kya shairi mari h... U besharam guy... I actually decided k wil cmnt directly at d end of dis thread bt chngd my mind aftr readng a shairi in prt 72... Ds cmnt s specially 4 d Shairi...
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Wah wah kya idea h maaneet!!! na maan ka room na geet ka room to beach ha,,, not bad... Kahi b raho sath rehne se mtlb... I was so shokd s dis d same geet whom naintara use to call bambi??? Man! She s really a SHERNI... Nd what a news she knws riding bike!!! Wah wah... Maan to moke pe choka marofying ha!! Bichari... Ab aisa besharam lvr peche ho to kis ka dhyan drivng pe rahega??? Aur ye dance was Aawweesommmee ... Dude!! The baby talk was so cute... Nd salman khuran nd shahrukh khurana HAHAHAHAHAHAH it really sounds funny... Nd phuss sad time s here... They r parting... Dev nd dadima concoling geet part ws so much sweety sweety... Wah likd maan nd dadi's convo... At last Bichdan... Bt i m smellng danger cz ds good 4 nothng brij had climbd d bus of hp only... Nd yaa... I knew it i knew it dis brij the stupid cnt b chandan's bro...
Well allower both d updts were wndrful!!!

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AAINAPATEL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1165

Read part 73 nw... Omg! It ws tooo blushy blushy... Bth sides r burning wid desires nd passion... The skype seen was d limit of maan's teasing glares... Oho! This twin duo really make me feel J... Hw well dey undrstnd each odr's needs... Thnx dev!! iss 'so passionate' insan ko uske passion k pas bhejne k liye... Wah maan reachd hp... Lvd dadi 4 her undrstndnd... She s d bst... Nd pinky-geet talk was *hey its a grly talk dnt interfere*... nd well she cleard pinki's doubts... But iske doubts to sirf ek hi insan clear kr skta h... Nd he s on hs way to her... The end was in d middle of such a blushy scene... Well lvd ds part tooo much...

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Hemlata

@nitika20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1166

Dqno1 Mujhe password de do..

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1167

Originally posted by: nitika20
Dqno1 Mujhe password de do..

it's not one password that I can give easily.. It's one per chapter. Jaise padhte jaogi, I will see your comment on the chapter and then send you pwd.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1168

To the writer of Locket,

Hi I am Sophie, relatively new and I have reading your Locket FF. I must say I love your depiction of Geet and Maan. I am on chapter 68 which I cant read, so can you please sent a copy or make it available to me please. I don't really know how to use this forum but I must say I should thank you for getting me out of may comfort zone as a silent reader although i don't read that many FFs.

Sophie
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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1169

Originally posted by: sophiexx
To the writer of Locket,

Hi I am Sophie, relatively new and I have reading your Locket FF. I must say I love your depiction of Geet and Maan. I am on chapter 68 which I cant read, so can you please sent a copy or make it available to me please. I don't really know how to use this forum but I must say I should thank you for getting me out of may comfort zone as a silent reader although i don't read that many FFs.

Sophie
IM LOST DONT KNW HOW TO USE DIS WAT SO EVA N CNT SND AM PM

Hi Sophie

👏 You posted your first comment. See it was not that hard was it?

The Locket is my first FF. After putting 52 updates and not getting the support of silent readers I decided to shift some parts to my blog.

Access is only available once I see comments on all threads of my story. That means for every 3 chapters you need to post a comment just like you did now.

Once I see the comments, then and only then do I give access. Hope you understand. As a writer reading comments is the only payment I get for my hard work.