Twisted Fate.. asya( kabhi ) 21st chaptr updated links given

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THREAD 3
13TH chaptr
Tanu in her room:
billo rani ..haan yeh sab humara kiya dhara hai

Kabir hum aur aap bacpan ke dost thy...

Aur jab humara nikaah ka rista aapke paas leke aaye tho aapne tukra diya

Bg music Billo rani...bhouth galath kiya..

Mana ki aapne hume aur imraan ko ek saath dekha aur humare aapas ke baat sun li thi ki hum uske bacche hi maa bannewale hain...but yeh sab hum chupana nahi chahthain thy..

I wanted to tell u...tht it was a big mistake..he was drunk nd he needed help..

He needed someone to drop him home..so i dropped him nd took him to his bedroom..

Aur fir yeh sab khand hogaya...

He was weak nd he made me weak too..

Nothg could be done in tht situation...yes it was sin...

But u aftr hearing me being preggo wth imraan's child just left me ...

U didn't support me

Wow this is ur frndshp...

Nd aftr rejection frm u...i was heartbroken...i was going in the path without any sense...nd a truck just collided wth me...nd i lost my child too

Its all becoz of u...kabir.. i was lonely alone..couldnt spk abt all this wth anyone..

Nd thn aftr 2 weeks u say yes to some gal named zoya...billo rani

How dare u...if u aren't mine thn u aren't anyone'elses hahahaha

Uss ladki ki kushiyon kuch hi pal ki thi..

Kyonki muje uski taqdeer mitani thi...nd i leaked the petrol of ur car..

Uss din call bhi maine kiya tha...hahaha

Kalhatty cliff haha aur tumari mauth hogayi...

Billo rani...

Asya scene

Asad : zoya..yeh kya kiya tumne

Zoya: par tumne hi tho kaha vomit in my hands

Asad : arghhh agar main yeh kaho go jump to the well tho kya karogi...gadhi kahi ki...

Zoya : nahi karoongi ..i don't believe in suicides nd all...its cowardly act...nd waise bhi iam only 20 nd meri nikaah tho abhi abhi huva hai... nd i lov my life..i hav got long life..

Asad ; yep long life...patha nahi kiske saath bichara...

Zoya : obious tumare saath bondhu tum mere shouhar ho bhool gaye kya

Asad :accha mere saath lambhi zindigi...iss baat ka kya signal hai ..

Zoya ; signals...allah miya ne ithni sarre signals tho de raki hai..

Meri nikaah kabir ke saat honewala tha...par tears drop frm her eyes.. mitwaa

Asad sees her tears...ishq pay zor nahi...

...shayed kismet ko yeh manzoor nahi tha

Kyonki kismet ko hum manzoor thy...

Issliye tho hum dono ki nafrath bhi iss nikaah ko rok nahi payi...

Kisi ko mukamaal jahaan nai Milta khwaish hai ki bas mil jaye ek sur ka ashiyaan

Asad lost in zoya's words...nd her tears keep droping... her hair covering her half face cold breeze blowing around asya

Aak comes close to zoya nd for the moment the whole world seems paused all he could see was her tears his hands raise to wipe her tears nd he touches her delicate cheecks ..his hands seems to be stuck ther near her cheecks he couldn't take his hands off her crying face

Dono y ???

Nd somewhere near the deserts banjara's nd group.. start singing

Sun le zameen sun le aasmaan
Dono ki ishq ki ye daastaan
Dono mein hain kaisi deewangi
Dono dilon ne kahe hain kahaan

Sun le zameen sun le aasmaan
Dono ki pyaar ki ye daastaan

Man mein umang leke tan mein tarang leke
Chhod chale dono duniya ki galiyaan

Inko junoon hai inki sukoon hai
Jab se mili hai aankhein hosh hain dono ke gum

Kaisa karaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ikraar hai allah allah

Kaisa ghumaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah

but the boats arrive the place...afreen zara ayoob azan all come running

afreen sees asad ...nd calls him asad

but asad seems lost in zoya's tears...kaisa karaar hai allah allah

afreen sees asad nd zoya both lost in each other's eyes his palm on her cheecks

afreen screams asad

zoya comes out of the trans

nd asad sees afreen nd his frnds

asad removes his hand frm zoya's cheecks nd moves towards afreen to hug her but somethg in him stops halfway pause for a minute...nd he sees back at zoya his heart starts beating dhak dhak tish tish... Man mein umang leke tan mein tarang leke
Chhod chale dono duniya ki galiyaan

chod chale dono duniya ki galiyan

galiyaan yeh duniya ki galiyaan nd remains ther paused

but afreen comes running nd hugs asad...nd asad remains confused abt his own feelingsšŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ˜•

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayyy main 1st 🄳
Congo Shongo for new thread šŸ¤—šŸ„³
Tu toh Chas gyi Jhillu milu šŸ¤—šŸ‘


Billion rani the murderer 🤬 physco kahi ki 🤢
Kabir ko maar diya 😭
very bad 😔
Aab jail ki rats iss cats ko jaldi eat karlegi šŸ˜”šŸ˜Ž

AsYa scene šŸ˜­ā¤ļø
inna jyda intense ā¤ļøā¤ļø
Asad bondhu 🤣
Bondhu ka dil dhadkta hai only for Zoyeee isilye Vo royeee šŸ¤”ā¤ļø
AsYa k hearts toh already mil Chuke hai ā¤ļø
Afreen KMHS 😔😔
chipku Afreen 😵
jitna marzi chipak le... Asad toh Zoya ka hi hai 🄳

Amazing update Jhillu šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼
ā¤ļøed it

Here are my stars: ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø
Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on thread 2🄳
so billo rani had a past with kabir😲
she cheated on him with imran n also is involved in kabirs murder🤢
zoya pukes on asads hands🤣
she tells asad that its fate that has brought them together😳
Asad wipes her tears n gets an unknown feeling towards zoya
afeen n gang come to rescue asya at the moment
asad is abt to go n hug afreen but pauses there..
whilst the stupid afreen comes n hugs him🄱
asad is confused abt his feelingsšŸ˜•
short update but still liked it😳
update soonish!!!

Maha

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
awesome update..
bt so small... kyu yaari šŸ˜†
acha Zoya baby giving lecture on kismat n all 2 asad...
vomiting in his hands..poor asad..n his ocd 🄱
BTW song is from which movie..
OMG billo is so dangerous.
asad started wiping FM mirchi tears.
he didn't hugged her bt that kamini hugged him 😔
I want 2 kill her..

continue soon.. congratulations fr new thread...
jillu.. hwz CLG n ur health
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amulya9

awesome update..
bt so small... kyu yaari šŸ˜†
acha Zoya baby giving lecture on kismat n all 2 asad...
vomiting in his hands..poor asad..n his ocd 🄱
BTW song is from which movie..
OMG billo is so dangerous.
asad started wiping FM mirchi tears.
he didn't hugged her bt that kamini hugged him 😔
I want 2 kill her..

continue soon.. congratulations fr new thread...
jillu.. hwz CLG n ur health

LOTS to study yaari
dimag ki dahi hogayi hai
upon tht
surprise tests arghh
sorry for small updatesOuchOuch
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unresd on page 1 🤣

main phuting Rhythm of love likhing 🤣
cya šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Yayyy main 1st 🄳
Congo Shongo for new thread šŸ¤—šŸ„³
Tu toh Chas gyi Jhillu milu šŸ¤—šŸ‘


Billion rani the murderer 🤬 physco kahi ki 🤢
Kabir ko maar diya 😭
very bad 😔
Aab jail ki rats iss cats ko jaldi eat karlegi šŸ˜”šŸ˜Ž

AsYa scene šŸ˜­ā¤ļø
inna jyda intense ā¤ļøā¤ļø
Asad bondhu 🤣
Bondhu ka dil dhadkta hai only for Zoyeee isilye Vo royeee šŸ¤”ā¤ļø
AsYa k hearts toh already mil Chuke hai ā¤ļø
Afreen KMHS 😔😔
chipku Afreen 😵
jitna marzi chipak le... Asad toh Zoya ka hi hai 🄳

Amazing update Jhillu šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼
ā¤ļøed it

Here are my stars: ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø.ā­ļøā­ļø

afreen kmhs matlabšŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ¤“ā“
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

unresd on page 1 🤣

main phuting Rhythm of love likhing 🤣
cya šŸ¤—

cya watergun in ur pondROFLROFLROFL
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jilmil.1


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LOTS to study yaari

dimag ki dahi hogayi hai

upon tht

surprise tests arghh

sorry for small updates


oh OK I understand... study well..
I hate these surprise tests n assignments
don't say sorry Jill
hws ur health
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amulya9


oh OK I understand... study well..
I hate these surprise tests n assignments
don't say sorry Jill
hws ur health

health ok types
yep I dam hate assignments
projects jab deko tab
ek ek subject ki ek ek assignment
tak gayi completely ufff
ok agli bhar sorry nahi bolungišŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

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