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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz do soon continue 😃😃😃
nd pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH


JALAL KHAN - 22 yrs old, handsome hunk, girls can die for his one look, believes in love at first sight, owner of world famous Mughal Industry, Awards - Best Bussinessman of the Year, Youngest Bussinessman of the Year, etc.

JODHA SINGH - 21 yrs old, simple, gorgeous and stunning as usual , bindass types, enjoys life, believes in love and loves everybody.

RUKAIYA KHAN - 22 yrs old, childhood friend of Jalal, has a secret crush on Jalal, a famous model , wants to be jalal's wife but Jalal treats her as a friend , wants Jalal at any cost .

MOTI AHUJA - 21 yrs old, Jodha's BFF and childhood friend, shares every secret with her, supports and knows everything about Jodha.

SHAUYA SHINGHANIYA - 22 yrs old, Jalal's BFF and supports Jalal, knows everything about Jalal after Mirza

MIRZA KHAN - 21 yrs old,Jalal's cousin but dearest brother , both shares everything , knows everything about Jalal, Vice President of Mughal Industry .

SHIVANI SINGH - 20 yrs old, Jodha's sis, shares everything with her di, loves her di the most.

BHARMAL SINGH - Father of Jodha and Shivani, one of the board of directors in jalal's company , Jalal trusts and respects him, loves his wife and daughters a lot.

MAINAVATI SINGH - Wife of Bharmal and mother of Jodha and Shivani, loves and supports her husband and kids .

HAMIDA BANU - Both mother and father of Jalal, has a nice tunning with Jalal, loves everyone, wanta a nice , supportive and understanding wife for his son.

SANJAY AHUJA & SARASWATI AHUJA - Parents of Moti, lovely couple, nice behavior towards everyone , likes Jodha very much and always thinks that she is a good and supportive friend of Moti, believes that Jodha is their own daughter , good friend of Bharmal and Mainavati because of their daughters .



Edited by AkankshaJA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER - 1

At Singh's Mansion

Jodha's phone rang and Moti's name is flashed on it.She picks up the phone.

Jodha - Hello

Moti - Jodha mujhe toh bohot tension ho rhi h, main kya karoon

Jodha - arre tu tension mat le sab thik hoga

Moti - par Jodha...

Jodha{cuts her in between} - par-var kuch nhi tu vo sab chhod ye bata ki teri shopping to baki thi na?

Moti{hits her head with her hand}- arre haan Jodha main to bhul hi gyi thi tune acha yaad dilaya, ab aisa karo tum mere ghar aajao

Jodha - haan thik h main abhi aati hoon

Meanwhile at Khan's Mansion

Jalal's phone rang and he picks it up

Jalal - hello

Shaurya - abe yaar jaldi ghar pe aaja tujhse baat karni h

Jalal - Kyun?

Shaurya - kaha na tujhse baat karni h jaldi ghar pe aaja

Jalal - abe baat kya h kuch batayega bhi?

Shaurya - tu saari baate phone pe hi kar lega kya?

Jalal -acha acha aata hoon

At Moti's house

Jodha reaches Moti's house & greeted Mr. & Mrs. Ahuja

Jodha - hello uncle hello aunty

Mr. Ahuja - hello beta kaisi ho?

Jodha - Main thik hoon uncle aap dono kaise h?

Mrs. Ahuja - ham bhi thik h beta

Jodha - uncle moti kahan h

Mr. Ahuja - beta wo apne kamre mein h

Jodha - thanks uncle

Mr. Ahuja - welcome beta

Jodha enters Moti's room & saw her sitting on the bed & is in deep thought

Jodha calls her - Moti... Moti...

Moti didn't listen

Jodha goes to her & shakes her, Moti came back to sense & saw Jodha

Moti - arre Jodha tu kab aayi

Jodha - main to yahan kab ki aagayi aur tujhe bulaya bhi par tu h ki pata nhi kin khayalon mein ghum h

Moti - sorry yaar bas kuch soch rhi thi

Jodha - haan lekin ye to bata kya soch rhi thi?

Moti - arre yaar tujhe to pta h na ki do dinon mein meri shaadi h, samaj hi nhi aa rha h ki kya karoon

Jodha - offo! tu abhi tak ussi ke baare mein soch rhi h, tu tension mat le sab waise hi hoga jaise ham chahte h, waise mujhe toh filhal shopping ki exitement ho rhi h, maine to phele se hi soch liya h ki mai to khoob saari shopping karungi, aakhir kaar meri best friend ki shaadi jo h

Moti{seems to be convinced by her friends words} - haan! haan! jitni shopping krni h kar lena ,ab ham chale, mujhe bhi bohot saari shopping krni h

Jodha{in exitement starts jumping} - thik h chal

Moti smriks seeing her friend & both of the best buddies goes for shopping ,

At Shaurya's house

Jalal enters Shaurya's roon and saw him moving here & there

Jalal {stops him} - kya hua aise idhar udhar kya ghoom rha h

Shaurya - baat to aise kar rha h jaise tumhe kuch pata hi na ho

Jalal - yhi baat krne ke liye tumne mujhe yaahan bulaya h

Shaurya - aur nhi to kya? mujhe to bohot tension ho rha h

Jalal - tu itna tension kyun le rha h?

Shaurya - tension kaise na lo do dinon mein meri shaadi h, pata nhi kya hoga?

Jalal{with a smrik} - shaadi hogi aur kya?

Shaurya{gave him angry look} - tujhe bohot majak soojh rha h mujhe to bohot darr lag rha h , agar kuch gadbad ho gyi to

Jalal - aisa kuch nhi hoga tu darr mat bas shaadi ke liye mentally prepare ho ja, aur tension mat le sab waise hi hoga jaisa ham chahte h

Shaurya - shayad tum shi keh rhe ho Jalal, main kuch jayda hi tension le rha ho

Jalal{in a proud tone} - taab main jo kuch bhi kehta hoo shi hi kehta hoo

Both laughs.

On the Wedding Day

Preparations of marriage r going on.

Mr & Mrs Ahuja seems to be very happy & r preparing for their only daughter's marriage

Jodha & Moti both sitting on the terrace of the marriage hall

Suddenly Jodha feels someone's hand on her shoulder , she turns back & sees Dinesh standind there

[CHARACTER SKETCH - DINESH GORAI - Friend of Jodha & Moti]

Jodha{in exitement & happiness } hugs him followed by Moti

Moti - mujhe lagta h ab mjhe chalna chahiye, tum dono batein kro main dekh kar aati hoo ki koi upar to nhi aarha

Jodha & Dinesh nods their head

Moti leaves, Jodha & Dinesh plans something about Moti's marraige.

After sometimes Moti comes there & informs them that Mrs Ahuja is calling Jodha in the main hall.

Jodha tells Dinesh to go & he goes,

Jodha & Moti goes to Mrs Ahuja.

At the evening

All the guest starts arriving. Bharmal & Mainavati also arrives.

Bharmal & Mainavati greeted Mr & Mrs Ahuja.

Bharmal & Mainavati - Congratulations

Mr & Mrs Ahuja - thank u &plz enjoy the party

Bharmal & Mainavati - haan haan bilkul

Barati at the door of the marriage hall ,Hamida can be also seen in the barat.

Jodha & Moti on the terrace having the glimpse of barat & baraties

Jodha - arre yaar ye dulha kahan marr gya?

Moti{in a naughty tone} - tujhe badi jaldi h dulhe se milne ki koi aa rha h kya uske saath?

Jodha{in angry tone} - Moti...

Mrs Ahuja{shouts} - Jodha & Moti barat aa gyi h, tumlog taiyaar hui ya nhi

Moti{shouts} - haan mummy bas abhi aayi

Moti{to Jodha} - Jodha jaldi chalo warna datt padegi

Jodha - haan haan chal

Jodha & Moti goes to dress up

Jalal & Shaurya in the car

Jalal{in an irritated tone} - inn baratiyon ko dance krne mein kya maza aata h

Shaurya{in a naughty tone} - kyun? tujhe itni jaldi kya h? kisse milne ki jaldi h?

Jalal{in an irritated & angry tone} - teri bhabhi se

Shaurya laughs & Jalal also joins him.

Barati enters the marriage hall & Mrs Ahuja does the aarti of Shaurya.

At the time of Varmala

Shaurya is sitting on the stage & Jalal is standing beside him, Suddenly Jalal's phone rang & Riya's name is flashed on it .

[CHARACTER SKETCH - RIYA AGRAWAL- Friend of Jalal & Shaurya]

Jalal says excuse me to Shaurya as he has an urgent call & leaves the stage ,

Jalal picks up the phone .

Riya - main yahaan pohoch gyi hoon par tum kahan ho?

Jalal - main bhi tumhara hi intezar kar rha tha, tum aisa kro mjhe hall ke peeche milo.

Riya - thik h

Both cuts the phone & headed towards the back of the hall .

Jodha & Moti comes on the stage .

Moti was dressed beautifully & was looking really pretty (not more than Jodha yaar) with Jodha beside her .

Jodha was holding tray in which the varmala was kept .

Mr & Mrs Ahuja also comes on the stage & the varmala took place.

Jodha & Moti returns happily to the bride's room,

Meanwhile, Jalal reaches the back of the stage & sees a girl standing there

Jalal - acha hua tum mil gyi, main tumhe hi doondh rha tha

Riya - haan main bhi tumhe hi doondh rhi thi

They both share a hug

They both talked to each other for sometime, were very happy & laughed together ,

Suddenly Riya's phone rang & she says to Jalal that its urgent & she will meet him after sometime & says bye,

Jalal also says bye. he also returns to the hall & goes to the stage .

Shaurya sees that Jalal is happy & smiles seeing him

Jalal takes Shaurya to the bridegroom's room

The Wedding Ceremony took place. All the rituals are completed , & the couple is taking phere.

The last phera is completed .

Pandit - Vivah sampan hua. aaj se aap dono pati patni hu...

Suddenly ,

a voice is heard - " Rukoo..."

Everyone turned backward from where the voice had came .

And whatever they saw was just unbelievable, they all were dumbstruck & couldn't believe on their own eyes.

PRECAP - what they saw & some shocks plus twists.

Any guesses what they saw


Sorry if disappointed u...

Ready for joota chhapal

Edited by AkankshaJA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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am first... interesting now dont say i/o moti jodha was there k... continue soon & do pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was a beautiful start to what I know will be an absolutely amazing story!
i liked jo n moti's bonding😳
who is rhea...😕is she jalal's gf..??😕😕
I can't wait to read more...
I love this and congratulations on your first story!!
interesting precap
plz update ASAP😉
pm me plz if u can..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its just awesome blossom⭐️
plz update soon
can't wait
pm me plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update...
shurya is going to marry moti..
chalo jodha shurya se bach gai yaha pe...😆
who is riya??
pls continue soon
pls do pm me nxt time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yrr!! continue soon!!
precap seems interesting! thnx for the pm!❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ur first story just awesome plz update part 2fast

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