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CHAPTER - 5😆

Slowly slowly time passes. With every passing moment the love for Jodha in Jalal's heart increases. He had realized his love love for Jodha and he knows that he can't live without her. Everyday only one thought came into his mind to make her his. Every moment spent with Jodha is a memorable moment for him. He knows that Jodha hates him but it doesn't matters him. He knew that he will win her heart one day. Today is the last day of the college, he doesn't know wheather he will meet her after today or not but still he will never stop loving her. Today is valentine's day also, first he thought of telling Jodha his feelings but on a second thought and imagining the reaction of Jodha he changed his mind.

All the boysare sitting together in the canteen and were playing truth, dare, stare.

Abdul spins the bottle and it pointed towards Mirza.

Mirza - no, no it didn't pointed towards me.

Abdul - chal chal , it pointed on u only. Now say what will u take.

Mirza - truth

Jalal - ok now say till today how many girls u have proposed?

Mirza ( with a innocent look) - only one

Jalal (shokingly) - only one, this is truth Mirza.

Mirza (not having any other option) - ok, I never count.

Jalal - see see, I knew it.

Mirza - let your turn come, I will see u.

Jalal - yes yes, definitely take revenge, but unfortunately till now I didn't propose any one.

Mizra (nodding his head 2 b- 3 times as if scaring Jalal) - I will see u...

The bottle was spinned and it pointed towards Jalal.

Mirza - and now u r caught bhaijaan, say say what will u take. Scared...

Jalal - Jalal Khan kissi se nhi darta, sab Jalal se darte h...

Mirza (smiled evily) - ok, so take dare.

Jalal - challenge (smirks) ok, dare...

Mirza whispers something in abdul's ears.

Abdul - awesome bro...

Mirza - so bhaijaan, what u have to do is the first girl who comes out of the library, you have to (smirking) propose her.

Jalal (shocked) - What? Never

Mirza - it's a challenge bhaijaan.

Jalal unwillingly goes towards the library and waits for a girl to come out.

After a few minutes, Ruks came outside.

Jalal turns towards his friends and nodded a no.

Abdul - Abbey , nikli nikli nikli...

Mirza - go bhaijaan go, someone is waiting for u.

All stats cheering him up. Jalal... Jalal...

Jalal bends his head down and goes towards the girl and stood infront of her. His head is still down.

Mirza - lift up your head bhaijaan.

Jalal lifts up his head and was shocked. He saw Jodha standing just infront of him with a confused look.

Jalal s face lits up. He turns towards Mirza.

Mirza - (showing his hand to Jalal as if stoping him) - Thanks baad mein bhaijaan.

Jalal turns towards Jodha and blinks his eyes to believe that he is not dreaming and Jodha is really standing infrount of him.

Jalal bends on his knees and says - I LOVE YOU!

Jodha was shocked and angry. She grabs his coller and makes him stand and says - What did u say.

Jalal - I said I love u, why ? u didn't hear it or didn't believe it. (smirks)

Jodha - How dare u. And was going to slap him but Mirza and others came to the spot.

Mirza - Dare tha, Dare tha, Dare tha, bhabhi... (bites his tounge ) I mean dare tha.

Jodha leaves his coller and says - u should have said this first.

Jalal - Thank God Mirza u all came and rescuded me warna ajj main kahan hota ( and looks towards the sky).

Jodha - It is not my fault, u should have said it first.

Jalal- Yes, yes u are right I should have told u first. I don't know what dreams u saw in these very moments in which only u and me were there (and smirks).

Jodha gave him angry look and run towards him. Jalal runs from there with Jodhs behind him.

With these sweet moments of Jalal and Jodha, the college ends.

AT KHAN'S MANSION

Mirza - Now the college has also end. Now u should tell me that what u got as your precious thing

(THOSE WHO DON'T REMEMBER CAN REFER TO CHAPTER -3 )

Jalal - u already know Mirza. Think of it yourself.

Mirza - I think its bhabhi..( stops and looks at Jalal to see his reaction)

Jalal smirks a little.

Mirza continues - So was I thinking right bhaijaan

Jalal - yes

Mirza - That means aap sach mein bhabhi jaan se...

Jalal nodded his head in a yes.

Mirza (excitedly) - This means that she is really my bhabhijaan.

Jalal - No, I mean u already know Mirza that Jodha doesn't like me. And I don't want that because of me her life gets spoil.

Mirza - So, now u will never meet bhabhijaan.

Jalal - It's not like that if it is written in my destiny then I will definitely meet her. And I will wait for the precious moment.

Mirza - Waah! (claps his hand) waah! Bhaijaan . when I used to talk about destiny then u scolded me " I don't believe in destiny" (copying like Jalal). Really peoples says truth a man in love does everything that he never used to'.

Jalal - U know very much about love.

Mirza - Yes I know very much about love. Itni baar mein experience to ho hi jaata h na.

Both laughs .

FLASHBACK ENDS... (FINALLY)

Jalal turns on his bed. He lifts up his mobile to check the time. It was 2:45 am. And he thought of getting some sleep as in the morning his nikah with Jodha is there. As he was also tired, he slept soon thinking about HIS Jodha and went to HIS JODHA LAND.

Morning

Sun rays falls on Jodha's face. She is irritated by the sudden light but finally she opens her beautiful eyes. She looks at her surrounding and finds it slightly different. Then she finally recognized the place and remembers her marriage with Jalal. She was still in shock. She had never thought that she will get married like this. Like every girl she also used to dream about her marriage and her prince charming. There will be one person in his life who would love her the most and she will also love him the most. They will live in their small world of love. They will be ready to die for each other. Whatever the problem be they will stand together and face it.

Her thought were disturbed by a knock at the door. She gets up and opened the door only to find Hamida standingwith her famous smile.

Hamida - so,did my princess slept peacefully.

Jodha - Yes ammijaan.

Hamida - Ok, now get ready and come down. The nikah's preparations are almost done and kazi shahab had also arrived. So, u get ready and come. Ok beta. Here is your dress.

Hamida shows her the dress.

Jodha was mesmerized by the dress. It was indeed a very beautiful dress.

Hamida - How is it?

Jodha - it's really very beautiful ammijaan.

Hamida - I'm glad u liked it beta.

Jodha - Thank u so much ammijaan.

Hamida - it's my pleasure beta. Come soon dear.

Saying this Hamida leaves and Jodha closes the door.

Jodha was very glad to have a ammijaan like her. This was the only nice thing that had happened from tomorrow with her. Her marriage with Jalal, etc, etc... she was so much shocked. But with ammijaan she felt peaceful. Jodha checks the time she got to get ready, hurries and goes inside the washroom.

On the other hand Jalal was already ready for his nikah with Jodha. Only he knows how much exited he is. Only if Jodha also loved him he had not wasted any moment and take her in his arms and never let her go. But alas he has to wait and he will definitely. Jalal looked once at the mirror. He was indeed looking really handsome. Any girl can die for his one look but his heart beat for some one else. With whom he is goind to do nikah. He was constantly smiling.

Jalal went downstairs and found that all the nikah preparations are done he saw his friends and moved towards them.

The nikah was planned in a hurry so only some close relatives and friends were called.

Salima goes to Hamida.

Salima - Hi ! aunty. Where is Jodha ?

Hamida - She is in her room getting ready. Go and call her.

Salima - Ok aunty.

Jalal settled in the place and his friends surrounded him .

Abdul - Jalal, Jalal Bhabhi... And pointed towards Jodha.

Jalal turned and saw Jodha. Time stood still for him. He was dumbstruck to see her.


[IMAGINE THIS]


He had always dreamt of his and Jodha's nikah. And he had always imagined her in this type of dress only. But in reality she looked really beautiful. His mouth dropped open. He kept looking at her with his mouth open. His heart skipped many beats. How much he wished he could take her in his arms and hold her forever. He had always imagined Jodha saying "I love u Jalal" and resting her head on his shoulder.

Abdul's voice brought him back to reality.

Abdul - Jalal shut your mouth. Makhi ghus jaayegi.

Jalal closed his mouth but his eyes didn't leave Jodha. She looks really beautiful while smiling thought Jalal and smiled to himself.

Jodha came and sat parallel to Jalal.

Kazi sahib did all the rituals.

(I don't know much about nikah... so sorry friends)

Kazi sahib (asked Jalal) - kya aapko yeh nikaah Qubool hai...

Jalal (without wasting even a second ) - Qubool hai.

Everyone laughed at him and he realized that in excitement what he has done. And he was really embaress.

Kazi - Mohatarma kya aapko yeh nikaah Qubool hai...

Jodha - Qubool hai.

Kazi - Aaj se aap dono shohar aur biwi hue. ( from today u both are husband and wife)

After all the things were done. Hamida called Jodha to meet the family members. Jodha met them and was talking to them and was smiling all the while.

Jalal couldn't remove his eyes from Jodha. His friends were talking to him but he seemed to be in another world. He was gazing HIS Jodha.

PRECAP - Car Crash.

So end of the torture.

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awesome update Akanksha.👏
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next chappy creating big suspense😳
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