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CHAPTER - 4😳


All are sitting in their respective benches.

First class is chemistry. Chemistry sir enters. All the students greets him. Class starts. Lecture is going on.

But Jalal is in his own world. He is shocked on hisown behaviour. Remembering the video a sly smile crept on his face. He was thinking that why was he smiling, instead he should be angry on what Jodha said to him. Till now no one has ever dared to talk to JALAL KHAN like that. But he was not angry at all.

His thoughts were disturbed by shaurya.

Shaurya - kahan khoya h bhai ?

Jalal - kuch nhi yaar who bas...

Abdul - haan, haan ab to tu apne khayalon mein hi khoya rahega na.

Shaurya (in an innocent tone) - matlab ?

Mirza - matlab ki hame lagta h ki bhaijaan Jodha ke baare mein soch rhe honge.

Jalal was shocked. He felt as if he is a culprit and is caught while doing crime.

Shaurya (singing like a song) - chori pakri gyi. Chori pakri gyi.

Abdul (in a scolding but funny tone) - Mirza, aise unhe naam se nhi bulate who tumhari aur ham sab ki bhabhi h (looks at Jalal and says) - kyun Jalal ?

Jalal was about to reply when Rukaiya interuppted.

Rukaiya - Aisa kuch nhi h. Mujhe to lagta h ki tumlog Jodha ko lekar kuch jayda hi serious ho rhe ho. Mujhe pata h ki Jalal Jodha ke baare mein nhi soch rha hoga. Kyun Jalal ?

Shaurya (mumering) - tumhein to kuch jayda hi pata h.

Jalal - nhi, han, nhi, aisa kuch bhi nhi h.

Shaurya - toh tu soch kya rha tha ?

Jalal - Haan who main Jodha ke baare mein... And stops.

Abdul - Dekha...

Abdul and Shaurya does an hi - fi.

Jalal - nhi main keh rha tha ki main Jodha ke baare mein NHI SOCH RHA THA. Mujhe pura bolne to do.

Abdul was about to say something when he stoped by hearing the opening of the door.

The door opened and a girl was standing there.

Every body was shocked to see the girl.

The girl was none other than Jodha.

She was 25 minutes late in the class. Everyone thought than she would be scolded by the teacher.

Jodha - May I come in sir.

Sir - Yes, but you are 25 minutes late miss...

Jodha - Jodha

Sir - Miss Jodha

Jodha - Sorry sir but I'm a new student and I have to report to the principal's office first. So I'm late.

Sir - Alright then go and sit.

The bell rang and sir goes out of the class.

Jodha was going to sit beside Moti. But Atifa came and stops Jodha as she thought that Jodha is going to sit beside Jalal.

Atifa - Rukoo, aisa soche ki tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui.

Jodha - sochne ke liye himmatki bhi zarurat hoti h. Soch to bas soch li jati h. Aur tumhein kaise pata ki main kya soch rhi hoo.

Atifa - What nonsence!

Jodha - ab ismein nonsence ki kya baat h ?

Atifa - Tum jaisi ladkiyon ko main achi tarah jnti hoon. Ache aur handsome ladke dikhe nhi ki bas unpar line marna suru kar diya.

Jodha turns around and looks all over the class and says - Mujhe toh yahan koi bhi acha aur handsome ladka nhi dikh rha. Tum kiski baat kar rhi ho ?

Atifa - Main Jalal ki baat kar rhi hoon.

Jodha - Kon Jalal ?

Atifa - Jiske bagal mein tum baithne jaa rhi thi.

Jodha turns towards Moti and says - Tumhara naam Jalal kab se ho gya Moti ?

Atifa - Bholi banne ki koshish mat karo. Main uss place ki baat kar rhi hoon. (and points towards the vacant seat beside Jalal)

Jodha sees the vacant place and then sees Jalal (who was looking at her without a blink) and says - Uss Mr. Akdu ke bagal mein baithne ka mujhe koi shauk nhi h.

Atifa - Acha hua tum jaldi samajh gyi. Aur waise bhi Jalal ke bagal mein baithne ki aukat bhi nhi h tumhari.

Jodha - O hello! Tum apni aukat mein rho. Janti ho main kon hoon JODHA SINGH. Aur tumhein kya lagta h ki main tumhare darr se wahan par nhi baith rhi hoon.

Atifa - Haan.

Jodha - Ab toh main wahin baithooungi. Dekti hu mujhe kon rokta h.

Jodha goes and sits beside Jalal.

Atifa fumes with anger and says to Jodha - utho wahan se.

Jodha - Kyun tumhara place h ?

Atifa - Haan

Jodha - Kyun tumhara naam likhe h yahaan pe.

Atifa - Tumse toh baat karna hi bekar h. and turns towards Jalal and says - Jalal tum hi isse kuch kyun nhi kehte. Tum bhi chahte ho na ki ye tum hare bagal mein nhi baithe.

Jalal - Kyun ? Maine aisa kab kaha.

Everyone turns towards Jalal. Abdul and Shaurya does Whooo...

Mirza sings - Pehla - phela pyaar h, pheli - pheli bar h, jaan ke bhi anjana aisa mera yaar h ...

Abdul - nhi nhi wo nhi - Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Jalal (hiding his embarace) - Tumlog phir se suru ho gye.

Abdul - Par Jalal hamne toh kuch kaha hi nhi tum khud-ba-khud sari baatein apne upar le rhe ho.

Atifa (irritated by the whole teasing session) - Shut up guys. Tum log phele iss Jodha ko yahan se hatao.

Abdul - Chup, kya tab se hatao hatao laga ke rakha h. tu haat yahan se. Jodha yahin baithegi. Ham bhi dekhte h k koi kya karta h.

Atifa - tum logon ko kya lagta h ki Jalal ko ye ye (pointing towards Jodha ) yeladki pasand aayegi.Impossible.

Atifa leaves.

Shaurya to Abdul (in a loud tone) - kissi ko kya pata ki Jalal ko Jodha pasand aa hi chuki...

Jalal turns towards them and gave them a shut-your-mouth look.

Shaurya to Abdul (ignoring Jalal) - Abbe kon si class h abhi.

Abdul (innocently) - pata nhi.

Time - Lapse Lunch Break

The group went ot the canteen. Chatting about random things the whole group was busy except one.

The one was busy in starring some one, observind each and every feature of her.

He came out of his world and found his friends starring at him with question look.

Jalal - What ?

Abdul - Abbe aur kuch lega ?

Jalal (thought for sometime) - haan blach coffee.

Atifa came wih a tray in which burgers for all were kept. She kepts the tray and intensionally stamps on Jodha's feet. Jodha was about to say something but Moti stops her. Atifa gave an evil smile.

Atifa (in a flirty tone) - Tum kuch aur lege Jalal.

Jalal - Haan, black coffee.

Atifa - abhi layi and goes from there.

An idea stucks in Jodha's mind and an evil smirk appeared on her face. She goes to the counter and bought some chilly powder.

Moti - ye kya kar rhi ho ?

Jodha - Tu bas dekhte jaa, uss saali ki himmat bhi kaise hui mera pair stamp karne ki. Ab usse pata chalega ki usne kisse panga liya h. Do dinon tak college mein nazar nhi aayegi.

(To everyone) - sab koi apna apna burger le lo aur Atifa ka burger chhood do.

Everyone takes the burger except Jalal as the burger was little far from him.

Jodha - offo! Jaldi karo

Jodha irritatedly takes the burger and puts it in his mouth.

Everyone laughs.

Jodha takes Atifa's burger and sprinkeles all the chilly powder on it and kept it back.

Jodha looks at everyone.

Abdul - Hamne kuch bhi nhi dekha bhabhi... (looks at Jalal and says sorry) matlab hamne kuch bhi nhi dekha Jodha.

Atifa came back and handed over the coffee to Jalal, sits and began eating her burger.

All are looking at her. Suddenly she starts jumping - paani paani...

A bottle was kept on the table. But before Atifa could take it Mirza takes it and pours the water on the ground.

Atifa runs towards the counter.

Jodha and Mirza does an hi-fi.

Jalal - kissi ko bhi pareshan karna koi tumse sikhe. Ya to kabhi burger ko kissi ke muh mein thosh do ya toh phir burger mein kuch thosh do.

Jodha takes the chilly powder and says - Abhi to sirf burger thusha tha ab ye khao. And runs towards him.

Jalal runs from there and Jodha behind him.

Precap - Flashback continues, Valentines day,

Jalal turns towards Jodha and blinks his eyes to believe that he is not dreaming and Jodha is really standing infrount of him. Jalal bends on his knees and says - I LOVE YOU.

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Edited by AkankshaJA - 10 years ago
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