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I am back with my ff. Sorry for late update but I was busy in preparations of my exam.As my exams were there so I am updating this chapter late. But next time I will also be update the 3rd chapter soon . Sorry for mistakes ...

This chapter is specially dedecated to my best friend MuskanJA . She has recently joined the Indian forums .

It is also dedicated to TinkyLove aka Soumya di who made me understand the things which I didn't knew in the forum. Thank You so much di... Love u.

Plz like and comment. Hope this chapter will be interesting .

CHAPTER - 2

A voice is heard - " Rukoo..."

Everyone turned backward from where the voice had came .

And whatever they saw was just unbelievable, they all were dumbstruck & couldn't believe on their own eyes.

They saw...

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Moti & Dinesh

Mrs. Ahuja sees Moti, turns & then sees the dulhan at the mandap & becomes unconsious.

Mr Ahuja holds her, sprinkles water on her face & then Mrs. Ahuja came back to her sense.

Moti runs towards her mother. She reaches to her mother & asks her wheather she is ok or not.

Mrs. Ahuja shakes Moti & says - Tum yahan kya kar rhi ho aur ye tumhare saath kon h (pointing towards Dinesh)

Moti - mummy aap phele shant ho jaaiye aur meri bat dhyan se suniye, yeh dinesh h aur main isse bohot pyar karti hoon aur maine isse shadi kar li h

This was the other shock for Mr & Mrs Ahuja.

Mrs Ahuja - agar tumne isse shaadi ki h to shaurya ki shaadi kisse hui h

Moti - Mummy wahan shaurya ke saath...

Again a voice is heard - "ye shaadi nhi ho sakti"

Everyone turns back & sees saurya with Riya.

Mr & Mrs Singhania ( shaurya's parents) comes to im & Mr Singhania slaps him (in ekta kapoor's style matlab teen baar tadak... tadak... tadak...LOL)

Mr Singhania - tu yahan kya kar rha h? aur ye ladki kon h?

Shaurya - papa ye riya h, main iss se pyaar karta hu aur maine isse shaadi kar li h

Mr Singhania was again going to slap him but Mrs Singhania stops him

Mrs Singhania - Shaurya ye sab kya h? kahin tumhara dimag to kharab nhi ho gya? aur tum yahan ho to wahan mandap mein kon h?

Suddenly Shaurya notices Moti & gets shocked

Shaurya (to moti) - tum yahan ho to wahan mandap mein kon h?

Moti - main bhi tumse yhi poochna chahti hoon ki agar tum yahan ho to mandap mein kon h?

Then everyone turns towards mandap

In the Mandap

Dulha turns towards Dulhan & Dulhan turns towards Dulha

Dulha takes off his shera

Dulhan puts off ghunghat

Everyone in the marriage hall is shocked to see both of them.

Dulha - Dulhan turns towards each other & were shocked to see that

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Dulha was non other than JALAL & the Dulhan was ofcourse JALAL KI JODHA.

Jalal & Jodha's eyes widen in shock.

Jalal eyes were fixed on Jodha & Jodha's on Jalal. Suddenly Jodha faints .

Jalal holds her. Jalal's one hand was between her head and shoulder & the other hand on her waist .

(B.G.M.- Ishq hai woh ehsaas

Ishq hai woh jasbat

Badal de yeh duniya

Badal de yeh halat )

Jalal lifts her up & puts her on the sofa.

Moti comes with a glass of water & sprinkles on Jodha's face.

Jodha becomes consious & starts crying .

Mainavati comes there & consoles her.

HB also comes there.

Mainavati asks Moti that how all this happened . Moti says that she loves Dinesh a lot and wanted to marry him. So, she with Jodha and Dinesh made a plan. She told Jodha to sit on her place in the marriage & she would return before the marriage complition. But unfortunately due to the traffic jam (& destiny) she could not return & the marriage of Jalal & Jodha took place.

Shaurya also says that he loves Riya & wanted to marry her. He and Jalal had also planned the same but everything went opposite of it & Jalal & Jodha got married.

Jodha (sobbing) - nhi ye nhi ho sakta. meri shadi usse nhi ho sakti ,main iss shaadi ko nhi manti.

Maina - par beta ab kuch nhi ho sakta. shayad tumhare bhayga mein yhi likha tha.

Jodha - par mummy...

Maina (cuts her in b/w) - lekin ab ham kar bhi kya sakte h? tumhari shaadi ho gyi h.

HB searches for Jalal & sees her son son standing in a corner & smiling uncontrollably .

HB goes to Jalal (who was lost in his own world) & says - Jalal... Jalal...

Jalal came back to his sense & sees him mother standing infront of him.

Jalal - Ammijan aap yahan (pauses for sometime ) Ammijan hmne ye sab kuch jaan boojh kar nhi kiya, hame nhi pata tha ki hamari shadi ho jayegi aur wo bhi (with a wide smile & blush) Jodha ke saath. Shauryane mujhse wada kiya tha ki wo time pe aajayega, par aisa nhi ho paya aur meri aur Jodha (blushes) ki shaadi ho gyi.

His eyes were shining & he was out of the world . Seeing this Hamida understood what is there in his son's heart (ofcourse

Jodha yaar)

But Hamida tries to tease his son.

She says - Par maine tumse koi explanation nhi manga Jalal, mujhe pata h ki tumne ye sab jaan boojh kar nhi kiya. Itefak se tumhari shaadi Jodha ke saath ho gyi, mujhe pata h ki tum iss shaadi se khush nhi ho ( Jalal makes a sad face & Hamida notices it) Ye tumhare zindagi bhar ka sawal h. main nhi chahti ki mera beta ek aisi anjan ladki ke saath apni poori zindagi bitaye jisse na toh woh janata h aur na hi CHAHTA h.

Jalal (immediately) - Aisa kuch bhi nhi h ammijan matlab ki wo matlab hamare kehne ka matlab tha ki (pauses ,a deep breath, smiles & blushes ) matlab ki ab toh hamari shaadi ho chuki h na ammijan ab ham kya kar sakte h. Magar (makes a sad face ) aakhri faisla aapka hi hoga ammijan.

Hamida - Hame pata h Jalal tumhare dil mein kya h. ham abhi jaa kar Jodha ko na keh dete h

Jalal - nhi ammijan aisi koi baat nhi h

Hamida - tum pareshan mat ho , hamme pata h ki tum haan issliye keh rhe ho kyunki hamari bezati hogi, par tumhe firk karni ki koi jarurat nhi h, ham tumhare liye itna toh kar hi sakte h ki Jodha ko jaa kar na keh de.

Jalal - nhi ammijan aap aisa nhi kar sakti

Hamida - kyun Jalal?

Jalal ( in a irriated tone ) - Ammijan aap samajhti kyun nhi ki ham Jodha se...

(& realises what he is saying)

Hamida - kya Jalal tum Jodha se?

Jalal - nhi kuch nhi (to make her understand tone) nhi ammijan... aap nhi janti ki hinduon mein agar ek bar shaadi ho jaaye to saath janam tak usse nibhana hota h.

Hamida - hame pata h Jalal, lekin iss riwaj ki wajah se ham aapne ek laute bete ki zindagi barbad hote hue nhi dekh sakta, ham abhi ja kar Jodha kotumhare dil ki baat bata dete h.

Hamida goes from there .

Jalal - nhi ammijan suniye to... ammijan

But Hamida goes from there.

Hamida goes to Mainavati & keeps her hand on her shoulder & says - hamme aapse kuch baat karni h.

Mainavati - hame bhi

They both goes inside a room.

Mainavati - aap toh jaanti h ki ye jo kuch bhi hua woh sirf ek itefak tha. Ham aapse ek aur baat krna chahte h, aap to janti h ki iss itefak se bhi hui shaadi ko duniya sach hi manegi, aur kissi bhi wajah se agar ye shaadi toot jaati h toh ham dono ke parivar ki bohat badnami hogi.

Hamida - ham samjh sakte h aur ham aapko ek baat batana chahte h ki hamme iss shaadi se koi aitraz nhi h. ham aapse ek waada karte h ki aapki beti ko hamare ghar mein koi takleef nhi hogi. aaj se aapki beti hamari beti hui. Jalal Jodha ko hamesha khush rakhega aur usse saari khushiyan dega.

Mainavati - haan hame bhi Jalal pasand h. Aur ye (Bharmal) bhi usski bohot taarif karte h. ab bas hame Jodha ko samjhana hoga.

Hamida - haan aap aisa kijiye ki usse yahin le aaiye. ham dono milkar usse samjhayenge.

Mainavati - Thik h

Mainavati goes and brings Jodha in the room

Mainavati & Hamida makes Jodha understand that this marriage cannot be canceled .

But Jodha was stubborn & was not ready to accept this marriage .

Hamida goes from there leaving Jodha & her mother alone.

Mainavati - Jodha tum samajhne ki koshish karo. Agar ye shaadi toot jaati h to dono khandano ki bohot bezati hogi. Aur ho sakta h ki Jalal gusse mein aakar tumhare papa ko naukri se nikal de aur tum to jaanti ho ki tumhare papa khud par aur apne par bohot garv karte h. Agar ye naukri chali gyi to tumhare papa ko bohot bada sadma lagega aur wo toot jayenge. Ab tumhe hi sachna h ki tumhe kya karna h. Ham sab bahar tumhare faisle ka intezar kar rhe h.

Saying this (much) Mainavati leaves.

Precap - Jodha comes out & announces her decision .

I hope ki sabko decision pata hi hoga.

How was the chapter ..plz like and comment.

Next chapter will also be updated soon.

Edited by AkankshaJA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww!! Awesome!! Super cute update!!! Jus loved it!! Update the next chapter soon.. Cant wait fa long tym!! Thanx fa d pm yrr!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowowowowo finally u gave update
balle balle
wht to say yrrr
awesome blossom update
totally loved it
u r the first person on IF that u made akdha marry in 2 chapter varna we writers make in after 20-30 chapter yrrr too good
the ekta kapoor's style matlab teen baar tadak... tadak... tadak... was awesome 🤣
hyeeei my jalal already loves jodha awww
the percap is yes yes jo will go with jalal yeeep
can't wait dear plz plz plz 😒puppy eyes update soon
thanks for the pm
love RuthShalini
aka ratz or shalu😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superbb chapter yaar...jalal and jodha got married and woowww starting of luvstory though only frm jo's side it is left... plzzz continue soon...
and thanx fr pm...
will b eagerly waiitng fr next update...though decision pata h bt uske baad ka jaanne mei jyada interest h...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story. unknowingly jodha get married to jalal.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome chappy akansha loved it jalal ko hogaya peheli nazar mein pyaar update chappy 3 fast and whatz ur age
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Wow buddy wt an update ...impressed wid u . Bichari jodha kya Socha thaa kya hogya ...really NYC update yaar ...loved it ...Thanx fr d PM
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow akanksha..!!
that was an teriific update..!!

small tha but it was cute one..!!
i loved it...!!

maza aaa gya...!!!

it was soo sweet and cute...!!!

AND THANK U SOO MUCH FOR UR CREDITS TO ME AND Thanking me on the top...!!!

U r most welcome..!!
if u have any problem u can come to me ill tell u and help u in any other activity of forum...!!!😃😃

Thanks chutki...!!😳😳

Haye jalal pagal ho gya Jodha ke liye..!!

par yr tu na jaldi se jodha ko bhi keh de usse pyaar krne ko nahi toh jalal aur pagal ho jaega uske pyar mein...!!

Muaahh muaah...!!

mashaallah update thi chutki...!!

I loved it...!!!

Jalal aur Jo ki shadi ho gyi ..!!

mast mast mast..!!
Ab shadi ke baad pyar I love this concept..!!!

Muaah..!!
Huggy..!!

Kissi...!!!




love ,
saumya

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res!! plz do remind me to unres,,, plzzz

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