Tiny Surprises n Shocks!(Discontinued!)

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Driving through the harsh weather on the not so well conditioned roads...cursing his time a young man was managing to drive his bike in the heavy rain...

Dam man! What's happening today my whole good boy image got spoiled in the last class of the year in front of my fav professor ...y did he have to catch me chatting on my phone ...

Pushing his hair back trying to concentrate on the road he was dripping wet it was getting tough to even trace the road forget driving... Its simple to guess he is our lead of our story highly irritated n a little good-looking MAAN.

N suddenly this call Dadaji met with an accident on a serious note I didn't even know I had a dadaji in village.. Thanks to my Dadi... She didn't want me to know any thing about him n brought me up Single handedly ... love U dadi where ever u Are...

He somehow reached the village n asked for the address... on reaching the huge palace which stood proudly in front of him he stopped in his tracks...

Now after such a long journey what if all this is some kind of prank coz dadi was definitely not that much wealthy as she worked in a NGO .. n I completed my education mostly on Scholarships ... So Dadaji he must be working in this palace...

He came to a conclusion.. n walked ahead ... as I introduced my self one of the servants lead me through the hall way which lead to a huge bed room...

There were two people on the bead heavily bandaged one was a little bit younger than the other ... So the other one was His Dadaji!

Maan! Come here... he gestured weakly...

Walking towards the bed he sat next to him on the other end of the bed...

Maan From now on you will take care of the Khurana group of Companies n the Whole Empire... Please Sign These papers...

Before he could understand any thing he was forced to sign the Documents... Taking the Raisins of Khuranas to His Hands...

N his Dadaji breathed his last!

He was still grasping the Situation... When a young Girl Stormed in to the room Crying out Baba...

Beta.. Come ...

She hugged the other man n was sobbing uncontrollably checking his wounds

He was breathing heavily n was trying to speak some thing ...

Stand By Maan Beta ...Come What May...

Baba??

Before She could ask anything else he left the world... crying bitterly she looked up through her heavy lashes trying to figure out who Maan was with her blurred vission...

As there eyes met maan instantly came to her side n took her in his embrace letting her cry n sharing her pain...

Here we start our story of Tiny Surprises n Sweet Shocks😉 where maan realises he became an orphan again n a multimillionaire simultaneously. ..

N geet starts to walk on a path which she never thought... all alone with a stranger!



Index

Part#1 page-4
Part#2 page-6
Part#3 page-9
Part#4 page-12
Part#5 page-14
Part#6 page-18
Part#7 page-21
Filler page-27


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character Sketch!😃


Maan!
Ok Maan Singh Khurana. .. final year management student ..




Misthi!
Sorry,sorry Geet... 2nd year B arch student ...
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new story! Fab start! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratz for the new story Sporthy. Will come later and read. you know I'm always late just like a late train.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok tat was indeed a surprise
new story😊
Little handsome no man!
Losing everyone bechari geet
geting a new relation lucky maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shocked and surprised Wow
Loved it interesting start
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Lovely start! Waiting for updates.
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Well written
Continue soon 😉
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Intrstng part maan was nt aware dat he was rich until his dadaji tld him nd wit wealth he got geet also
dis time gv happy endng plz yaar
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on the new story! Fab start! update soon! Well written


Thank you so much. ...😳

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