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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Linsie


one thing for sure... everyone wants zoya to change... Yaa😊

good ... let see how interesting this going

to work out...😉 😉 Asad is modern here😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

thats seeems reallyy good..
continue ASAP
and pm me


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Posted: 11 years ago
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tanveer and chamchi...is the witches...Yaa, they are😡

well one have to go through a lot in live to change... Exactly😊

is the particular reason zoya is like this..or from birth I hv not decided dis but since someone asked it, I vl show a reason😉

let see now.. zoya always at top...any story... But here Najma is d topper😃

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Part 1

Mumbai:

A girl is riding on her scooty wearing a blue salwar kameez. She is lukn beautiful. Suddenly, she had a flat tire of her scooty.

"Allah Miya, how I vl reach college on time now?" asked d girl worriedly to herself.

Just then, a car stops near her. D driver of d car luks out of d window. He is lukn handsome. There is one guy sitting wid him in d car who is also lukn handsome. There is one girl in d back-seat who is wearing jeans n red loose t-shirt. She is lukn beautiful but is a little bit plump.

"Hey Zoya, wat happened?" asked d driver of d car to d girl who is standing near her scooty lukn worried.

"Asad, my scooty got a flat tire. I am getn late for d college. Till d time, I call mechanic here I vl be late for d college. Its just a week since d college has started but v hv a class test 2day," replied Zoya.

"Don't worry Zoya, v vl get ur scooty done later. For now, jump in n sit n sit behind wid Najma," said Asad.

"Okay," said Zoya.

Asad started d car.

"Bro, 2day new sets of juniors r cumn," said d other guy.

"So wat, Ayaan?" asked Asad.

"So there may be more beautiful girls," replied Ayaan.

"Ayaan, grow up," said Asad.

"I hv grown up all years wid u. V r fraternal twins, dude," said Ayaan.

Asad Ahmed Khan n Ayaan Ahmed Khan r fraternal twins. They love each other a lot. They also hv lots of fun 2gthr. They r the sons of Rashid Ahmed Khan, owner of Dilshad Constructions n Dilshad Ahmed Khan who runs a NGO.

"Zoya, 2day ur sister Tanveer n her 2 chamchis Nikhat n Nuzhat vl take admission in d college," said Najma.

"I am very happy n excited for Tanveer to join our college. V sisters vl be in d same college," said Zoya wid a smile.

"How can u be so excited for d girl who never treated u like ur sister?" asked Najma.

"She is my sister, Najma," replied Zoya, "And she is younger to me by 2 yrs."
"Still, she sud learn to respect u. But, she always insults u along wid her chamchis who r her so-called friends," said Najma.

Zoya Farooqui n Tanveer Farooqui r daughters of Gaffur Farooqui, owner of Farooqui Industries n Razia Farooqui who runs a cooking class. Zoya dearly loves Tanveer even though she always insults her n takes her for granted. Along wid studies, Zoya loves to help her mother in cooking n she loves to learn different recipes. Tanveer only loves to hang wid her friends, party n shopping. She spends her parents money like water. Unlike Zoya, she wear western clothes most of which r too short n revealing.

"Tamatar, Tanveer is also takn admission in BBA like us," said Ayaan.

"Does she even knows d full form of BBA?" asked Najma wid a laugh.

Ayaan too laughed n hi-fived wid Najma.

They their college, St. Xavier's College, where they r in their 3rd year BBA(Bachelor of Business Administration). They meet Humeira Siddiqui n Rehan Sharif inside d campus.

"Hey guys," said Humeira.

"Hey," said Ayaan.

Humeira was in a short white floral dress.

"2day, u may be so excited dat new girls vl be cumn to our college," said Humeira.

"Yaa," said Ayaan, "U r lukn hot, Humi Baby."
"Shall I remove my chappal?" asked Humeira wid a sarcastic smile.

"But d chappals r removed in mandir na, Humi Baby," said Ayaan wid a laugh.

Others also laughed while Humeira got annoyed.

"I hv told u many times not to call me Humi Baby," said Humeira annoyingly.

"Guys, u both don't start again," said Rehan.

Just then a car arrived in d parking. D driver of d car came out n opened d back-door. 3 girls came out of d car.

"Here comes d great Tanveer wid her chamchis," said Humeira.

"Humi Baby, they r wearing same kinds of clothes wid different coloured tops," said Ayaan wid a laugh.

"R u planning to flirt wid them?" asked Humeira.

"Humi Baby, plz don't say dat," begged Ayaan.

Tanveer was standing between her friends Nikhat Qasim on her right n Nuzhat Rizwi on her left. They were walking like models. They were wearing same kinds of tops n mini-skirts but their top colours were different. Tanveer was in pink top, Nikhat was in violet top n Nuzhat was in red top. They came near Asad's gang n smiled.

"Hi guys," said Tanveer wid a smile.

"Happy to see u, Tanveer," said Zoya wid a smile.

"But I am not happy to see u, behenji," said Tanveer wid attitude.

Zoya's smiles fades.

"Talk properly wid ur sister, Tanveer," said Najma annoyingly.

"Who told u to speak, u charity case orphan?" taunted Tanveer n laughed wid her friends.

Najma felt hurt while others got angry.

"U hv not said right, Tanveer," said Zoya politely.

"Don't give ur lectures, behenji," said Tanveer rudely.

"Tanveer, u sud behave urself. How dare u talk like dat to my sister n Zoya?" asked Asad in an angry tone.

"Jammy, why r u getn angry wid me?" asked Tanveer sweetly.

Tanveer has a crush on Asad. She tries to flirt wid him a lot of times weneva he comes to her home for doing college project wid Zoya but he always ignores her. She calls him Jammy as she heard dat he used to eat a lot of jam in his childhood.

"U r hurting my sister n ur own sister n then u r asking me why I am getn angry on u. U sud better learn some manners n humanity," said Asad wid frustration.

"Now, just go 4m here n don't make me spoil ur 1st day of college," said Ayaan firmly.

Tanveer n her friends left 4m there. Najma was still lukn very hurt. Humeira hugged Najma to comfort her.

"I am sorry, Najma. U r hurt bcuz of me," said Zoya.

"Don't say sorry, Zoya. Its only Tanveer's fault," said Najma.

Najma Mirza is Asad n Ayaan's cousin. She is their Mausi's(Mother's sister's) daughter. She lost her parents at d age of 5 in an accident. She is a tomboy. Rashid and Dilshad who are her Khala and Khalu have taken care of her from then and treated her like their own daughter. She was a topper in her class all her life in school and college. She is mostly seen in casuals and hardly wears girly cloths. She is lovingly called Tamatar by everyone.

"Najma, u sud not think of her n spoil ur mood," said Rehan wid a smile.

Najma too smiled.

"Our Rehan always manages to make our Tamatar smile," said Asad wid a smile.

"I don't like people who hurts people using their bitter truths. She only knows to hurt people," said Rehan.

Scene shifts to Asad playing basket ball on d ground along wid Ayaan, Rehan, Najma n some other boys. Asad is d captain of d basket ball team. Najma is also a part of d team as girls were allowed if they play nice. She loves to play basketball n some other sports. She is also a great player. Tanveer comes near d ground wid her friends. She smiles seeing Asad playing basketball better than d others. Asad then stops playing n goes at d side. He removes his t-shirt n drinks some water. He pours some water on his head n shakes his head. Tanveer drools on seeing him shirtless revealing his six-packs.

"Oh my God, he is lukn so hot," said Tanveer in an amazed voice wid a smile.

"Yaa Tanveer, his six-packs r very awesome," said Nuzhat happily wid a smile.

Tanveer gets annoyed.

"How dare u talk abt his six-packs so happily?" asked Tanveer annoyingly, "U don't dream of him. He is only mine."

"Okay," said Nuzhat meekly.

Tanveer always treats Nikhat n Nuzhat like her chamchis more than friends. Tanveer is lost in thoughts.

"Wat r u thinking, Tanveer?" asked Nikhat.

"I am thinking for auditioning for cheerleading team," replied Tanveer wid a smile, "In dat way, I can see my Jammy n attract him wid my hot n sexy moves."

"Wow, brilliant idea Tanveer," said Nikhat n Nuzhat 2gthr in amazement.

"Dats wat I am, brilliant n smart," said Tanveer wid a smirk.

Asad keeps his shirt on a chair n goes back to playing.

"He luks more hot while playing shirtless," said Tanveer in a dreamy tone.

Zoya n Humeira comes to d ground. They watch d game. They notice Tanveer n her friends standing some distance away 4m them but they ignores them. Asad sees Zoya standing wid Humeira n smiles. He had not noticed Tanveer n her friends. Asad stops playing n starts walking 2wards d people watching d game.

"I think he has noticed me n he is cumn to me," said Tanveer excitedly.

But to her shock, Asad went to Zoya n Humeira.

"Zoya, wen u came?" asked Asad wid a smile.

"Asad, I am also here," said Humeira.

"I mean wen u both came?" asked Asad.

"Just now," replied Zoya.

"Wud u like to come in d library?" asked Asad, "V r project partners na."

"Yaa sure," replied Zoya.

Asad wore his t-shirt n went 4m there. Humeira smiled while Tanveer got jealous.

"Asad remembered project after seeing Zoya," said Humeira wid a giggle.

She then saw Tanveer burning wid jealousy seeing Asad n Tanveer going 2gthr. Humeira smirked n went to them.

"Wat happened, Tanveer?" asked Humeira.

"Nothing," replied Tanveer annoyingly.

"Sumthn must hv happened," said Humeira.

"She is angry on seeing Asad n Zoya going 2gthr," blurted out Nikhat.

Humeira smirked as her doubt came true.

"Oh, dats d reason. Baby, he has not even noticed u n ur friends," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Why vl a hot guy like him notice an idiot?" asked Tanveer annoyingly.

"Dats why he did not noticed u," replied Humeira wid a grin.

Tanveer got irritated n went 4m there wid her friends. Humeira chuckled after they went.

Scene shifts to d corridor. Tanveer n her friends r sitting on a bench.

"Dis is not done. Jammy did not noticed me. He noticed instead dat behenji. Lets see how he did not notice me wen I become a cheerleader," said Tanveer annoyingly.

Scene shifts to Khan Villa.

Rashid n Dilshad r sitting in d hall watching TV.

"Rashid, our 3 kids r so much talented," said Dilshad.

"Asad n Ayaan wants to join me in business while Najma wants to become a fashion designer," said Rashid.

"Well, Najma vl at least do sumthn girly. All d time, she only acts n behaves like a boy," said Najma wid a laugh.

"But even boys become fashion designers," said Rashid wid a laugh.

"U don't tease my Tamtar ha," scolded Dilshad.

"Wat do u mean by my Tamatar? She is my Tamatar too," said Rashid.

"Yaa," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Romance started again," came Najma's cool n cheerful voice which shocked them.

She was standing in d doorway wid Asad n Ayaan.

"U besharam ladki, just shut up," scolded Dilshad.

Najma just laughed along wid Asad n Ayaan.

"Luk at ur Tamatar," said Dilshad annoyingly to Rashid.

"But u said dat she is my Tamatar," said Rashid wid a laugh.

Dilshad's mouth became shut while AsNajYaan laughed heartily.

Scene shifts to Farooqui Mansion. Gaffur n Razia r sitting in d hall.

"Gaffur, I am really worried for our Zoya. She is so sweet n naive. She does not say anything to Tanveer who always insults her. Her thinking is also too old-fashioned which I don't like. She don't wear modern clothes. She does not even talks to many people. I want her to join ur business n do MBA(Master of Business Administration) after completing her BBA," said Razia.

"I too want d same, Razia. She is wasting her talent n capabilities. She does not wants to study further after BBA. She says dat she wants to settle by marrying a boy of our choice n fulfilling all the responsibilities of a married woman," said Gaffur.

"Zoya has to change," said Razia.

"Do u remember? Wen Zoya was 10 n Tanveer was 8, my ammi's elder sister Haseena khala came to visit. She lived for 6 months. She was too old-fashioned. U n her used to hv a lot of fights as she wud try to always keep u in control. She even told u many times not to call me by name which irritated u so much. She loved our kids n used to spend a lot of time wid her. Still, Tanveer used to just play wid her toys n watch TV most of d times but our Zoya used to spend time wid her. Khala used to tell her so many things like how girls sud behave, dress, act n all. V did not paid much to it. But v never knew dat it cud change our Zoya so much. Earlier, she used to be strong n wud fight back Tanveer. But due to Khala's influence, she started wearing traditional clothes 4m then. V always thought dat she vl change but it did not happened till now. Its 21st century n Zoya sud live according it. I mean, I don't want her to be like Tanveer but she sud be like Humeira n Najma. From then, weneva Haseena Khala came Zoya hardly talked to us n spend time only wid her. She never liked u cuz v had a love marriage n ur were not type of girl she wanted to marry. So, she made one of our daughters like she wanted to be my wife," said Gaffur.

Haseena Khala

"I wish Zoya change one day. Dat woman has made Zoya into a woman which can cause problems for her. I really wish Haseena khala is never able to meet our Zoya again. But wat sud v do? She always comes evry n spoil our Zoya more n more," said Razia.

"V vl hv to keep Zoya away 4m her 4m now on," said Gaffur, "And for dat, v sud take helps 4m her friends. They all love her n wants her to change n become modern."

"U r right, Gaffur," said Razia.

Just then, Zoya entered d house.

"How was ur test, beta?" asked Razia wid a smile.

"Nice," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Zoya, vl u come wid me to shopping 2mrw?" asked Razia, "I vl buy u nice jeans, tops, t-shirts n dresses."
"Ammi, I don't like such clothes. Haseena khala says dat if hv to be better girl then u wear only traditional clothes," replied Zoya.

Zoya went to her room while GaZia r shocked.

"Wen vl our daughter change? She is still under Haseena Khala's influence. I hope she change one day," said Gaffur worriedly.

Tanveer entered d house.

"How was ur 1st dat at college, beta?" asked Razia wid a smile.

"Okay," replied Tanveer wid a smile.

"Its good dat u both sisters vl study in same college," said Gaffur wid a smile.

"Abbu plz, I did not joined dat college or BBA for her," said Tanveer wid frustration, "I joined it for myself."

Tanveer had joined college n BBA to be close to Asad. Dis is known only to her friends. Tanveer went to her room annoyingly.

Next day at college, there was audition for cheerleaders. Many girls including Tanveer, Nikhat n Nuzhat participated in dat. Many other students including Asad's gang were watching d audition on d ground. Tanveer was wearing a very short pink dress which showed her cleavage n a lot of portion of her body.

"Tanveer is also auditioning for cheerleading. Luk at her dress," said Humeira.

"Luks like vultures n crows hv designed her dress," joked Najma n laughed.

Humeira also laughed n hi-fived wid Najma. D girls r doing audition. Nikhat n Nuzhat also gave their audition. Now, it was Tanveer's turn. She walked boldly to give her audition n flew kisses at d audience. Asad's gang watched her wid puzzled expressions.

Precap: #Tanveer auditions on Zara Zara Touch Me song. She gets selected for head cheerleader much to everyone's shock.

#Tanveer trips Zoya making her fall down n insults her along wid her friends. Asad scolds Tanveer n helps Zoya get up.

#GaZia gets a call 4m Haseena Khala 4m Bhopal who tells them dat she is cumn to stay wid them for 2 months. GaZia r shocked as they r worried for Zoya.

#GaZia tells their problem to Zoya's friends Humeira, Najma, Asad, Ayaan n Rehan. Najma tells them a plan.

#Wen Haseena khala reaches Bhopal airport, 5 of them dresses up as fakir baba n tells her dat she sud return 4m where she came as it be bad luck for her. She gets scared. They also tell her not to contact wid any younger member of her relatives. She gets scared again n immediately books next flight for herself n goes. 5 of them smirks as she goes back in d flight. They tell it to GaZia thru phone who gets very happy.




PS: This is my first story outside the show so I asked 2 questions😊.

1. Which couple did you liked most? Rate by 1 to 5 and also comment on it😊.

1. AsYa(Asad-Zoya)

2. AyRa(Ayaan-Humeira)

3. NajHan(Najma-Rehan)

4. AsVeer(Asad-Tanveer)

5. RaDil(Rashid-Dilshad)

6. GaZia(Gaffur-Razia)


2. Which characters did you liked and hated the most?(One or more than one with reasons)



Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
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awesome updt juhi
Zoya is so naive
Bhaseena spoilt her brain
hated tanveer d way she insulted Zoya & hurt Najma
Dillu Rashid scene was nice
Guffi & Raz were tensed 4 Zoya
Tanveer gets selected in CL
precap is interesting
Tannu's dress was disgusting but hot😆

poll
all my points goes 2 Asya😆
Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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#96
Awesome
Coming to poll
Its obviously asya
N second I dont like tanveer
Plz update soon
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its Awsome

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it!
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nice update
thanks 4 pm
ofcourse asya are my favourie
and most hated character , there is tie between bhaiseena and tanu
and most loved one- Najma and Humeria
update soon
Edited by cale - 11 years ago
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Good really good nice written and ofcourse asya
Hate tanveer cause she's a b***h thanks for the pm
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Beautiful chapter.
I like Radil n Gazia most since its just a begininig of story. Asya, Ayra, Najhan right now they are just friends so Radil n Gazia comes first.
I hate haseena n tanveer.
Thanks for pm.
Update next part soon.

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