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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

⭐️ Sia ⭐️

lovely update 👏 😃

Neil ka pehla pyaar wapas aaya hai 😛
interesting...dekhte hai kya hota iss ka

Daijaan ne at last Tara se baat ki 😊

Neil -Jay ki friendship 😃 👏
acha start hai 😃

precap:
Meethi kaun hai 😊 ?
Plz update soon 😃



Thank my love for lking the write...Neil ka pb wahee janey😆
Yeh Daija is the only one left for Tar whom she can call as her person.

Neil-Jay are two ppl wud messed lives...
Meethi- read on😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

The phone rings..

"Hello" Neil answers.
"Hey Neil, its me Jay"Jay informs.
"oh hi Jay,..what up..is everything ok..? is Tara fine,.?."Neil inquires with a glint of concern in his voice.
"Hold on she is fine..I just called you abt this deal the company is gonna seal..can we meet?"Jay asks.
"Oh, that..yes of course..hm..tomorrow at office penthouse" Neil tells.
Jay hangs up saying"yeh that will do..bye cya there'

The next day Jay and Neil discuss abt the deal and its merits n risks..
As Jay leaves...Neil calls him..and asks ey Jay, I am going to the bar, you gonna come with me?'
Jay is taken aback by this..but yeh he agrees to go as its been a long time he had a friendly invite at the place by anyone..
Neil and Jay enjoy the bear at the bar...talking about deals, companies, cars ...they have a good time sharing events..
Neil leaves Jay at his place,...as Jay moves forth..he recalls something and goes to Neil...he is confused as to what Jay wanted to tell..
"Hey Neil, when is the next time?"
Neil at first puts a confused expression, but then realizes what Jay wanted to say...
"Very soon, I had a good time with someone sharing same interest as I do" Neil tells.



The next day Jay and Tara reach the court for the divorce proceedings filing petition for quick- mutual divorce starting with an appointment with the judge and their respective lawyers.
The judge asks Jay and Tara about what all has happened till now and how come they where kept in dark of this marriage...seeing details and the case the Judge gives a shocker that they can't just think marriage as some play..

She asks them to try and accept each other- they inform them abt how they where tricked into marriage which they never even imagined in their wildest dreams..



The judge asks them to try to stand each other and give the marriage a chance for the next 6 months, as they have already lived separately for 5months(which is needed for a mutual consent divorce petition as per the law..for the judge wishes to get a concrete reason to grant these two to stay separate and not knowing each other n getting married for father' wish was not that stronger for her to approve for their divorce ).. even after knowing that it was not exactly a complete marriage.. she asked them to honour Yash's wish - LAST wish for once.. and even after that they dnt jell up.. they are free to separate.. live together in one house for 6 months was the VERDICT.
The interregnum is obviously intended to give more time, thought and opportunity to reflect on their move..their decision...reconsidering or even seeking guidance and counsel from relatives/ friends in order to sustain their marriage. Tara felt that she was forcefully tied to a man she doesn't wish to live with,,,



Tara goes to the temple..her eyes search for the lady she met a coupe of times...there she sat on their spot...Tara goes to the lady and shares with her the news.
'I think jo hua acha hua..' says the woman
Tara is annoyed to hear this 'yeh kya kehri ho aap..meri jindagi yahan ek weird say mode say guzar rai hai and u say its good?'
The woman explains the young lady that its better to having come to a decision as all this go she was stuck..now she can stay stress free as she can get out of the unwanted relationship soon withiut any blame or guilt. its better for everyone..perhaps Jay too would get someone deserving as his bride. Its just a few months more she needs to bear all this




Tara had no choice but to follow it... she packs her suit case to head for Jay's home.
Tara is welcomed by Meethi.. she finds it weird a woman being so close to Mr serious.. who could she be.. is what she wondered.. Meethi warmly welcomes Tara with an arti and pulls Jay's leg.. seeing Tara's confused expression..

Jay clears her doubt that its his kid brother Adi's wife- Meethi.. she is kinda like a kid sister to him..What Tara found weirder was the house had only 2 people who lived in..and Adi would turn up every now n then.. she settles herself there.. seeing Tara try harder to settle.. he feels he have to buck up wid his plan now..



Precap:

She wakes up each day and never finds the man on the
She safely comes back to her room.. putting her hand on her heart..which almost skipped a beat. only one way to find the truth..only she can help me,!

Thanks for reading n lking the chapter.
regards
Sia


Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Chapter 9-part (b)


Present moment: When he thinks of how screwed up things have gotten lately, he remembers the day when he was nothing but another guy with no family, no job and even no experience except his hope and Mr. Ahuja's kindness... his mind goes back to those warm moments- a few years ago... when things where less complicated for everyone.

He wins the best businessman of the year award... it was his best accomplishment which he wished to share wid Yash..but he could only do it in his thoughts.. his homage to his mentor. Tara feels warmed up hearing Jay's dedication. She was proud of Jay for achieving what he always wanted to and of course he deserved it too.



Rp poisons Tara on how Jay is trying to woo her to get the complete hold over the property. Tara reasons RP's words from him..'why would Jay do anything like that..and I know he is dad's favorite and got to marry me on dad's wish..but he wouldn't do such an evil thing.'
Rudr gives her papers of funds transferred from his account...she is shocked to all that, she never expected that Jay would do this..she chooses to trust Rudr for the proof made it apparent that Jay was at fault and might still be playing around.



Neil takes time for himself and goes out of town..it was more than he could take..he needed sometime for himself for he lately realizes an unusual feeling of relief seeing Jay n Taara...and then seeing his lost love Chandra..though his mind said all this was a triick by the fate..but somewhere in his heart he felt liberated of something he dint want and what was it was beyond his realization.



Tara talks to her dayiji and new aunt at the temple about this..she puts forth her distrust in Jay.
Tara says 'And I thought daddy's choice was at least good for me..never expected him to chose a wrong guy for me..Jay was always so good to me and I never gave it a thought that he'd cheat me' she is hurt deeply.

They echo the same words that so long he has been a good guy, helped her, was a part of her father's life, supported him then and now is doing the same to her..he stood by her all the time..mostly in her challenges and if he had so much of interest in taking away the property he would have done it long ago,...he wouldn't even have waited for their marriage.
And most importantly he is her friend and husband, she must be knowing a bit about him by now..they ask her to recall the moments when she was in distress..

Still confused between Rudr's words and the proof he gave from the truth she knows of her husband...she then calls Fahim chacha and inquires abt this...Fahim tells that Jay doesnt need to take anyone's property when he himself has such established company and besides he is by birth super rich and claim it anytime he wishes..but the man never seek riches..but to prove himself to the world of his true worth...and mostly Rudr. He assurce her that Jay is a good guy as she thinks he is..and leave Jay n RP to their never ending fight saga for they have a very old history.
Tara renews her trust in Jay as she trusts Fahiim chacha's counsel and so her dayiji and her new aunt.



She wakes up each day and never finds the man on the couch..even on Sundays,, I mean Sunday..? where does he go so early..she wonders!
she wakes up having a sound sleep.. stretches..

She slowly sneaks out of her room and explores the whole place.. there ..it was a room with all the gym equipments.. as she leaves something catches her eye.. she observes a pair of bulging bicep with those bulky hands lifting the weights.. and there he was.. sweat gracing his body... it was sinewy.. with each lift those arms made.. the heat only got raised.. she saw herself gulping.. "wait what was she doing here.. drooling over her stranger husband's body.. what kinda of wife does that.. get a grip Tara.. u should bee ashamed of urself. " she bashes herself.

She brushes the thought and was abt to leave .. but the empty bottle near by falls down cause of her..she closes her eyes tightly...as she opens them..she cursed her clumsy behavior.. Jay suddenly comes out of his train of thoughts.. he gives a side glare back.. he finds someone moving.. and till he puts the weight down.. Tara escapes.. he could only see her hair disappearing from his sight.. he narrows his eye..and wonders what was she up to.. cleans his sweat with the towel .

She safely comes back to her room.. putting her hand on her heart..which almost skipped a beat.. no not at his manly structure.. but lolz.. but the fact that she was almost got caught red handed seeing her half nude husband working out!




She sees a different side of Jay.. he was so nice to MEethi.. their rapport was so adorable... so pure.. he is not that sadu after all..

Is Neil the right one who could really love Tara as he does? Jay thinks to himself. He gets the news from his spy of Neil's past, but couldnt track down the lady Neil was engaged to..but yes he does get the news of how Neil gets almost hit by a car chasing the woman he loved.




Precap:

He thinks "Was it all infatuation he had for her.".he didn't put any interest in their talks anymore.

Doc asks " How many months?"
He puts a question mark face..

The doc replies " pregnant wife?"
"Excuse me!!" He exclaims.

"yeh that's why your hear right?" The doc says




Thanks for reading the story..
Regards
Sia
Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Precap 😲 who is Pregnant? Tara or chandra or meethi I am confused
Neil is backing off now that he's got his first love bak.
He's so different frm rp who is selfish to the core.
I am glad Tara didn't fall for Rps lies daija and FC were there to guide her
Tara seeing jay work out 😳
Who can blame her for staring at that hot body
Now where is adi. Is it spoiled like as he was in the show as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part -a
⭐️Sia⭐️

Lovely update😊
❤️judge❤️
6 months ke liye Tara ,Jay ke ghar😃

Oh...too Meethi ,Adi ki wife hai😃

Precap...phir se latka diya😉
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
New PROMO

Tara and Jay...acquainted twosome...
Yash (Fate) brought them together playing around..pulling a few strings right...
They both tried hard to deny it, yet couldn't fight its forces...

They are obligated to stay together by law..their friendship was the best they had between each other..all they had was affable feel, a few arguments, a few boredom events..a few discoveries of each other's temperaments..a few pulls for eachother..what what exactly fate has for them...is still not known...
Being the man and wife..Jay and Tara are gonna know the reason for their union in this bond...



Look fwd to...

DM link:

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x21l2us_ebi-ff-malang_people

And

YT link:


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=udjpj-bN6G4&feature=em-upload_owner[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-b
⭐️ Sia ⭐️
Beautiful update 😃 👏

Homage to mentor👏
RP 😡

Tara ne correct decision liya 😃 Jay ko trust karne ka 😃

haay... 😳 hubby ko dekh wife ko kuch kuch hota hai 😳

(Hume bhi read kar kuch kuch hota hai) 😳

pregnant ? 😲 kaun ?? 😕

Plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️Sia⭐️

Promo☺️☺️
too hot😳

Waiting for update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsha

Precap 😲 who is Pregnant? Tara or chandra or meethi I am confused
Neil is backing off now that he's got his first love bak.
He's so different frm rp who is selfish to the core.
I am glad Tara didn't fall for Rps lies daija and FC were there to guide her
Tara seeing jay work out 😳
Who can blame her for staring at that hot body
Now where is adi. Is it spoiled like as he was in the show as well



u'll know soon😉 Neil is different indeed.
Its teh start of mriara attraction game..so keep readin.😃
Adi ka doubt u'll know..but since m leaving n abso no motivation left in writing i'll keep my ff shorter than tthe original concept I had.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Part -a
⭐️Sia⭐️

Lovely update😊
❤️judge❤️
6 months ke liye Tara ,Jay ke ghar😃

Oh...too Meethi ,Adi ki wife hai😃

Precap...phir se latka diya😉
🤗



Thanks for the comment sweety.😃.I so need to do the OUAP..I suck na!

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