MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Mahi 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and pm...Maan is serious about working...Mohinder is such a sadu 😡...poor Maan what an experience on the first day 😆...loved his nautanki and tapori dialogues at the college gate ❤️...Geet getting influenced by it and imitating him 😛..oh no her parents saw her 😲...what now..the volcano will erupt aur kya 😈...plz babaji save her...waiting to see what happens next..plz continue 😊
Thanks A Bunch
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Posted: 11 years ago
ek dam jhakas
kiya pharoo update
hai boss
geet ki tarha mein bhi maan ki copy kar rahi hoon
ohh god geet father hai ya koi hitler
zara si noice pai itna hangama
but very bad n rud
he should not said maan like this
itna parh k bhi kya faida jab asi bath karey koi
humra tapori majnoo geet k college mein
precape intersting hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow mahi ..what an update !!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Simply superb...! 😛

Maan apne tapori izzat ke kyaal se darraha hai,pinky mari tho...!😆


Geet's dad ek number ka shadist lagta hai...!😡


"MAAN SINGH KHURANA naam suna hai kya?" - nai suna!!!!!!!! 🤣

Apni geet bhi maan par fida hogai...! (hayee)


Geet maan ka dialogue practice karrahi hai!!!!!!!!!!!!😆 😉(dont worry beta tu bhi maan jaisi banjaogi jaldi 😆)

Adi Vs pinky ...!


do cont soon


love

Uma 🤣


P.S-sorry dear late comment! 😭



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
maan trying to do job..
handa..n maans meet ...lolz..
geet imitating maan n her parents r baffled seeing her changed avtar
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey @maahimaan..u r marathi kya..and this story is inspired by marathi movie timepass na..hehe maan in dagadu avatar and geet in prajakta avatar..nw mala ved lagale premache..lol awsme concept..and that naya hai wah was too..waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
hahahhahah ye tapori maan bahut mast hai!!!!
awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update loved maan style geet copying maan lovely mohindar& maan meeting lovely loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣
maan language n style
cant imagine msk like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
ur other maan will dyed if they saw him
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Posted: 11 years ago

please look image upper side


part 4


But thought of maan start to come in her mind she start to think about it her teen age ...she found it different from her house atmosphere , his careless nature , she always in tense in front of all how many time and for how many thing she want to protest but her nature not helping her ...she love dance but for parent she stopping herself

she just went to her singing class her meera di yes her teacher name , geet always feel like something wrong with meera di always find pain in her eyes , they just start singing but meera not happy with geet singing she stop her and ask

meera - geet tumahara sur accha nahi lag raha ,bahot rukha lag raha hai jaise koi bhaav hi nahi hai usmain ( your sining feel like without any emotion )

geet - means

meera - tum apne dil se gawogi tabhi wo mere dil tak pouchagi ( ehrn you sing with your heart than it will touch to my heart dear

geet make face and say nahi samje aaya di

meera just took deep breath and say ok you feel at singing time that some one face come in your mind ,if you fall in love than you should start to sing with heart

geet - nahi di

meera - koi bhi nahi

geet - mere liye ladka to mere baba hi doondege na

meera - ha tumare ghar main to tumare baba his sab taye karte hai na ( yes in your house your father only decided everything na )

geet found again pain in meera di eyes just geet want to ask but meera cut her and say look to your watch


geet just slap her forehead and mummer ab data milegi


other side maan just on cycle with geet so lovely atomsphear like winter and moist every wear he stop his cycle in front of geeet chawl when he use brake both body touch each other and red hu come on geet face , she just shyely look to maan and went to her house


maan just hold her hand but she say krupa kigiye (please )



thou maan don't get meaning of her word but he pull out his hand and say bye to her she just run away maan on bicycle all lost in geet just than someone tab on his shoulder with dreamy look maan look to back and froze there is skakal standing so closed to him he look like evil and shakal just slap him hard and maan come out from dream he is dreming standing on road geet house road


he just mummer ye shakal ki to main


just than he saw geet hurrely went to her house

geet took deep breath and entered in house


her baba and ma watching tv , she just put her bag and turn to go in kitchen


Mohinder - what is time


geet - ji wo 7 bajkar pandrah minute ( its 7.15)


Mohinder - 40 second its 7.15 and 40 second why you are late


geet - wo gaane ki kakasha main

rano - gaane ki kaksha main hi thi na

Mohinder - I don't like this , meera is your teacher only for SINGING not for other things , just make it sure ok

geet mummer in low voice - ji ( yes)

geet just went from there she feel bad she get scolding for 15 minute and 40 second late she look to one image and say bhiya app kab wapas aa rahe ho ...


other side near maan house adi just waiting to get one image of her ...he is waiting there from last one hour

near maan house maan went to meet his friends , he is in happy mood


Dagadu - kya baat hai ha


maan - tu to chup rehaneka sale ter waje se meri pitai hui hai apun bhoola nahi hai ( you just shut up because of you I get punishment by my father get it )



dagdu - abhi jane do na bhai



maan - maan just slap in his head and say tu kitna hatela hai mere ko history ke paper main geog ki copy de di fir to apun fail hona hi tha na


Dagadu - bhai kitani baar sunayega


next day geet parent went to shoping and geet alone in home , the though of maan start to come in her mind and he just stand in front of mirror rumal on her neck like tapori and saying

hum garib hui to kya hui hum dil se ammir hai hum kale hui to kya hua hum tere chaane wale hai arre hawa se , pani se , apen wife se puch hai kya id chalo ek ek karke sab side ho javo ,pado likho bade bano aur mar javo , are hum jiyenge apni marzi se , marenge tum per apni marji se chal hawa aane de( yes I am poor by wealth but I am rich with heart , yes ia m balck but iam your admired , didi you ask id to air water or your wife , one by one went aside , you lern write and bcome big man and die one day but iwill live with my own wish and died on only you let air come in )

and she turn and froze in her place , her parent standing there with shocking face like they saw some ghost

Mohinder - tu kya bol rahi hai


geet - wo wo she is so scared



Mohinder - with high voice kya geet



geet - hum garib (poor ) huai to kya hamari hrudaye (heart ) ki amiri (richness ) is aparampar( uncountable ) chalo hawa aane do



Mohinder - kaha se , hawa anne do kaha se , kya bhasha hai (language , kya culture ) just impossible you have to read good literature from tomorrow you have to go public library there is one book cinema ek shap ( crush)


precap

maan in library behind geet

now imagine what happen there 😃😉😆

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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