Updated part18 KRIYANSH SS Can a Stranger become the Love of your Life

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KRIYAANSH SS
Part 1
Hope u guys like it😊

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Someone was dancing with lots of energy but most of all he was dancing with joy.He kept on dancing until now. He wanted the music more louder! He grabbed the remote and changed it to full volume. Just when he was about to start his 15th song, (YES!15th song!He had been dancing for almost 3 hours.)his phone started to ring.😊
He picked it up and put it on speaker. It was from Swayam, his best friend and supporter. He took his water bottle and poured it on his face, flowing the water to his chiselled body while Swayam was talking.😳

"Rey, where the hell are u?!" asked Swayam😡

U guessed it right, that someone is our very own Reyaansh Singhania!

"What do u mean?When was this planned?" asked a confused Rey😕

"Rey! Am gonna kill u! Come to Starbucks now and for gods sake dont come sweaty- sweaty. I know u danced.. Go freshen up and see u here."said Swayam😡

"Woah, wait!'''Am gonna kill u''' this line. DOnt tell me that u have got Sharon affected on u! Anyways see u there."said Rey😛

"Shut up idiot" said Swayam and cut the phone😆
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Rey went to the washroom. He looked at himself in the mirror. Lots of things had changed.

Reyaansh Singhania was a 28 year old who was one of the world's biggest tycoon and India's one and only biggest buisness tycoon. He had always wanted to be a dancer but is dad hadnt allowed. Even though he had all the luxuries and riches, he wanted to start fresh! Become a dancer for starters but he couldnt. He had lost all his hopes but he hadnt stopped dancing. Swayam and Sharon were his best friends from childhood, both of them along with his college gang had opened an academy called D3 Academy.
It was super popular and contained all dancers whether poor or rich. Rey would go there many times and teach them. That was the only that made him feel better.
He didnt have a girlfriend nor a wife. No one was like him, no one. The girl who would be beautiful but pure at heart. Someone sweet and simple. Someone who couldnt see her friends hurt. He always thought," Will I get that someone special who would be the reason I live. The reason am alive." Rey freshened up and put on his casuals. He drived to Starbucks

"Hey bro!" Rey greeted

"Hello!" Swayam greeted back

"Where's your other half? Dont tell me she's still dressing up! Seriously by the time we're done she would enter." said Rey😛

"Well, My Siren's gone shopping with Simmi." said Swayam rolling his eyes.

Rey understood that look, Swayam hated being so fashionable and his Sharon was a diva!

"Anyways, what about u?Wait, Wait... your gay?! NO!!" screamed Swayam putting his hand on his forehead dramatically.😛

Rey nudged him and said,"Shut up yaar! I havent got my Ms. Perfect yet."

"Ya ya.. I have been hearing that from since umm..4-5 years!" said Swayam acting as if he was counting from how many years Rey had told the same answer.😛

"Dude!" shouted Rey

"Ok,Okay! You're done with the choreography?Tomorrow's the show!"asked Swayam

Even though Rey was a rich buisnessman and he couldnt be a dancer. He would never loose a chance to dance. He was also one of the owners of the academy.

"Yep!Done. They are gonna rock it." said Rey

Just then, they heard growling sounds. They were coming from Rey.

"Rey, u havent eaten a thing!I dont care but you are eating now." said Swayam

"Sorry yaar.. OK lets order. U are having something and dont even think of saying no." said Rey

"Cool" said Swayam

Swayam was about to call the waiter but then his phone rang, perfect timing from a perfect person, Sharon

"Rey,I'll be back. Sharon's call!" Said Swayam and left the cafe.

"Wow.. Sharon's perfect timing! I hate it!" Said Rey to himself😡

He called the waiter

"Yes sir, what would u like to order?" Asked the waitress

"Um... Am still thinking" said Rey

Rey asked the waitress one million questions! That was it, she couldn't bear one more question.

"Does this pasta have.." Rey started to ask one more question

"The hell! Shut up!if u didn't know what to order, why did u call me?" The waitress cut him off😡
"Excuse me, your job is to only take orders and answer the customers questions. Not anything else." Said Rey😡

"Whatever! Go get yourself another waitress." Said the waitress and left.😡

"U!" Shouted Rey
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That very moment, Swayam came back
"Dude, U didnt order anything?" Asked Swayam

"No. I didn't know what to order?" Answered Rey

"Oh god! Come on Rey, your acting just like my girlfriend! Diet problems and gaining weight!" Said Swayam

He called the waiter and gave orders for 2 cheese sandwiches and cappuccinos.

"Rey, I forgot to tell u we employed one more new choreographer and she's really good. Her name is Kriya. We'll meet her at 5pm that's in half an hour."said Swayam

"Cool! But for now my poor stomach is growling. What the hell did u order that's taking 1 hour!" Asked Rey

"Mr. Popular, hardly 5 minutes are over and u spent half an hour choosing what u want to order!" Said Swayam
Finally, their order came

Rey gulped down the sandwich hungrily. He looked like he hadn't eaten for days. No chew, nothing! He just put one whole slice in his mouth and finished it in seconds.

Swayam looked at Rey. He was shocked at the way he was behaving. Swayam couldn't stop himself from laughing. Rey's mouth was surrounded by tomato ketchup, his hand were slippery because of the butter and his nose had cappuccino dripping from it.😆

"Dude, go look in the mirror! Hahahaha.." Swayam said laughing. Swayam literally fell down from his chair😆
Meanwhile, a Rey wondered why was Swayam was behaving like that.
He went to the washroom and saw his face. HE LOOKED LIKE A COMPLETE JOKER!

"What the hell! How can the charming and hot Reyaansh Singhania look like a clown?!" Thought Rey

He washed his face and then Swayam and Rey left the cafe.
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Swayam drove to the Academy.

"Hello sir! " said someone

Rey and Swayam turned back to see whom she was.

"U! What the hell are u doing here?" Screamed Rey😲

"University Ji, u had to make me meet him. Ugh!" Screamed Kriya back😡

"Woah wait, u guys know each other?" Asked Swayam confused😕

"Yep, I know this waitress! Swayam how could u hire A WAITRESS?" Shouted Rey😡

"Waitress my foot! Don't u dare whatever crap ur name is." shouted back Kriya😡

"Now! Where the hell did the waitress come from?!" Asked Swayam😕

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Sorry for the mistakes guys.
Do hit the like button and comment pls
Jhootas and chapals welcome😳

Part 2

Part 3
Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110555601

Part 9
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110635077
Part 10
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110833712
Part 11
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111043352
Part 12
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111129760
Part 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111206508
Part 14
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111496203
Part 15
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4093804/updated-part18-kriyansh-ss-can-a-stranger-become-the-love-of-your-life
Part 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113812432


Part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4093804/updated-part18-kriyansh-ss-can-a-stranger-become-the-love-of-your-life


Part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4093804/updated-part18-kriyansh-ss-can-a-stranger-become-the-love-of-your-life

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start Diya dear...

loved it..
thanks 4 d pm
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Awesome start
Srsly kriyaansh nok-jhok is always cute to watch
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow girl wht a start
a smile is placing on my lips whole time reading this off
reyams convo was awesome
update soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was really amazing
Rey! Am gonna kill u! Come to Starbucks now and for gods sake dont come sweaty- sweaty. I know u danced.. Go freshen up and see u here."said Swayam😡

"Woah, wait!'''Am gonna kill u''' this line. DOnt tell me that u have got Sharon affected on u! Anyways see u there."said Rey😛

"Shut up idiot" said Swayam and cut the phone😆
I love this dialoge very much
N the way rey was eating was supar funny
Love it
Do pm me plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad that u guys liked it😊
Thx for the comments everyone!
Prachi : thx yaar.. Tujhe pehle baar hassi aai😛
Kriapatel: thx! Am glad u liked that convo😊
Raina: thanks! Will update it tom😉
RockingBharadwaj: thank u soo much! U read all my ss"s thanks for reading them and commenting😃
Ramya:thank u soo much😊
Alex: thx... 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woowww...
Nice start.. Rey the busness tycoon n a Dancer by hobby..
N kriya a waiters cum choreographer..
N their first meet as usual fyt..
Bt i did liked it..
Waiting for the next part..
Update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhu_ArSha

Woowww...
Nice start.. Rey the busness tycoon n a Dancer by hobby..
N kriya a waiters cum choreographer..
N their first meet as usual fyt..
Bt i did liked it..
Waiting for the next part..
Update soon :D

Definitely😊
Har roz update karungi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum start n continue soon n pm me
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wat a start😳
lovedd ittt😳
continue soonish😊

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