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Posted: 11 years ago
maine sirf yeh update padha coz u asked me so i know nothing about the story..😆
since i read this update..i loved the Brother-sis bond between raj and kriya..
and i hate you..i am missing MY brother now..😭 (he's in college...not dead 😛)
tu mast likhthi hai re..keep writing.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb jaanu
luv u
gonna miss u
these days gonna b hell without u
update was amazing full of twist emotional & love
next only kr plzzz
muah lots of huggies
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Posted: 11 years ago
diya maate aapke charan kahan hai???

ek aur twist..

rey and raj are best friends...

ye twists ka stock aata kahan se hai??

every update contains a big twist...

btw awesome update..

loved the bro-sis talk..

possessive rey was awesome...

lovely...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice upadte . Thanks for pm
tfs
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww so he's not dead😳
and he's rey's BF😲😕
continue soonish😊
and happy friendship day🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kya twist hai
Raj is alive
Kitne twist hai pata nahi
But update amzing
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww... DU finally m commenting...
Loved kri n rajs talking...
My god reys jealousy is xtreme...
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Posted: 11 years ago
arey ek baat tou bhul gayi welcum to India... in advance
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 13

Hope u guys like it!😊
Not promising that it will be amazing because I am not so well today but hope its good.
So here u goo...
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"My Sweet little baby sis, I know Rey. He's my best friend." answered Raj

"What the hell! I want to know WHY, Dont u get it!!" shouted Kriya, losing her temper now.
She was so confused how could her brother have Rey as his best friend.

"Okay okay, chill ladies!" said Rey

"Escuse me, U are a damn lady not me!! " shouted Raj

"Ugh, Sister and Brother are just the same - IDIOTS!" thought Rey

"Ok.. Here's the boring story...
Everyone thought I was dead. But I was alive, Mom and Dad didnt have patience to stay in the hospital. I was critical, my whole body was broken. After that accident, I was hurt badly both physically and mentally. After the declare that I was dead, my condition improved. Mom and Dad knew about my condition but then they didnt do anything. Slowly slowly, My condition faced ups and downs and atlast I was better. When I tried to return home, I was thought of being into ashes. I had no choice but to explore Mumbai by myself. I was used, tortured and broken just like u Kri. Finally, I met someone, someone who gave me a new life, who gave me education, who brought me up. That was Rey's dad. Rey and I became best friends from the day we met. Rey's craziness, sweetness and most of all dance skills gave me delight. That's the reason am alive today..." explained Raj.

Kriya was shocked, she didnt know her brother had been through the exact same situation like hers. Her one smile would make him smile, her one drop of tear, would make him sad... He was always there for her, every single time, every place she went. She dropped a tear from her beautiful brown orbs but it didnt reach the ground, it was caught, caught by her brother.

"Dont ever let them fall, they will make u sad but they will make double the times sad." answered her brother.

"God, seriously! This is just too emotional. Awwe how sweet, Ugh!!" cursed Rey

"Guys, drama done? Or do I need to open a drama company now as well with u both definitely as the chief owners!" said Rey with a disgusted look.
"Really? How about the name, Rey hates drama company?" asked Kriya

"U! None of your buisness okay!" shouted Rey

"Just shut your mouth! It stinks anyway. Hmmph" shouted back Kriya

" Ohh really? Dream on! I am the best, and Reyaansh Singhania never STINKS!" shouted Rey

"Woah, Dont open your mouth soo wide. The flies will get a charming entrance." shouted back Kriya

Raj looked at his sweet lil baby sister and his best friend. They were completely CRAZY!! He slapped his forehead and sighed.

"Guys done??" he asked politely then..
"Dammit u freaking idiots, just shut your mouth and come on!!" shouted Raj.

Both Kriya's and Rey's mouth closed, not a word coming out from them.

Raj smirked, this was one way both of them always shut up.

"Hey bhai!" greeted someone.

"Yo babe!" greeted back Rey

"Babe? Has to be the one and only- Sharon Rai Prakash!" welcomed Kriya

"That's good di, now get me a cappuchino without any fat." demanded Sharon, going into her diva mood.

Kriya rolled her eyes and said," Madam, am the bigger one here. Dont be so lazy, u need to look thin so WALK!"

They all laughed while Sharon's eyes opened wide.

"Here's your coffee princess but with extra fats!" said Swayam and gave the coffee to her.

"Extra fats! My figure Swayam, my ..." started Sharon

"My beauty, I will get pimples! I wont look beautiful! How mean Swayam!" everyone continued Sharon's most famous line.

"What the hell!!" shouted Sharon

While the others were laughing in madness, Raj and Swayam were on the floor, Kriya and Rey were banging on the table LAUGHING. Accidently their hands touched, sending
electric shocks to eachother, they knew who had touched them. Kriya couldnt help blushing, while Rey held her hand tight.

"This is what we call chemistry guys!" screamed Swayam and did the chemistry sign.

"Truth and Dare anyone??" asked Raj

"Bring it on!" agreed everyone.

The bottle spinned, the first round, the first spin, the bottle allowed Rey to answer while Sharon would question.

"Truth or Dare my devil?" asked Sharon

"Dare!" answered Rey

Sharon smirked an evil smile and dared Rey to," Rey, I dare u to take Kriya to a date in which u have to be romantic to her. I will be dressing her up and u know my

fashion sense, u will be completely bowled over. Challenge Accepted?"

"WHAT!!! THE HELL!" shouted Rey and Kriya both at the same time.

"Come on guys, your timing is also perfect. Its a dare Rey, Oops how could I forget your a complete coward to do that." said Raj smirking.

"BHAI!!!" shouted Kriya, blushing.

"Yes or a no? I might tell u to kiss Kriya next so better choose this one." challenged Sharon

"NO NO! Pls! I agree." agreed Rey

"Perfect! Rey you are gonna die." said Swayam, laughing.

"I so hate u Shar, no wait MONKEY WITH A RED NOSE!!" shouted Rey
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REY'S P.O.V

Rey stood in front of the mirror, checking if he looked okay. He thanked Sharon for daring him to go on a date with Kriya. Finally, he could spend time with her. He loved her! Yes, Rey finally accepted that he loved Ms. Kriya Ghai.

Who wouldnt love her, she was fun, sweet, helpful, caring, the perfect girl next door. He had worn a black shirt with a few buttons open, which made everyone wanna have a peekabo at his body. He finished the look with high tops and spikes in his hair.

Girls were going to drool, boys were going to be full on envy but now, Rey was getting damn nervous, his heart was beaping slowly, his head was praying for the date to go well, he was
too scared.

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KRIYA'S P.O.V

Kriya stood in front of the mirror, straightning her dress. She knew her sisters taste was too girly but she never expected her to make her wear a FREAKING DRESS!!!

Fine, she wouldnt have minded a dress touching the ground but a dress ABOVE HER KNEES! Seriously!! She couldnt even wear tights, it was soo short.
Kriya was wearing a backless purple dress with a studded bow and purple pumps. This was one more thing Kriya got irritated about, high heels!! Shoes were more comfortable and now make up!

Her eyes were full of lavender, making her eyes look beautiful and she wore a pink sparkly lip gloss. Kriya could only be described with no words now! Stunning, beautiful, breathless, all these words were just too less to describe her.
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AT THE VENUE:

Both of them reached the restraunt at the same time. Raj was right, they both had the perfect timing. Girls started to drool, boys started to feel hot! They entered :

Kriya Ghai and Reyaansh Singhania both looking smoking hot!!
No matter how amazing they looked, both of them were nervous. They were friends but at as a date was just too wrong.

Rey pulled a seat for Kriya just like a gentlemen.
They talked and talked but it never turned to the romantic mode.

Just then, the music started, everyone started swinging their bodies, the dance floor was full. A girl came and asked Rey for a dance. Rey agreed hoping that Kriya

would get jealous and scream at the girl but nothing happend. Rey just went and danced with that girl feeling disheartened. Little did Rey know, that Kriya was

jealous.. She was damn jealous, from so long she was shooting daggers at that girl, her hheart wanted to kill her, Kriya, she was the one who had the right to dance

with Rey.

Finally, she couldnt stop herself anymore. She was just too angry for words, she marched to the dance floor looking like an angry bull. Smoke shot out of her ears, her

eyes went red with anger, her wrist was turned into a tight ball.

She went to them and pointed at the girl and said," U buzz off!"

"Why should I? Is he your boyfriend?" the girl asked.

"Yes, he is! Now buzz off!" shouted Kriya

Rey was so happy listening to the words boyfriend. He was glad that Kriya liked him too, she was possessive for him, she felt jealous for him. He was just happy out of

no bound, he was on cloud 9! It was a total mix of happiness that couldnt be even explained!!

"U, dream on! He agreed to dance with me so now he is mine!" shouted the girl

Now Kriya had had enough," YOU FREAKING GIRL! HE DID IT TO MAKE ME FEEL JEALOUS, GET THAT! HEs MINE! AND NOW JUST BUZZ OFF OR I SWEAR I WILL KILL U SO DANGEROUSLY THAT EVEN YOUR PLASTIC SURGEON WILL GIVE UP SURGERY!!" shouted Kriya

"Crazy woman!" answered that girl and left.

Kriya looked at Rey while Rey smirked. He gripped her waist as tight as a snake and pulled her close to him. Kriya felt his body, she allowed her hands to hold his

neck. Rey moved in and kissed Kriya on the cheek leaving Kriya shocked. Their breaths were smoky, their faces were just a centimeter apart, their hands covered the

other.

"Kriya, I wanna tell u something. I..." started Rey

"I what Rey! Just tell!" shouted Kriya.
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PROMO: WILL REY TELL KRIYA I LOVE U?
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Hope u guy liked it!
As I said, my heads spinning so not sure if its good.
Pls do comment and like!
Jhootas and chappals welcome!!😊
Edited by diyaswaronholic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
amazing queen of twist
KR atlast ek ho jaane ge agar aap chaho gi
to aap batao rey will confess or not
sharon was 4 u
u r like her only noop correction u r only shron lol...
&
luvd dway how kriya got jealous & d catfight
mindblowing
Edited by SweetDevil_KR - 11 years ago

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