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Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 6

Am sorry guys, I just hope u like this chapter..
I've a headache and a bit feverish so am not sure if I matched this part up to your expectations. Do tell me how it is..😕
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KRIYA'S P.O.V

Kriya walked to her locker in the academy. Drops of sweat covered her face indicating that she had just danced. She opened her locker and was shocked to see a gift there.

" What is this doing here? It's not even your birthday Kriya beta." She thought.

She took the gift out and after a long time, wondering whether she should or not. She opened the gift out of curiosity. She tore the wrapper and stuffed it in the trash can. There was a message stuck on the gift, she pulled it out and started reading...
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Wondering who had given u this when it's not even ur birthday? It's from your secret admirer...
Well ms. Ghai from today there won't be one moment, one minute present when u won't feel special. Here's your first gift and you're not saying the 2 letters 'NO'. Have u checked the gift? I bet u haven't, here's something which gives u a clue about it:

U run away from everything! From your charming smile to cherishing every moment of your life. U just run, run and RUN! Your past is horrid but this is life! It teaches u everything, problems, bad moments, good moments and so on... All I can say is Be a Dancer, Live your dream! And these will definitely help u...

P.S. This is just the first gift, there are many left.

Love,
Your secret admirer!
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Kriya was shocked out of no bounds reading this message. Seriously, why did her life give her so many heart attacks! And this time it was related to her past. Her past, her identity which was unknown to everyone except this one person. Who the hell was this person? How in the world does he know about her?!
Kriya finally opened the gift, they were dancing shoes from Skippers- the best shoe company in the world! They were extra stylish! The shoes were silver in colour with purple spikes with each edge having a 4 letter word - "DIVA" . These shoes took Kriya's breath away! These shoes were even better than what she had always wanted! She hugged them tight as if she would never leave them. She hastily removed her sands to try on her brand new shoes. She kickied the sandals away.. And jumped up and down just like a kid wearing her brand new sparkling shoes. Kriya forgot all her confusion, all she remembered was her new found happiness and the reason was her SECRET ADMIRER...

"Thank u god!" Shouted Kriya looking up..
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REY'S P.O.V

Like always Rey's two eyes were just on his angel. He felt like screaming in joy when he saw his angel loving his gift but for now all he could do was smile in glee and stare at his angels cute antics from a cupboards peep hole. Yes, Rey was sitting uncomfortably in a cupboard just to see his Kriya's reaction...
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FLASHBACK
Rey entered the girls locker room cautiously. He kept on praying and hoping that no girl would see him.

"Oh god, this is so embarrassing... Iss ladki ne Reyaansh Singhania ka satyanash kiya! Ab main uske liye James Bond bhi ban Gaya!" Thought Rey

Rey walked to Kriya's locker and kept the gift inside. Just then he heard someone coming, he checked 2-3 times whether the gift was PERFECT and easily visible. He slammed the locker door and ran as fast as wind to hide. If anyone would have seen Rey they would have surely thought there was a fire in the BUILDING! Rey found a cupboard and sat there waiting for the locker room to get empty!

FLASHBACK ENDS
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Rey had no idea he would get to see his angels reaction on his gift.
"This was just the first gift baby but watch out, ms. Ghai! There gonna be more." Thought Rey
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AFTER A FEW WEEKS

KRIYA'S P.O.V

Every day Kriya would get something or the other special from her secret admirer. Sometimes, she would find shoes,dresses,lockets and so much more but the best thing she ever got was his love and his encouraging thoughts for her. Her happiness was returning and her past fading...
Her writings had changed! She felt like the happiest girl in the world! All she wanted now was to meet this person who had become special for her
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REY'S P.O.V

Being a secret admirer, Rey had seen Kriya's smile back. Rey was really happy that his plan had clicked. HE WOULD ALWAYS MAKE HIS KRIYA FEEL SPECIAL! ALWAYS!
He proceeded to the fitness room, he had to wrap more gift for his angel and write more messages to make her feel more and more special each day. Her smile was the only thing that gave relief to his heart! Her laugh was his new ringtone!
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KRIYA'S P.O.V

Kriya needed to warm up, she grabbed her water bottle and towel and walked to the fitness room. On her way, she remembered the messages her secret admirer had sent to her.. Her most prized possessions:-

Hello princess,
Always live your dream! You've been through too much but for now I'm there for u. My main priority is to see that smile on your face which makes u beautiful. Forget your problems, your past! You live in the present and you will be the inspiration in future...
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Now is the time! The time to move on... I am your supporter, encourager or anything! Learn the four letters LOVE, they are just four letters but they mean a lot! Hurt a lot! But it's one of the thing which teaches u how to live! How to become strong! And I believe that u will get your second half soon, he's somewhere here only but it's up to u to find him...
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Dil, dost and dance! They are the main things about our life. Yes, both of our life! Am a dancer too. You lost everyone but there are still many people who care about u! Dosti, we are already friends.. You've Sharon and Swayam too. So my baby, love in the present and enjoy every moment of it.. U live only once so better cherish this life..
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I bet you've heard this:
Without bad times there's no good time.
So baby doll, you've been through a lot and definitely in future there's nothing but happiness for u!
-/-
By now Kriya had reached the fitness room. She didn't even realize that this guy would make her go mad! She went inside the room and saw Rey covering a gift with the exact gift wrapper like her admirer and even sticking a message on the gift.
"Wait! Wait! Is Rey my secret admirer?" Thought Kriya
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PROMO: WILL REY TELL HER THAT HE IS KRIYAS SECRET ADMIRER?
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Hope u guys liked this part
Am really sorry if I couldn't live up to ur expectations, as I told before I have a headache and am a bit feverish but still didn't want to dissapoint u guys by not posting.
Chappals and Jhootas welcome
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u soo much guys for all your love and support!
Am glad u liked that part😊
Thanks for spending time and commenting! But most of all reading!
Thank u once again🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Supab update
Kria's smile is returning
N her cute actice on wereing shoes was so lovely

"Oh god, this is so embarrassing... Iss ladki ne Reyaansh Singhania ka satyanash kiya! Ab main uske liye James Bond bhi ban Gaya!" Thought Rey

This dialoge of rey make me laugh her
It was so cutely sweet dialoge
I so love this dialoge
N rey nee 2 bar kria ko baby n 1 baar baby doll bola
Haayyy me mar jawa
Itna cutely bolana kipuchhohi mat
N then precap kria rey ko gift wrap karte dekha leti he
Hope use itna jaldi na pata chale ki wo rey he
Thoda suspension bana rehega
N make kria fall 4 rey not 4 her secret admire
Plzzz do it soon
Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the chapters..its amazingly beautiful.
Rey cares a lot fir kriya...n I love him for that..for making my angel smile.
Waiting for the next chapter..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dramaqueen headache main bhi itna achha likhti ho great!!!! I'm proud of u for this :) now coming to update this is great ohh rey as secrete admire great oops rey caught rey handed I think rey have to tell her d truth cause I went she fall for rey not for a secret admirer love prachi
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
amazing update
love rey being the secret admirer
can't wait to see if she put to two and two together
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum blossom update... kria gets to know abt her secreat admirer... Good going... Continue soon...
N get well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update diya...

finally kriya is happy..

james bond bda achha lga mujhe..
thsnks 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..

loved it..

so sweet of rey...
he is doing so much for kriya..

but wait..
kriya saw rey

excited to know what's gonna happen in the next part..

nd u just take care of yourself..
health comes first..
get well soon.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey u r having fever & headache then also u wrote
it was awesome
atlast she is 4getting her past
& atlast kriya ko pata challa rey hai
bus rey confess kardey
i want sum romance too
but when u will be fine
& get well soon

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