Updated part18 KRIYANSH SS Can a Stranger become the Love of your Life - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago
baby u did got comments.
U updated on pg 58 n now u have reached till 61
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey ausome update...

Loved it...

Rey making Kriya jealous...

ShaRey scene...haha...lols...

Mast update...

Write soon...

Sorry for late revieew...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i like challenging
nice update
ab jaldi se update dena choti
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Posted: 11 years ago
M so Sry diyu
N I mean it
Maaf krde plzzz
😭
Coming to d update till 4 parts
It was amazing
Rey n kiya
'1st meet waitress n customer🤣
Challenging each other...
DAT too kriya dancing on kamali 😳
N tie toh hoga ...akhir best dancer joh hai

Kriya is Sharon 's sis n her past...
Curious to know
Chalo diyu ek dam mast epi likha hai... Agree ka comment baki ke update padh kr deti hu

I think rey KO pata chap jaate ga abt kriya's past
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwieee so sweet
Rey doing all dis for kroya making ng her happy
By giving gift ,msges
Making her feel special
Secreat admirer



Diyu Sach mein its fabulous
Sry for. Hurting u :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling very pity for Rey
Bt mxt kriya only offered him to be friend... Well very interesting
N now whose dis guy... I think becuz of him only kriya is in dis state
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hawww
Diyu

Kriya ka rape...aur kitna jhela hai usne?
Itne saare twist.
She don't got justice.
Bt I bet Rey will killed DAT guy AGR woh nahi toh mein maar dungi
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing read it in full one go !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresed on pg 60
Sorry main bhul hi gayi thi ki tune update kiya tha
Ab next update jaldi do
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Posted: 11 years ago

KRIYAANSH SS PART 16


Heyya guys,

Here's an update!
Really sorry about my spelling errors.
Hope u guys like it!
This ones dedicated to my Raju di!
So here u gooo

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"God, what do I do now? This girl just surprises me every single time! She's a complete package of drama plus twists! Geez! Please atleast this time let me win, she has always shocked me but for this time please please let her remain shocked!" Prayed Rey, staring at the open sky.

Kriya was full of surprises, who knew that a girl like her had been through such a dark past but still leaving a smile on her face. She was strong and losing was definitely not in her blood. Whatever Rey thought, every single time she reacted just the opposite or at times, she used a completely different theory. She never gave anyone a break from her shocks nor did she give them a chance to get bored of her twists. She was just perfect!

The tactic had to work today, he had to win today, he had to kill Kriya's heart today.
He kept on strolling on and on, his mind working on how to make Kriya fall for him in just one day.

"Yes!" He jumped, shouting..
He know how to get Kriya crazy for him.

"Kriya Ghai, get ready for a do or die challenge!" Murmured Rey

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"Girls and Boys, here's a treat for every dancer. We get to watch, Reyaansh Singhania dancing!" Boomed the speakers.

Every girl, every boy rushed to the stage, Rey's dance was always a sight to watch. It was always the best. No one could challenge him nor win from him and if he did hip hop then god save the competitor. He or she will only loose.

The crowd turned restless, choruses screaming for Rey begun, every pair of sparkling eyes waiting to see him in action, every pair except one. That one pair knew it was a challenge for her, every tactic of his contained even a slight bit of challenge. No matter what happened, she would try her best to win and shock Rey as always. The man she loved would have to work hard to win her, to force her to say those 3 words which her heart felt for him.She waited, wondering what Rey's next tactic would be...

Lights dimmed, the stage glowed with happiness, the music strolling with rhythms, the dance attracting every blind. Reyaansh Singhania came up, wearing jeans and a black vest, his muscular body revealed, forcing every girl to drool.

His feet shuffled, his hands waving through, his eyes challenging that one soul to prove herself. His hands locked themselves, allowing his legs to leap off the air. His head moving towards the side, his body rolling into a ball.

Stunts came all over the place, his back flips , his splits forced everyone to stay rooted at the spot. He climbed up the rope, rolling with it, swinging as fast as he could. He walked with attitude towards Kriya, his face challenging her, every movement proving himself.

That was enough, Kriya couldn't act like a coward anymore. She braced herself, doing a somersault in the air, her stunt as sharp as a blade.

She rested her palm on Rey's chiselled muscular body, waving her body, demanding her right on him. She snaked his hands around Rey's neck, his hands gripping Kriya's slender waist, Rey lifted Kriya in the air, allowing Kriya to pose with attitude, giving every one breaking news that THE Reyaansh Singhania was only Kriya Ghais.

Kriya ran away from him, being followed by Rey, his hands pulling her back, dashing her against his breathtaking mesmerising chest. Their beautiful orbs glued to eachothers, their bodies moving in one motion, their two souls becoming one.

Rey picked Kriya in his arms slowly and comfortingly, Kriya allowed her creamy legs to revolve around Rey's waist, their breaths came closer, their lips just centimetres apart, they forgot where they were, they were just together, they were one.

Everyone remained speechless, the scene was just too shocking to digest for them, every mind thought only one thing, WHAT THE HELL!?

Meanwhile Kriya interlocked her soft,rosy lips with Rey's mesmerising loving lips,her hands brushing through Rey's jet black hair, both of them feeling eachother, their love being displayed in front everyone. The lights lay off, the stage blushing deep red, their tongues enjoying the every sweet, spicy little taste.

"These two are crazy!" Answered Sharon, glaring at those two.

"Uhuh, aren't u crazy for me my siren, Sharon?" Asked Swayam, smirking

"Shut up Swayu! Now help me get them off." Declared Sharon, her cheeks turning deep bright red.

"Your wish is my command baby!" Answered Swayam, his glittering eyes absorbing her smile

Swayam ran to the control room and grabbed a microphone," Ahem, Ahem. I request Mr. Reyaansh Singhania and Ms. Kriya Ghai to find a room to do all this and with their kind permission can we allow the crowd to disperse." Requested Swayam, his eyes teasing his 2 best friends.

"Shit!" Shouted Kriyaansh

"It's all because of you, you freaking line cutter!" Shouted Kriya, shooting daggers at Rey

"Oh really? Who kissed me first with those beautiful lips huh?" Questioned Rey

"U challenged me and u think I won't complete it!" Dared Kriya

"Definitely a big no!" Answered Rey

"U...!" Started Kriya, pointing her finger at Rey

"Woah u two idiots, enough! Now please may I know whether u both love each other?" Asked Raj

"What? Me and him? Not even a chance!" Answered Kriya, smirking

"What the hell!" Shouted Rey

"Mr, wait and watch! U aren't gonna get your baatcutter so fast." Murmured Kriya and ran away before Rey could even get a word.

"Shar, my jaan please help me na" pleaded Sharon, pouting

"Oh really? What will I get then?"asked Sharon

"Fine, whatever u wish! But I want my baatcutter!" Demanded Rey

"U are on! Now see what I do..." Said Sharon

"Am sorry di, but this time u are facing the diva, Sharon Rai Prakash!"

"We will see Shar!"

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PROMO:- SHARON RAI PRAKASH AND KRIYA RAI PRAKASH, WHO WILL WIN?

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So that's a wrap!
Hope u guys liked it.
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